- Aug 1, 2021
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I wanted to say this, but couldnt figure out how to say it! I 100% AgreeI enjoyed this. It's a decent start. Both the art and puzzles were enjoyable to me - though I think the artist could improve proportions by tracing/sketching more liberally. No shame in it.
I would however levy the criticism that I believe the pace is too fast. Ai jumps straight into pretty extreme demands/actions towards MC. I believe a slower burn would better fit this game. Because the MC is a stalwart hero, and would refuse any demand too extreme, Ai should instead work to slowly undermine them. A game-play loop where Ai made progressive demands/tricks to get MC to be her servant, and then eventually slave would be very interesting imo. I think if you jump straight to the end-game content we'll be left with less to look forward to. As an example - instead of the MC immediately agreeing to be her slave at the start of the game, instead have them originally agree to be her servant, and then later have her extract the more extreme promise of being her slave.
In the end I'm sure whatever you produce will be great. Just my two cents!
I did like your first game