VN Ren'Py Completed Alexandra [v1.0] [PTOLEMY]

[GentlemanCorpse]

Hi,

Fap: no - more story

Artwork: It is okay, there are bug and typos, especially at the end, when picking up Aggy nurse text is blocked by nurse picture up front...

MC: He is okay, no wimp or so, but really a puppy, without Alexhe would be a headles chicken it seems.

Story: I have the feeling there was not much in the end, but it took long. I also played without any other girls, still it actually kept me well entertained and reading.

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Cons: bugs, typos, missed paranormal Side Story stuff...

Feelings: no hard feelings for me or jealousy,

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Characters: I find them all ok and they fit in the whole picture.

Dick: average

Fetishes: vanilla stuff, nothing out of ordinary

Thanks

 

[cxx]

Dick: average

you want to see dicks which are 2 meters long and as thick as serena williams upper leg?

 

[GentlemanCorpse]

you want to see dicks which are 2 meters long and as thick as serena williams upper leg?

Nope, it kind of became a point, because I always read "oohhhh such a big dick" and looking at it I thought it is not even average. Especially in lewd scenes it puts off if things are described which are not happening.. and I am sadly a person who feels too much into the MC, so I like to be able to identify with the MC.

I dont like monster or mutanted body parts...

 

[cxx]

well yea not avg in avns.

 

[ZagorTeNay]

For Ptolemy stiffness is the journey.

 

[botc76]

again alex and izzy can't be half-sisters in game if ptol wants to stay in patreon, he can hint that they are but no confirmation.

Yeah, because there is NOOOO way around that, because all those landlady and roommate games on patreon don't exist.

The game basically confirmed it, Ptolemy knows his way around those restrictions.
That argument doesn't work.

Just a few things if I may...
1. Is the (Alex) pregnancy render before dinner a mistake? I assume it, is because foreshadowing doesn't exactly work like that.

Yes, that is a mistake.

I think there are a few bugs with some of the renders, but it is not foreshadowing. There are 2 versions of this ending (maybe more but IDK for sure) where Alex and Izzy are pregnant and one where they are not.

Exactly. There was a point where you could decide to handle something yourself OR tell Alex about it, so I had two playt-hroughs, where I choose different options whenever possible. In one of them it was just Izzy who was pregnant, in the other one it was both girls.
I honestly have no idea which decision was decisive for that, though.


Glad to read that there will be another ending, here's hoping it will actually address some of the issues I had with this one.

 

[cxx]

Yeah, because there is NOOOO way around that, because all those landlady and roommate games on patreon don't exist.

The game basically confirmed it, Ptolemy knows his way around those restrictions.

sure there are ways around but dev didn't use any due some reason (didn't want incest on game, keeping players guessing about it, etc).

 

[AK Khan]

So, the game is complete?

 

[TheCrimsonRevenger]

So, the game is complete?

Not yet... although standing at 99.9 it's hard to imagine there's a whole lot more to come....

Then again one of my favorite things about this game is that his "mini updates" tend to pack ac much content as full updates for certain....let's call it, "less driven" developers.

So i'd say there's at least enough space left for a decent epilogue if he does intent to end it at 1.0

And maybe he doesn't. I"ve seem some devs keep working beyond 1.0. I suspect they failed math, but it happens.

 

[cxx]

So, the game is complete?

atleast 1 update left.

 

[TheElwoodBlues]

I hope this gets the ending it deserves but with only one update left I am not holding my breath. Well made endings are most devs strongest weakness...

 

[PatreonTed]

Has Ptolemy said anything about what his next main project is going to be?

 

[cebs]

Android port updated​

 

[wakkawalla]

Has Ptolemy said anything about what his next main project is going to be?

a promising start with a disappointing end

 

[Lexguard]

Don't think much is coming. Played to the end of the update and there was an ending.
Maybe fixing problems but i don't expect more gamplay.

 

[Puma1978]

I really enjoyed this game. Very good writing and engaging characters. The dialogs are refreshing good written and i really love all characters in the game. Also the Sex Scenes are very beautyful and passionate made. I dont know if the Devs want to abandone the game now with final version or if there will come a epilog or something.
Anyway the endinfg is not really bad but somehow not satisfying. But i can live with that it is a good ending for MC.

 

[ZagorTeNay]

Has Ptolemy said anything about what his next main project is going to be?

You'll be playing as ( stoic) Ptolemy himself, set on a journey to find threesome relationship.

 

[Shalamar94]

Is this the same developer from "Dreaming of Dana" ? he makes good stories but looks like he doesn't know how to end them or continue with a good story. this one looks like its going to have one of those unsatisfying endings as Dreaming of Dana and "Intimate Relations" which he /she abandoned . I hope not.

 

[cxx]

Is this the same developer from "Dreaming of Dana" ? he makes good stories but looks like he doesn't know how to end them or continue with a good story. this one looks like its going to have one of those unsatisfying endings as Dreaming of Dana and "Intimate Relations" which he /she abandoned . I hope not.

same dev. dana is completed, ir is abandoned.

 

[Samothrace73]

Not quite the ending I expected, was quick, so many unanswered questions. Is izzy Alex's sister? The warhammer chaos god references.. So much more to be had here...