VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.205b] [Lust & Passion]

[WhiteWolf619]

THIS!

This my friend, it's 300% times hotter than what we've got...

Thanks mate.
Yeah it felt more forced with the guys and even when she showed her breast i was actually regretting the decision i wanted her to just run away. I was uncomfortable with the whole thing.

 

[ReTroJackOne]

The developer is a stupid and greedy person, five months have passed from version 0.150 to version 0.161, and the content in the game has increased by an hour and a half. With some fright, the developer decided that he could cut more money by making two games out of one, he did not finish the story in the original game version 0.150 ends with nothing, there is no ending in the game. But version 0.161 is already the second part, why on earth to cut off more money on patrion. So also forces us, the players, to do his own work, according to the developer, the transfer of saves is the work of players and patrons, and not himself, for a word against he decided to start banishing people, bravo. For me, the game is dead, if you respect yourself, then just forget about this piece of program code, the developer will continue to delay the development time in the hope of cutting more money from the patrons. For me, the last nail in the coffin of this game was an attempt to force me to do the work of the developer of this game, namely, they pick at the game code with their own hands when transferring saves from version to version, it's a shame. A person has done nothing in total for five months. This game is dead. I've been watching this game from the very beginning for 5 years and the only thing that is replenished is the bank account.

 

[JorellMartis]

Send the Android version

 

[TomUK]

Thanks mate.
Yeah it felt more forced with the guys and even when she showed her breast i was actually regretting the decision i wanted her to just run away. I was uncomfortable with the whole thing.

You did have the choice to run away right at the start and again when you get the 3 options whether to show her tits, let them fondle her or try to get away, which would have ended with them blocking her and she gets her 'mace spray' out and Aiden tells them to let her go.

 

[WhiteWolf619]

You did have the choice to run away right at the start and again when you get the 3 options whether to show her tits, let them fondle her or try to get away, which would have ended with them blocking her and she gets her 'mace spray' out and Aiden tells them to let her go.

Yeah i know i am just saying the scenes with her doing the things she did weren't erotic they felt forced and uncomfortable.

 

[ineg]

PLEASE help me because I am a regular player of your game but I do not know how to enter the new update and I am very upset about this I have not seen a new update at all. please help me with 1 video how to enter the game or something simpler that I can not understand. please help me

 

[TomUK]

PLEASE help me because I am a regular player of your game but I do not know how to enter the new update and I am very upset about this I have not seen a new update at all. please help me with 1 video how to enter the game or something simpler that I can not understand. please help me

You need to play through part one and get a special save at the end which you then use to get into part 2.

 

[ineg]

You need to play through part one and get a special save at the end which you then use to get into part 2.

ok but I play it every time and in the end it does not give me something like that

 

[colt95]

fk this blackmailing path i dont like that but i dont know why devs are not following other paths too like where is the school teacher the janitor or sams father etc? they are just focusing on that mf aiden sht...

 

[Ruby Tuesday]

Mini Review 0.161
Rather than a monologue, I divided into 3 categories, dismissing the Morello option.

Art/Location
Use of perspective, location, entrance, shots of stair walk, posture, expression, use of colour/tone/light, costumes, angles (Sophia's figure unquestionably stunning).
9.5/10

Erotic
Sense of tension, danger, humiliation, voyeur, tactile, subjugation. Although (highly) sexually charged throughout, I think an erotic strip-tease might have been a better choice. Following Aiden's continuation to humble Sophia, the flashes and groping felt more like schoolboy fap fantasy.
8/10

Text/Storyline
Still work to do on translation and text, but leaps ahead in terms of progress. A brave, strong and plausible storyline matching excellent imagery. Once again it felt underdeveloped but that's this dev's style, keep players wanting more and returning.
8/10

Summery
A near perfect piece within the multi-layered AWAM jigsaw. Confirms L&P in another category, light years ahead of the competition. Highly likely to increase patron numbers, increase business and putting fears of abandonment on hold.

Finale.
Constructive comments/criticisms welcome, but please keep it polite and don't simply mock or jeer at these, or other people's personal opinions.
Thanks guys.

 

[Milo009]

Yeah when a creator releases a part 2 of a game that wasn't finished and requires saves from that unfinished version I played through and deleted. What are these guys thinking

 

[Ruby Tuesday]

Thanks Jack!

 

[Oberlix]

You can't make it any more complicated, can you

 

[Alley_Cat]

So I played all three of the gang scenario and also the Dom Morello paths, I think they were all quite good, just hoping the Don Morello path doesn't become boring now Aiden is out of it, I also see there is still no update for the boarding school option, which is a shame, hope there will be something in the future for that path as well.

Next update is a Dylan event for those playing the boarding school path

There's nothing for a pure lesbian patch in this version too? Just a normal day again? At least I could write in the changelog "in this version something will start to happen for those who made a pure lesbian path".

Any lesbian content this update?

Wont be for this entire playable day. Next version worth playing probably wont be until v.200, which might not come out for a number of years.

hi folks, i'm new to this game and need a bit help. i'm confused about the quote here that says there are only two 100% lesbian routes but the walktrough is for Ellie/Patricia. that leaves the question open is patricia really an lesbian path or is their a dick involved?

is this the ellie patricia route or the ellie sophia route?

Technically it probably would be better to say it's for Sophia/Ellie and Sophia/Patricia. I also occasionally call it the Lesbian route walkthrough, but even that isn't entirely accurate since dicks are shown during the path.

Why is seducing men part of the lesbian path? That makes no sense.

Because it's not actually a lesbian path, and was never intended to be. But I have had some interest in creating a version of the game that would be, taking out the necessity of scenes like flirting with the movers, Larry in the prison event, Logan and co in the sauna, etc. Feel free to PM me if you're also interested

 

[jonnybravo11]

sophia this day theme (whatever fucking day )imo with most male characters
- bare breast and pantee exposure
- groping ass and boobs - clothed and bare
- kiss with dylan maybe as special event 2
boring

interested in amber dylan scene tho

 

[Jack Adams]

Thanks Jack!

I have maintained for some time that L&P has his vision for his art, and the rest of us can only judge it by what has been presented to us so far. It is easy to fall into drawing a conclusion about what is partially seen, and in many cases with this higher reasoning facility does us good service. Sometimes it runs us merrily down the path to a wrong conclusion before we experience the end. Some artists do this on purpose to get us to consider. A good example of this is Jim Stafford's song, My Girl Bill.
I believe that we all agree that the pace in which this project is being released could be improved, with many saying improved significantly. When we couple the ire we feel for the slow progress of the work we can also grow impatient with the creative aspects of the work itself (which is often demonstrated in this thread). Although this is irrational, the cause for the pent up ire is very real, and understandable.
This is all a long-winded way of saying that I appreciate it when someone takes the time to break down the review aspects pragmatically, rather than emotionally.
Jack.

 

[Turret]

Mini Review 0.161
Rather than a monologue, I divided into 3 categories, dismissing the Morello option.

Art/Location
Use of perspective, location, entrance, shots of stair walk, posture, expression, use of colour/tone/light, costumes, angles (Sophia's figure unquestionably stunning).
9.5/10

Erotic
Sense of tension, danger, humiliation, voyeur, tactile, subjugation. Although (highly) sexually charged throughout, I think an erotic strip-tease might have been a better choice. Following Aiden's continuation to humble Sophia, the flashes and groping felt more like schoolboy fap fantasy.
8/10

Text/Storyline
Still work to do on translation and text, but leaps ahead in terms of progress. A brave, strong and plausible storyline matching excellent imagery. Once again it felt underdeveloped but that's this dev's style, keep players wanting more and returning.
8/10

Summery
A near perfect piece within the multi-layered AWAM jigsaw. Confirms L&P in another category, light years ahead of the competition. Highly likely to increase patron numbers, increase business and putting fears of abandonment on hold.

Finale.
Constructive comments/criticisms welcome, but please keep it polite and don't simply mock or jeer at these, or other people's personal opinions.
Thanks guys.

A very rosetinted review, I am afraid!
On the Art I agree with you, it was always Lazy & Poncy´s strong point. There is no doubt that he is great with picture composition. The 9,5 is about right.

Erotic is very much in the eye of the beholder. You even said it yourself and we already have several fan scenarios for the meeting which are ahead in erotica of what L&P delivered. Your 8 is too high, I find a 6 the upper(!) range.

Pardon me, but on the point of storyline you dropped the ball. Just a remark for the Morello paths: In what universe is getting into cahoots with "La Familia" a good idea? Aiden with his great connections might be a bit more influential than your average Town Bully, but he is a temporary and local problem. He can be handled and a real filthy/corrupted Sophia could take advantage of Aiden, if she really wanted to. A "favour" to a Mafia Don is something which will never go away and will become a millstone around your neck over time.
And even on the non-Morello/Aiden continues paths the meeting is, as you wrote yourself more a school boy fapping fantasy than anything else. Your 8 is way too high, the storyline of this update is a 3 at best!

Summary: A short and mediocre update, which is compounded by an abyssally slow development cycle. Three renders per day is his current output averaged, a joke, even if all the work around it is measured in. Nobody in his/her right mind can realistically see this VN finished at this crawling speed! The only thing L&P is "lightyears" ahead is how to string along gullible patrons and how to plant shills in various Fora.

 

[Hovis1974]

Relax guys, development started just 5 years ago. Be patient.

LOL I agree, The next Elder Scrolls game takes less Development time than this Work of Art

 

[Pinsel]

is there a Bug or what? After Dylan/Elli and Christine leave for the diner (in the last update). Now Mom come home and relax on the sofa. And that is it. 3 pages text and one render, ONE ,are you for real def?

 

[Kai Andersen]

It seems to me that the game is gradually turning into a "soap opera", and I look at it with sadness.