j3wed

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Yeah this is unironically a good game where choices do seem to matter with many paths to go. Not forgetting the amount of content in the first episode and the amount of this episode, which seemed even bigger. Then there would be the pleasant characters, even the token black character is fine (i hope no future cuck content)
You really did a great job @Dr PinkCake.

The only complain i would have would be the dream scenes. I don't see the point of them in games and i always skip them (i think a lot of people do this), they do seem to be a waste of time in the developers regard, especially since they were all animated.

I hope you get more patreons, you definitely deserve it.
 

badnboujee

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Hey Pink, do you think it'd be possible in the future to add a feature where you can set a custom nickname/petname for the MC? Similar to what's in Depraved Awakening by PhillyGames? It's a small feature but I think it's really satisfying.
 
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Dr PinkCake

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Holy shit, this was the funniest transition I have ever seen in an erotic game.
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That was awesome, Pink.
I'm so glad you liked it. It is by far my most favorite scene in this game so far. :D

Yeah this is unironically a good game where choices do seem to matter with many paths to go. Not forgetting the amount of content in the first episode and the amount of this episode, which seemed even bigger. Then there would be the pleasant characters, even the token black character is fine (i hope no future cuck content)
You really did a great job @Dr PinkCake.

The only complain i would have would be the dream scenes. I don't see the point of them in games and i always skip them (i think a lot of people do this), they do seem to be a waste of time in the developers regard, especially since they were all animated.

I hope you get more patreons, you definitely deserve it.
Thanks a lot! Yeah Episode 2 was very big compared to Episode 1.
I don't want to spoil the story in any capacity. Dream sequences are not part of future updates, that's all I can say regarding your criticism.

Hey Pink, do you think it'd be possible in the future to add a feature where you can set a custom nickname/petname for the MC? Similar to what's in Depraved Awakening by PhillyGames? It's a small feature but I think it's really satisfying.
Looks like someone wants to be called daddy by someone. You could just name him that in the beginning. :)
I will not implement this feature as I'm trying to steer away from the popular incest genre and break norms in terms of erotic games. I hope you understand this. :)
 

kiteares

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I'm overwhelmed with your positive response guys. You're making me tear up here a bit.
You asked for this....it was a pile of steaming shite...

Who am I kidding? I have only played 1 trait but I have enjoyed very much.

All the girls are gorgeous, you've gotta love Liam he's a great wingman. The Dr needs a slap, he's a bit of a dick and Melissa's father does not deserve oxygen, please let us take some serious action about him.

Some bits of the story are a little contrived, but show me a game here that isn't. I do like the daily summary and I like how, what may seem like a positive, is actually a negative in the long run, while also being very sensible. The characters seem to react better than a lot in a lot of these games, which is a nice touch.
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My big criticism is the size, 1 GB download of v0.2 is going to get super unwieldy if you are not careful. @Vlad Cepesh posted a crunched version 1/4 the size.

I enjoyed my lone play through and look forward to the next version.
 

rodneyeatme

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I'm so glad you liked it. It is by far my most favorite scene in this game so far.
I am somewhat beside myself how you turned this release around in what - 25 days? Did you have leftovers after releasing 0.1? Regardless, that was a heap of quality content. Great decision on going 1920x1080 going forward as well.

I'll do a review in a bit but this game is excellent. The writing allows each character to express their individual personalities and charm the player. The poses and scene composition are done well, especially the poses. And fucking Liam, man - a bro for the ages.

Non-fetish games can take a while to gather steam, but your game will get the support it deserves eventually. Great work; I am really impressed.
 

Vortex5000

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Ugh, really disliked this chapter compared to the first one. Absolutely hate Liams character, the MC turns out to have been a college frat douche in the past (and can still act like one now) and for some bizarre reason he refuses to just man up and actually just try to start a relationship with Megan and instead keeps fooling around everywhere else. Like I don't get it, they clearly get along well, they're attracted to each other, they're even fucking living together. If he actually gives a fuck at this point why not just you know, ask her on a date instead of going to a club to fuck some silly college girls, I honestly don't get it.

Oh yea, there's also the peek portion, which is not only super fucking tropey at this point but is also scummy in general, and his only reason for not peeking if you choose to not peek is that "It's too risky", not you know, a douche thing to do.

Overall my impression of the MC is that he's extremely immature. At his age he should be mature enough to just act on what he's serious about instead of fooling around like a college boy and still trying to go for Megan sort of simultaneously. Like it honestly doesn't feel like he really cares about Megan, he just wants to get as much pussy as possible with as little commitment as possible, I dunno, as a supposedly romantic porn game it really is failing in my eyes.

EDIT: Apparently I'm alone in my dislike on Liam, to me there's nothing bro like about a guy trying to take his friend out on the pull when he's supposedly into this girl he's living with.
 

The Witcher

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Hey Guys , I am working on the walk-through now but the new update has many branches and i don't have much time cause of my work (double shift) so it may take a little while to cover all possible branches and make it simple. I am almost done , but i can't finish it today (need to get some rest) and i will continue tomorrow.
 

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very good update, i must say it deserves backing up indefinitely
 
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Dr PinkCake

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You asked for this....it was a pile of steaming shite...

Who am I kidding? I have only played 1 trait but I have enjoyed very much.

All the girls are gorgeous, you've gotta love Liam he's a great wingman. The Dr needs a slap, he's a bit of a dick and Melissa's father does not deserve oxygen, please let us take some serious action about him.

Some bits of the story are a little contrived, but show me a game here that isn't. I do like the daily summary and I like how, what may seem like a positive, is actually a negative in the long run, while also being very sensible. The characters seem to react better than a lot in a lot of these games, which is a nice touch.
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My big criticism is the size, 1 GB download of v0.2 is going to get super unwieldy if you are not careful. @Vlad Cepesh posted a crunched version 1/4 the size.

I enjoyed my lone play through and look forward to the next version.
I'm changing the way I do image compression in the next update. It should be lossless but much smaller than webp format.

I am somewhat beside myself how you turned this release around in what - 25 days? Did you have leftovers after releasing 0.1? Regardless, that was a heap of quality content. Great decision on going 1920x1080 going forward as well.

I'll do a review in a bit but this game is excellent. The writing allows each character to express their individual personalities and charm the player. The poses and scene composition are done well, especially the poses. And fucking Liam, man - a bro for the ages.

Non-fetish games can take a while to gather steam, but your game will get the support it deserves eventually. Great work; I am really impressed.
I didn't have any leftovers, but worked intensively (40+ hours per week) on it on top of my regular job. For me it's not about the money. It's the hobby and creativity that keeps me going. :)

Ugh, really disliked this chapter compared to the first one. Absolutely hate Liams character, the MC turns out to have been a college frat douche in the past (and can still act like one now) and for some bizarre reason he refuses to just man up and actually just try to start a relationship with Megan and instead keeps fooling around everywhere else. Like I don't get it, they clearly get along well, they're attracted to each other, they're even fucking living together. If he actually gives a fuck at this point why not just you know, ask her on a date instead of going to a club to fuck some silly college girls, I honestly don't get it.

Oh yea, there's also the peek portion, which is not only super fucking tropey at this point but is also scummy in general, and his only reason for not peeking if you choose to not peek is that "It's too risky", not you know, a douche thing to do.

Overall my impression of the MC is that he's extremely immature. At his age he should be mature enough to just act on what he's serious about instead of fooling around like a college boy and still trying to go for Megan sort of simultaneously. Like it honestly doesn't feel like he really cares about Megan, he just wants to get as much pussy as possible with as little commitment as possible, I dunno, as a supposedly romantic porn game it really is failing in my eyes.

EDIT: Apparently I'm alone in my dislike on Liam, to me there's nothing bro like about a guy trying to take his friend out on the pull when he's supposedly into this girl he's living with.
Sad to hear it. I won't defend against it as you are entitled to your opinion. But do know that you can reject all girls in the game and be faithful to Megan, how the MC is perceived to you is defined by those choices. Also, you touch on a topic that will start Episode 3; his feelings for Megan and their living arrangement. Making a move on someone who relies on you both monetarily and for shelter, that's a tough spot. Any way, thanks for testing the game. And I do appreciate your feedback! To save you some time in the future, if you don't like Liam by now you will likely not like the rest of the story.
 

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Really impressive. Episode 1 was good, this one is even better.

I didn't think it could get better than Megan, but Melissa is as cute as her, if not even cuter.
And Leah is hot as well, but the two Ms also speak to the white knight in me, which makes them more interesting.

It will be hard to pick between the two, I hope there's an option to get into a three-way romantic relationship with both of them.
 

Vortex5000

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Sad to hear it. I won't defend against it as you are entitled to your opinion. But do know that you can reject all girls in the game and be faithful to Megan, how the MC is perceived to you is defined by those choices. Also, you touch on a topic that will start Episode 3; his feelings for Megan and their living arrangement. Making a move on someone who relies on you both monetarily and for shelter, that's a tough spot. Any way, thanks for testing the game. And I do appreciate your feedback! To save you some time in the future, if you don't like Liam by now you will likely not like the rest of the story.
I understand that being in a position where one "owes" the other is hardly conducive to a super healthy relationship, but at the same time if he really gave a fuck in my opinion he wouldn't even consider sleeping with her friend when she's living at his place and he's in to her for example, that's not something a good person does as far as I'm concerned. And in terms of Liam that's really unfortunate, is he going to be still getting in my face and trying to take me out to clubs even in the mid-latter portions of the game when you're hopefully in a relationship? Because if so that sucks. It's not like I hated everything about the game. It's just Liam and the MC are shitty people from everything I've seen, it's standard in porn games that the MC is like full over the top white knight to the love interest when in her presence and full on pussy hunting piece of shit when not, I just was hoping this one would be different. Oh well.
 
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Skylaroo

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I've only played through once (will play again later), but in both episodes, my report was "didn't kiss Leah" and "didn't kiss Megan during improv". I don't think I even got the choice to do so to both of them. Did I miss something?
 
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