VN Ren'Py A Wife and Mother [v0.215f] [Lust & Passion]

[Stephanie98]

There's a bigger problem here. Can we just go back a second and figure out why my daughter & sister-in-law fucked my wife and not me??! Where is the love??

that's not real straight married woman and having a kid tempted to fall into lesbianism it just fairy tale none of this happen in rl

 

[PietruccioTheHilander]

Indeed, and looking very much like L&P is on track for his end of January delivery. With that news in mind Sophia has decided to relax a bit, at least for now...

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where do I understand the possible estimated date? what is the hypothetical timeline of the release?

 

[useless-j]

Still wouldn’t justify $6,000 + in hardware.

 

[nexer]

Stop panic!
One thing must be kept in mind: Patreon needs facts, evidence to charge L&P.
Where's the difference in relation to PegasusSmith: on SubscribeStar

• we have the name of the comic: Au Naturel
• we have tags that violate Patreon rules.

What PegasusSmith did wrong: added tags, kept the name of the comic. These two things bind the comic on the 2 platforms.

What L&P does right: you can't find the name of the game anywhere on SubscribeStar, on Patreon you find DoL. I would change the names of the characters in DoL if I were L&P.





The images that appear on the cover should be different.

Patreon:


Then what is this AWAM? IMO, it's a game created by a community of perverted fans

 

[hzjujk]

I asked L&P about this after v0.130 was released.
And this is what he said


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There is no guarantee for what happens in the long term but atleast for the next few tasks we can be certain that Sophia will not actively want these tasks and the blackmail element will stay.

That says nothing more than what we already knew or suspected. I believe that is how L&P answered the question earlier.

 

[darji]

Stop panic!
One thing must be kept in mind: Patreon needs facts, evidence to charge L&P.
Where's the difference in relation to PegasusSmith: on SubscribeStar

• we have the name of the comic: Au Naturel
• we have tags that violate Patreon rules.

What PegasusSmith did wrong: added tags, kept the name of the comic. These two things bind the comic on the 2 platforms.

What L&P does right: you can't find the name of the game anywhere on SubscribeStar, on Patreon you find DoL. I would change the names of the characters in DoL if I were L&P.

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Then what is this AWAM? IMO, it's a game created by a community of perverted fans

AWAM is the incest Version of the game. Since he can not publish incest on Patreon you only get the censored version there.

 

[Jozef Minge]

Did L&P mention when he'll post a new teaser?

 

[hzjujk]

I have 2 dylan_cuckold points, I think there were 3 points. I think I lost the 3rd point in the trampoline event. The question I wanted to ask: Were there actually all 3 points at Sam / Sophia events?

 

[nexer]

I must have misunderstood PegasusSmith's post. Patreon prohibits a creator from publishing comics/games on a particular theme. That a creator's name cannot appear anywhere on the internet related to a specific theme.
Creators on Patreon must have a "model" life, have moral and ethical standard

So, the best way would be to change his name to the uncens, ( still one image with his L&P and the link to patreon)

 

[Hlextor]

he mentioned that from the next task onwards the route will become consensual or something like that,

This is consistent with my statement that the tasks are becoming more "tolerable" for her. And I think it really goes in the direction as nexer suspects. That she can control/co-determine the tasks herself. What does that look like in the story? What is the point of the tasks? Why does Sophia still do the tasks at all?

 

[xxxorro]

I have 2 dylan_cuckold points, I think there were 3 points. I think I lost the 3rd point in the trampoline event. The question I wanted to ask: Were there actually all 3 points at Sam / Sophia events?

You get those points for:

• Swimming lesson, if he does not interrupt Sam holding on Sophia (day 11, PD 4), +1 pt
• Trampoline event, if he does not tell Sam to get off Sophia when he falls (day 12, PD 5), +1 pt
• Soccer event, if he does not react to the other teammate's comments (day 14, PD 7), +1 pt
• Photoshoot, if he agrees to invite Sam (day 17, PD 10), +1 pt
• Photoshoot, if he lets Sam touch the fabric (day 17, PD 10), +1 pt

The only time the variable is used so far is on day 18 (PD 11) in the morning when Sophia takes Dylan to school by car, if dylan_cuckold >= 3 then Dylan talks about the postman Mr Murray and asks her if she would ever consider having an affair with him etc.

So to answer your question, during Sam / Sophia events you can get overall 4 points, swimming, trampoline and photoshoot 2x. The latest event in the bathtub is unaffected by this variable.

 

[hzjujk]

Sie erhalten diese Punkte für:

• Schwimmunterricht, wenn er Sam nicht unterbricht, während er Sophia festhält (Tag 11, PD 4), 1 Pkt
• Trampolin-Ereignis, wenn er Sam nicht sagt, dass er Sophia verlassen soll, wenn er fällt (Tag 12, PD 5), 1 Pkt
• Fußballereignis, wenn er nicht auf die Kommentare des anderen Mitspielers reagiert (Tag 14, PD 7), 1 Pkt
• Fotoshooting, wenn er zustimmt, Sam einzuladen (Tag 17, PD 10), 1 pt
• Fotoshooting, wenn er Sam den Stoff berühren lässt (Tag 17, PD 10), 1 pt

Das einzige Mal, dass die Variable bisher verwendet wird, ist an Tag 18 (PD 11) morgens, wenn Sophia Dylan mit dem Auto zur Schule bringt, wenn dylan_cuckold >= 3 dann spricht Dylan über den Postboten Mr. Murray und fragt sie, ob sie jemals eine Affäre mit ihm in Erwägung ziehen würde usw.

Um deine Frage zu beantworten, kannst du bei Sam / Sophia-Events 4 Punkte bekommen, Schwimmen, Trampolin und 2x Fotoshooting. Das letzte Ereignis in der Badewanne ist von dieser Variable nicht betroffen.
[/ZITIEREN]

Thanks!

 

[xxxorro]

Thanks!

bitte schön! I didn't know I could write in German so fluently! I should update my CV!!

 

[Andyboi]

Progress Report Ver. 0.155.

40% - 40%
0% - 0%

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Can anyone share some walkthrough of v.0 150

 

[nexer]

Can anyone share some walkthrough of v.0 150

Open the game and click on walkthrough

 

[Sapin Sicco]

Any idea what's on next update?

 

[L&P's Father-in-Law]

It was in relation to Subscribestar and not any private website like L&P's. I think it was mentioned here that the content on his Subscribestar regarding the same story as on Patreon was different and that's what caused the problem.

Wrong.
He didn't even publish certain stories on Patreon. Not even a patron-friendly version.

 

[VanDarkBalls]

Thanks!

the way of a real macho

 

[GingerSweetGirl]

This is consistent with my statement that the tasks are becoming more "tolerable" for her. And I think it really goes in the direction as nexer suspects. That she can control/co-determine the tasks herself. What does that look like in the story? What is the point of the tasks? Why does Sophia still do the tasks at all?

Sophia growing to enjoy the tasks is a natural outcome of the storyline. Since this is a game of corruption, it only makes sense that she will embrace her corruption as the game goes on. I know that sucks for fans of blackmail, but what other choice is there? If the tasks continue to get more extreme, and she continues to hate them, you start to get into a murky area around consent- and L&P has said that he won't include assault or rape content. So that means that Sophia has to begin to enjoy the tasks and willingly embrace them.

But this does leave the game in a weird place story wise. The conflict with Aiden has been well established, so to turn it 180 degrees will be jarring. The only way it works is if it's slow, and if it's slow then that means the tasks can't be very extreme. In fact they almost need to be mundane or repetitive, or in a safe environment. How many times can Aiden make her dress inappropriately to work before the audience is bored? And since much of the storyline's eroticism comes from the in-school environment, I don't think constantly having Sophia and Aiden meet outside of school is a good solution.

So what should L&P do?

1. The first thing I would do is recon the idea of 15 tasks and make the number undefined. You could still do 15 tasks, but give yourself a way out if you can't think of more than 5 good tasks.

2. If you do cut the tasks down, it leaves room for a new storyline with Aiden. A new storyline with Aiden could give L&P the flexibility to do new things with the character.

3. Use this new storyline to better integrate Aiden and school into the rest of the story. To me, Aiden and Sophia's job at the school have felt unnecessarily isolated from the rest of the story. I'd like to see them integrated into the rest of the story with more interactions with Zack, Dylan, and Ellie at school. Sophia's time at the school is a really big part of her life, so I'd like to see it incorporated in bigger ways to connect more of the characters. Specifically with Aiden, he could be used as a true antagonist towards Dylan and Zack. There is definitely a fetish out there if Sophia is sleeping with her son's bully.

4. Let's define Aiden and his motivation. I'd like to get a better sense of what motivates Aiden and his end game with Sophia. If he's better incorporated into the broader story, I think that gives L&P more time to develop his character and make him more interesting.

That's how I would tweak Aiden's story for the better.

 

[Sabertooth__]

This is consistent with my statement that the tasks are becoming more "tolerable" for her. And I think it really goes in the direction as nexer suspects. That she can control/co-determine the tasks herself. What does that look like in the story? What is the point of the tasks? Why does Sophia still do the tasks at all?

You Missed what I wrote after that. The consensual thing meant in relation to the the fact that you can do Dylan route without continuing the Aiden route.

She will not willing want to do tasks but just like now, she will find more and more pleasure in it. I don't really think there will be a mutual agreement since that removes the blackmail aspect. This storyline is a blackmail storyline, if it loses that then there is no point to this. It will become just another version of Dylan, Sam and Zac route. I don't want another teenager added in the story of the storyline is not going to be different.

Sophia growing to enjoy the tasks is a natural outcome of the storyline. Since this is a game of corruption, it only makes sense that she will embrace her corruption as the game goes on. I know that sucks for fans of blackmail, but what other choice is there? If the tasks continue to get more extreme, and she continues to hate them, you start to get into a murky area around consent- and L&P has said that he won't include assault or rape content. So that means that Sophia has to begin to enjoy the tasks and willingly embrace them.

But this does leave the game in a weird place story wise. The conflict with Aiden has been well established, so to turn it 180 degrees will be jarring. The only way it works is if it's slow, and if it's slow then that means the tasks can't be very extreme. In fact they almost need to be mundane or repetitive, or in a safe environment. How many times can Aiden make her dress inappropriately to work before the audience is bored? And since much of the storyline's eroticism comes from the in-school environment, I don't think constantly having Sophia and Aiden meet outside of school is a good solution.

I don't think it needs to get into the non consensual part too much. The tasks are moving in proportion to her corruption so at no point should the existing Dynamic need to be changed.

To better explain my point

If Sophia's corruption at present is taken as 3 at the end of the 3rd task. In the present Dynamic she likes the tasks a little bit but still hates Aiden. The tasks aren't all that extreme and in line with what pushes her boundary just a little bit.

With each successive task her corruption moves forward, pushing her boundary to a new level. A New limit. By task 12 also this same dynamic can continue just that she enjoys the tasks more and hates Aiden a little less. The blackmail aspect still remains and nothing every trudges the non consent line as every successive task is only a small step forward and never seems too much to Sophia. Therefore her task can still include the blackmail element and not accepting Aiden. Just that Sophia is far more corrupt and sexually liberated with new boundaries.