A game where you are supposed to enjoy the writing is meant to have the results be subjective, but there are objective things that make up bad writing. All chapters until the last had great writing, characters, and dialogue. The problem with the last chapter, is that it tears down all you have built up with your choices thus far. What even is the point in trying to make things work with both Meg and Mel if the choice wasn't there to begin with. Also, Leah was criminally underused, she basically existed in only the first 3 chapters and I literally forgot she existed until you go to the hospital with your best pal. If she had been integral to the choices you have been making, for example if you chose her, she wouldn't go nuts, etc. But in the last chapter, she literally came out of nowhere and minus one clue, which was vague at best, there was no reason to suspect her, especially when Rena and Mel were both also sexually interested in you. It was essentially a Deux Ex Machina sort of twist. And the "type" of person you are never plays into the ending. What if you could have prevented the fire given you piece enough clues as a bookworm, or you got ripped enough that you could carry both out as an athletic, or you became friends with a lot of people that they were willing to come with you into the fire to help out. Essentially there are problems with aspects of the game and pointing them out is fairly objective in my opinion. I gave this a 4/5 due to the problems with the last chapter and how jarring it was compared to the first 6. It would have been a 5/5 if it managed to nail the finale.
