- Sep 27, 2017
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This is what's known as erotic writing, with the type of Aiden that the story seemed to be progressing towards. It has shades of Anais Nin. L&P has, (temporarily?), stopped this kind of thing in favour of kids who want to wank, because as we all know, there's not enough porn that appeals to young people in the games pantheon???Me personally for this last scene i would have had Aiden and Sophia alone, and Aiden gets Sopia to strip leaving on her panties then have him stand up and walk around her admiring her, maybe have him run his fingers across her back sending a tingle down her spine, then have him run his fingers down one of her breast and pinch her nipple then move his hand down her stomach and just as he is about to get to her panties his finger tip brushes slightly against it, Sophia lets out a small moan and Aiden stops and says i am impressed but that is enough for today....Sophia gets dressed and says that is another task done, Aiden responds i never said this was a task you did this on your own and he walks away.