VN Ren'Py A Wife in Venice [v0.45] [EROTIC DROP]

[alyssssssssss]

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Then there will be three of them, the wife, the maid and the butler, the maid's father, or she will become a company slut for the father-in-law, since the husband with the money and power he has, finds 100 women like her, hahahah

 

[luxury1970]

Then there will be three of them, the wife, the maid and the butler, the maid's father, or she will become a company slut for the father-in-law, since the husband with the money and power he has, finds 100 women like her, hahahah

In this scenario it would be too easy eheheh.
Anyway from what I understand you don't like sluts would you prefer a love story?

 

[alyssssssssss]

Perhaps the thing that amuses me most about the game is calling it NTR, basically, the husband doesn't give a shit about his wife, for him what matters is the company and the money, he only needs his wife as a trophy, so whoever cheats on his wife , a man who practically doesn't even look at her, on the contrary, perhaps if his wife fucks with others or with her father-in-law, the husband benefits from it, he gets her off his back, someone with a lot of money, buys similar sluts by the kilo, hahahaha.

 

[alyssssssssss]

In this scenario it would be too easy eheheh.
Anyway from what I understand you don't like sluts would you prefer a love story?

They are porn games, if there are no sluts, these games have no way of existing, let's be real, if you are dealing with a game of horns, it's normal to expect this, but imagine, the beauty of it, that the husband doesn't give a shit, that her father-in-law is a depraved person, and she is half a lesbian, but I repeat, everything is normal, even perhaps too obvious, don't you think?

 

[luxury1970]

They are porn games, if there are no sluts, these games have no way of existing, let's be real, if you are dealing with a game of horns, it's normal to expect this, but imagine, the beauty of it, that the husband doesn't give a shit, that her father-in-law is a depraved person, and she is half a lesbian, but I repeat, everything is normal, even perhaps too obvious, don't you think?

Of course it can be obvious at times but you have to bear in mind that the cost of creating a novel is very high and so you try to please everyone a little and create as many characters as possible.
I realise that it is difficult and the line of failure is very thin, if I had done the classic male MC game with a two-metre long cock and who fucks all the women he meets perhaps I could now order a Ferrari. ( This is a cliché that works and will always work).
Unfortunately I can't, I love that everything has its own logic and that the story is the protagonist of the erotic or kinky situations.
You have already drawn the conclusion of the novel and it makes me smile, because you are a mile away from the truth.
Surely you have read the beginning of the novel when Nicole introduces herself and says that she had a difficult childhood and that her father forced her to study and not have fun. OK what if I told you now that Thomas met Nicole many years before she got married to Liam?
The great thing is that a writer can take you where he wants to go and it's a bit like an illusionist.
I really think that a novel like mine had to be presented after the work was finished to fully understand its form.
Thank you anyway for your interest and I hope to hear from you again soon.

 

[alyssssssssss]

Now I wonder, why a woman who had a difficult life as a child, now married to a powerful, rich, good-looking man, should lose everything to lust, and submissive sex, hahaha

 

[luxury1970]

Now I wonder, why a woman who had a difficult life as a child, now married to a powerful, rich, good-looking man, should lose everything to lust, and submissive sex, hahaha

You'll find out heheheh
I can't tell you now, otherwise the other guys might get mad.
Listen to me again when in the first episode Thomas goes to dinner with Nicole and tells him that she is a lioness in a cage for a long time.
How does he know this?
Also, perversion has no boundaries so to your question the answer is subjective everyone has a passion that goes beyond beauty or social status.

 

[Udayana]

You'll find out heheheh
I can't tell you now, otherwise the other guys might get mad.
Listen to me again when in the first episode Thomas goes to dinner with Nicole and tells him that she is a lioness in a cage for a long time.
How does he know this?
Also, perversion has no boundaries so to your question the answer is subjective everyone has a passion that goes beyond beauty or social status.

Mmm... mmm... maybe for some occult reason she's attracted to ugly men with a thick head. It's very modern, as stage directors like to say, in my country at least: to seek beauty through ugliness. I guess Plato wouldn't have agreed, but it's so old

 

[Malika1234]

btw the cuckolding scenes and husband watching videos with wife was really hot as well! i hope he starts sharing his wife with other men and women.

 

[Tugs666]

This game got me on my toes I can’t wait to see how the story develops.keep going dev you got a gem on this VN,keep it spicy ,sexy and above all very very naughty. If you going to build a NTR game than by god give us the best that your imagination can come up with. I really like your story.

 

[luxury1970]

Mmm... mmm... maybe for some occult reason she's attracted to ugly men with a thick head. It's very modern, as stage directors like to say, in my country at least: to seek beauty through ugliness. I guess Plato wouldn't have agreed, but it's so old

Surely there will be a return of the ugly. Since everyone now wants to be beautiful it is the law of compensation they have taken Plato's laws of philosophy too literally eheheh.
And Plato had a big head too hahahah
Hello friend, where are you from?

 

[luxury1970]

This game got me on my toes I can’t wait to see how the story develops.keep going dev you got a gem on this VN,keep it spicy ,sexy and above all very very naughty. If you going to build a NTR game than by god give us the best that your imagination can come up with. I really like your story.

Thank you very much my friend you will certainly have a lot of fun in the coming episodes.

 

[luxury1970]

btw the cuckolding scenes and husband watching videos with wife was really hot as well! i hope he starts sharing his wife with other men and women.

Who do you like better Nicole or Misako?

 

[Malika1234]

Who do you like better Nicole or Misako?

Theyre both hot! but i would pick Nicole. I love her lesbian affair and her falling for her maid. I also like Misako because even though she cheated she still loves her husband and wants to be a good loving caring wife and i hope they continue theyre games with other men and women.

 

[Penumbral Evanescence]

Surely there will be a return of the ugly

I would love for there to be hot and sweaty sex with an ugly bastard character

 

[luxury1970]

Spoiler: Augusto and Nicole

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[baka]

just played it and I have mixed feeling.
overall its good, nice renders and the wife is hot
what I do not like is that I do not have any control at all.
that means I just need to accept the story as it is
surely this is the best for a dev so he can focus better without the need to branch it
I actually dont like any of the male characters so far. Thomas is disgusting and I know he will be the main-dude, so its depressing. the secondary couple is distracting, as I dont care about them, so I just skip ahead,
Augusto is the best so far, but to push her toward Thomas instead of himself is quite ridiculous, bald and all and can get lucky with such lady.
the lesbian thing is also odd, the behavior of Angela is out of place, act like a child, emotional and a nutcase.
I mean who act like that? its like they where two teenager girls that started to fool around. but they just met!

 

[luxury1970]

just played it and I have mixed feeling.
overall its good, nice renders and the wife is hot
what I do not like is that I do not have any control at all.
that means I just need to accept the story as it is
surely this is the best for a dev so he can focus better without the need to branch it
I actually dont like any of the male characters so far. Thomas is disgusting and I know he will be the main-dude, so its depressing. the secondary couple is distracting, as I dont care about them, so I just skip ahead,
Augusto is the best so far, but to push her toward Thomas instead of himself is quite ridiculous, bald and all and can get lucky with such lady.
the lesbian thing is also odd, the behavior of Angela is out of place, act like a child, emotional and a nutcase.
I mean who act like that? its like they where two teenager girls that started to fool around. but they just met!

Hey buddy, thanks for your summary. Actually, the decision menus will be part of the next episode, and it'll be up to you to change the storyline in the end. I believe that starting from the actions already taken is essential to maintain the fluidity of the game and avoid getting lost in a myriad of menus.

Since the beginning of the novel, I've introduced Nicole as an enigmatic character, with a past that sets her apart from many other women. It's in this mystery that her unusual behavior lies, and to uncover it, one must follow the various episodes.

To conclude, I want to focus on the essence of sin and the perverse actions that each of us could have. I realize it's something new, and I hope not to make mistakes.

Thank you for your attention, and I hope to hear from you soon.

 

[neronwtf]

to push her toward Thomas instead of himself is quite ridiculous

Deep down, it makes sense. He wants to protect his daughter. What is ridiculous (specially in a corruption game/KN) is that he's explicitly saying it to her. I get that Augusto and Nicole are building a father/daughter kind of relation, but it's absurd to be so blatantly honest.

he lesbian thing is also odd, the behavior of Angela is out of place, act like a child, emotional and a nutcase.

For me, instead, it's Nicole's behavior which is childish. She's a grown woman, meanwhile Angela is younger and immature. Their relation is rushed.

 

[baka]

that good news and surely if we get more context it will make more sense.
and if we can decide "a bit" it will allow the player to choose what to do. I dont ask for much, as its not a good thing if the story has too many routes. it should be branching that are easy to add. but I let the DEV work on that, its part of the journey when creating something to think how to do things.

but to add some "positivity" I do like the scenes so far. they are well done and erotic (even if I dont like Thomas, it was well made) I like it that they are kissing/making out, that part should be used more in VN.

keep it up.