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JC07

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1. Great fucking start, Voice acting is not cringe, animations are nice, funny yet serious dialog
2. Make Kyra get a girlfriend next update just for those people. You complained so blam now you NO GUY can have her. Problem solved
3. Yea Eyes
4. Im REALLY looking forward to future chapters (y)
oh we have a comedian here.

My god, I think you misunderstood my comment, but I will try to be a little more expressive.

I have no problem with Kyra having or not having a boyfriend or girlfriend. The problem is that she seems to be one of the most important LIs for the story and for the MC, and is "spoiled" by a meaningless dialogue, which makes it seem like she prefers any guy, who may not even appear in the story anymore, to MC That is, if Keran was her boyfriend and she went with him to fight on the other side, that would be fine with me, if he was her boyfriend and he was gone and she would rather be with MC and then they have something, it was fine with me... now understand what I mean?
 
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oh we have a comedian here.

My god, I think you misunderstood my comment, but I will try to be a little more expressive.

I have no problem with Kyra having or not having a boyfriend or girlfriend. The problem is that she seems to be one of the most important LIs for the story and for the MC, and is "spoiled" by a meaningless dialogue, which makes it seem like she prefers any guy, who may not even appear in the story anymore, to MC That is, if Keran was her boyfriend and she went with him to fight on the other side, that would be fine with me, if he was her boyfriend and he was gone and she would rather be with MC and then they have something, it was fine with me... now understand what I mean?
1. Did NOT read that giant ass paragraph which if you just did a summery here...WHY THE GIANT ASS PARAPGRAPH???

2. she has literally done nothing...like nothing...fucking her didnt mean much, mages won the fight, she could leave RIGHT now in story and itll go on since its focusing on our "lost love" and her stuff. COULD she become important, I guess. But she is currently at same level as Blue berry girl shop keep.
 
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JC07

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It's no use arguing with someone who only knows how to offend.

I just say, she is important to the MC and probably to the story, she is the most loyal and closest "friend" of the MC, how is that not being important? But forget it, as I said, it's no use talking to someone who only knows how to offend others.

And DEV, I'm playing again, and now the story between Kyra and MC seems much more logical, now it makes more sense for her to follow him to "death".
 

Classy Lemon

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It's no use arguing with someone who only knows how to offend.

I just say, she is important to the MC and probably to the story, she is the most loyal and closest "friend" of the MC, how is that not being important? But forget it, as I said, it's no use talking to someone who only knows how to offend others.

And DEV, I'm playing again, and now the story between Kyra and MC seems much more logical, now it makes more sense for her to follow him to "death".
Glad you're enjoying the new version :)
 
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JC07

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I think I've finished all the current content, and it's very good, really good, congratulations DEV.

LegendKing23 , I think we have similar tastes, so I think it's okay, the voyer scenes at the beginning aren't very important, they're NPC's and they don't even show their faces. there are other scenes as well but it's completely avoidable and they're NPC's too. So I think it's okay, at least I'm okay the way it is.

There's a mystery around the MC's childhood friend, but I don't think it's anything "obscure". But the game is very good, the story is fantastic, try it.
 
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MannyTearson92

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Haha. Hasn't been a week and you already got some fans. Looks like you're on the right track, Lemon. And thanks for some of the edits. That was embarrassing. Mainly the videos (having to explain yourself as to why there was a loud yelling going around. :ROFLMAO:)
 
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I couldn't stand the curiosity, and tried to play.

But no, I don't think that's funny, if that happens in real life to me she would have flown off my dick in a way not very pleasant for her. So I don't think it's funny, but it might just be that I'm in a bad mood, like I understand Kyra isn't dating the MC and the MC is in love with another girl and stuff. But this dialogue spoils the game for a lot of people who don't like the NTR/sharing genre. And for a game that has a harem TAG planned and I can say with certainty that the harem's target audience is the opposite audience to the NTR so we've come to a stalemate here.

I don't know if Kyra will be an LI (probably so), but I hoped she would die in battle (I'm a terrible person, I know), it was something I was hoping to avoid having a slut LI in the harem.

So after this dialogue it kind of blew the game for me and I didn't delve so deeply into the story. But what I kind of felt from the vibrations is that yes, we can have a harem, but a harem of used garbage. Which is not so nice. I hope this is wrong, I hope we can go our way without having to get involved with Kyra (she can go with Keran as she likes him so much), I also hope Cressa isn't a broken slut like Kyra. I don't expect to find a virgin's harem, but I don't want to gather other guys' used rubbish and rub my face in that their dick is better than mine.

Otherwise, as mentioned before, the story of the game itself seems worthy of a movie. The graphics are very good, and the scenes are good too, pity it's 90% voyer shit. And even then I'm kind of confused about it. If the DEV clarifies that part of Kyra, if she's going to be LI, if he's going to change this dialogue, or if it's going to be something recurrent in history, like all the girls likely to enter the harem are like Kyra. So I'll keep an eye out and wait for an answer on that.

and I don't know if I've said it here, I don't expect the DEV to change his story to please me or anyone else it's his story and it's his job, if he thinks Kyra's part funny and stuff, it's his humor and his job and he should do what he thinks best, if he thinks Kyra has to be a camping slut it's the character he created and she's going to be like that, but I don't think she's going to be very interesting to many. But that's what it is, and if it has to be that way, okay.
Well it sounds this game has one shit harem. lol
 
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Look-see

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stupid ass suggestion here but how set are you on the eyes of the females here? cause apparently that like half the issue on this forum.

dont get me wrong looking at the cinematics on this game is like some dreamworks level stuff. but for a porn game? idk, ive seen where the overall consensus is around close to 50/50 and i imagine some ppl didnt even bother to download it after seeing that one girls eyes.

but once again damn the cinematics are nice. even though i'll only watch the non sex ones once.

but yeah at the very least im more interested in playing the game now.
 

Classy Lemon

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stupid ass suggestion here but how set are you on the eyes of the females here? cause apparently that like half the issue on this forum.

dont get me wrong looking at the cinematics on this game is like some dreamworks level stuff. but for a porn game? idk, ive seen where the overall consensus is around close to 50/50 and i imagine some ppl didnt even bother to download it after seeing that one girls eyes.

but once again damn the cinematics are nice. even though i'll only watch the non sex ones once.

but yeah at the very least im more interested in playing the game now.
I have altered her eyes to be more like the other girls, I came to agree that the features of her eyes were exaggerated in a rather unflattering way, i.e. bulging and bug-like. New download links are in the original post.

Comparison:

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SeptCloud

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This is my first comment on this forum and I just want to say that I am impressed.

I can clearly see that you spent a lot of time on this game. The story is really well written, the animations are impressive and the voice acting is not cringey at all. Are you using Mocap for your anim? In any case, they are top tier.
I really want to know what will happen next and I hope that your game will become one of the popular ones because you deserve it!
 

Classy Lemon

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This is my first comment on this forum and I just want to say that I am impressed.

I can clearly see that you spent a lot of time on this game. The story is really well written, the animations are impressive and the voice acting is not cringey at all. Are you using Mocap for your anim? In any case, they are top tier.
I really want to know what will happen next and I hope that your game will become one of the popular ones because you deserve it!
Thank you very much, really glad you liked it! It's all animated by hand :)
 
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