That is twisted logic. If someone says something obviously wrong, it does not become more correct if his statement is made about something he himself has made or created. L&P may have tried to create something real world realistic, but he did not achieved it. This is the crucial point and something that L&P cannot evaluate better than, for example, a player.Ok, you're injecting your opinion here, which is irrelevant based on how the author describes his nove/game and writes in that format. Again, It doesn't matter if you think it's fiction or realistic. He's basing the writing of this story on how he perceives world events take place. That is the foundation of his writing, why he is under the mindset that his story is "realistic," and why he describes it that way.
Whoever comes along and pretends that it makes sense to measure a porn game against the real world, will only make the same mistake as L&P and will achieve nothing. The only important thing is if a porn game follows the rules established in the game itself. This is what makes a coherent story and I think this is the highest level of realism a porn game can strive for.
No, and I don't intend to. I see in L&P someone who has an eye for good renderings and can write a story that is a good deal above the garbage that is normaly seen here. At the same time, I think he overestimates himself. Other than that, I don't care about what L&P thinks. I think the game is good, I don't care about the rest.There have been members here that challenge his writing style, only to have him explain what he is writing is "realistic." Have you ever spoken or written to him and challenged his writing or asked him questions about why certain things happen that don't have any logic to them?
Well, then I may have made a mistake. But I'm not completely convinced, because I notice how much you highlight Dylan, even though his story is just as real world unrealistic as Ellie's, for example.Why do you think I don't like the incest kink with Sophia/Dylan??? You need to go back and read some of my past comments from 2018 before you make that comment.
To give you a short version of Sophia/Dylan's story arc. Sophia never displays any physical attraction towards Dylan until this evening part one event. Everything else was designed for one thing, "SEX-ED," which she even displayed in the bathroom with Dylan. He jammed a build-up event in part 1 when he should have played the build-up out over multiple PDs instead of just one event. Whereas you can see and read a chronological build-up of Ellie and Sam's arc with Sophia.
Also, Don't forget the event in the park, when Dylan stands protectively in front of Sophia and fight one of the guys. In the porn game world, this is more than equivalent to a Sam who can just play good music.
No, In relation to a discussion that we both have, only what we both think is relevant. Especially since I don't have a high opinion of L&P. L&P can decide how he creates his game, but not what others think about his game. As I said, I think you are making a logical mistake in this point.Again, regardless of whether it makes no sense or does make sense, it's irrelevant based on my first comment above.
I look forward to more events between Dylan and Ellie. Ultimately, I like stories with lots of entanglements, and I see even greater potential here as in the story between Dylan/Sophia or Ellie/Sophia. However, i also think the Dylan story has a lot of potential in the voyeur path. I don't see a particular issue in Dylan's story. What do you mean exactly?There are a couple of arcs I'm interested in, which are Dylan, Ellie, and Patricia, but I do play the story unchained to help me understand how the author writes his story. And right now, Sophia/Dylan's story has issues that should have been addressed when he removed "The Twist" a couple of years ago but chose to keep most of it intact.
Currently, I see Dylan/Ellie's arc has a better build-up than Dylan/Sophia's.