VN Ren'Py Completed Acting Lessons [v1.0.2] [DrPinkCake]

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ut1stgear

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The problem with finding out if this is good or bad is like trying to figure out who killed JFK. Both sides present very believable arguments. At least with this the answer may, emphasis on may, come over the next two updates which will be the end of the game.
 
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Fliero

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Ignatz said:
- Regarding the "jumpiness" of the episode. I don't see it. Not every story needs to be written in a completely linear nor a completely delineated form. It's not a great leap for a reasonably imaginative person to fill in blanks between scenes. For some people, this actually is more enjoyable. Indeed, what some people call jumpy, others might call trimming the fat.
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Nobody expects every single mundane scene, but scenes that add much needed context isn't fat that should be trimmed. A character just 'going through the motions' of point to point isn't engaging. Going from a horrific experience to the audition scene is jarring, and undermines the severity of the earlier scene.

Ignatz said:
- The change in tone and darker turn probably has more to do with the more critical comments than the actual story/pacing itself. That's too bad, for those looking for happy happy joy joy, but that's the vision of the creator. The creative choices may displease some, but it doesn't reflect on the writing or plotting skill of the creator
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You seem to be claiming that the creator is impervious to any constructive criticism or critique because of 'creative choices'. It's disingenuous to claim that any criticism of the writing, pacing or execution is rooted in players wanting a dull boring harem game with no conflict.

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Fliero said:
Nobody expects every single mundane scene, but scenes that add much needed context isn't fat that should be trimmed. A character just 'going through the motions' of point to point isn't engaging. Going from a horrific experience to the audition scene is jarring, and undermines the severity of the earlier scene.


You seem to be claiming that the creator is impervious to any constructive criticism or critique because of 'creative choices'. It's disingenuous to claim that any criticism of the writing, pacing or execution is rooted in players wanting a dull boring harem game with no conflict.

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Mate I'm seriously hoping its that I am gonna be mad if one of them died
 
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I don't usually get attached to stories from these types of games but jeez i'm so invested in this now. Checking back everyday for the next episode!
 
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