VN Ren'Py Completed Alison Fall of the Apple [v1.0] [OneManVN]

[bobdillan]

Sorry about the confusion. You don't need to download this at all for now. Wait for 0.4.2 it will have the changes included. The Remastered was intended for those who kept complaining about the opening scene being "Too hard to stomach" Now they can skip it or watch the changes.

If you want to replay from the start and see all the different choices I have added, I recommend downloading it. As for the "Incest" yes you do need the patch this time.

I know it's confusing, but what can I do, some want incest, others get all violent when I include it. That's why the patch is there.

Yeah, content I plain to make those types will hate.... although I will Probably not add a skip button, because the way I plan to use it, is an important part of the story and helps understand the character. Although I foresee the main issue people will have is they will enjoy it and dislike it because I shined a bit of light on their shadow they ignore

I will explain using your starting scene, but for those faint of heat I will put in spoiler

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[OneManVN]

Yeah, content I plain to make those types will hate.... although I will Probably not add a skip button, because the way I plan to use it, is an important part of the story and helps understand the character. Although I foresee the main issue people will have is they will enjoy it and dislike it because I shined a bit of light on their shadow they ignore

I will explain using your starting scene, but for those faint of heat I will put in spoiler

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Uh, if I went that far in my game, I'm pretty sure some people would be sending the FBI on twitter some concerned messages... Yeah, I think I'll leave it as is hahaha. Although I personally can't say that he doesn't deserve it.

As for the scene, it's pretty dark, and I'm sure that there is an audience out there for it, but it may be a very small percentage.

 

[bobdillan]

Uh, if I went that far in my game, I'm pretty sure some people would be sending the FBI on twitter some concerned messages... Yeah, I think I'll leave it as is hahaha. Although I personally can't say that he doesn't deserve it.

As for the scene, it's pretty dark, and I'm sure that there is an audience out there for it, but it may be a very small percentage.

Well tbh the idea works more as a gritty TV show (again kinda like the punisher, so would be for punisher type audience), no intention of using a that specific scene in a porn game though (that really would limit the audience XD ) if anything just a normal game. Although I would avoid forcing the player to do it, would be a cutscene.

 

[OneManVN]

Well tbh the idea works more as a gritty TV show (again kinda like the punisher, so would be for punisher type audience), no intention of using a that specific scene in a porn game though (that really would limit the audience XD ) if anything just a normal game. Although I would avoid forcing the player to do it, would be a cutscene.

Yeah, I kind of figured. And like I said, I am not against it, but I'm certain that your audience would be very limited if that was a force to watch scene Most people want lovey-dovey, I love you, baby, I love you too daddy, let's fuck now. Okay, sweetheart... The end.

 

[Zenithtb]

...boinking that mom sister and daughter from day one in game.

Most people want lovey-dovey, I love you, baby, I love you too daddy, let's fuck now. Okay, sweetheart...

I like the way your next game seems to be coming together in your head. I predict success!

 

[Zenithtb]

Gosh darn it - someone else had this issue (I swear I saw it a few pages back) - but I cannot find the post.

Having the 'my name is missing bug'. Pretty please don't tell me I have to restart the game!

 

[OneManVN]

Gosh darn it - someone else had this issue (I swear I saw it a few pages back) - but I cannot find the post.

Having the 'my name is missing bug'. Pretty please don't tell me I have to restart the game!


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Nah, just enable developer menu then Shift+O type mc="Michael" or whatever you wish really. And Fyi, the Remastered is worth replaying if you care about rescuing the princess.

 

[Zenithtb]

Nah, just enable developer menu then Shift+O type mc="Michael" or whatever you wish really. And Fyi, the Remastered is worth replaying if you care about rescuing the princess.

I'm playing the Remastered version. I suspect the issue is I didn't have the time to play the prior version.

Or are you implying it'd be a good idea to -start from the beginning- on the Remastered version 'cos it's super-awsomely-amazing or something?

Edit: noted your usage of 'replaying' - kinda changes your reply.

But what if I can't remember all my previous choices, waaaaaa!

 

[OneManVN]

I'm playing the Remastered version. I suspect the issue is I didn't have the time to play the prior version.

Or are you implying it'd be a good idea to -start from the beginning- on the Remastered version 'cos it's super-awsomely-amazing or something?

Edit: noted your usage of 'replaying' - kinda changes your reply.

But what if I can't remember all my previous choices, waaaaaa!

Yeah, super awesome amazingly blah blah something. And the name is due to me enabling the "Choose your own name" Superpower. People have been asking for it, so I did it.

 

[Zenithtb]

Yeah, super awesome amazingly blah blah something. And the name is due to me enabling the "Choose your own name" Superpower. People have been asking for it, so I did it.

Couldn't you have just had a "If name = [Default] or '' then Prompt for a name" voodoo in there?

Edit: This is the game where I can't be too mean too soon isn't it. I'm having PTSD flashbacks of you chastising me for wanting to slam this bitch in a cage in my dungeon too soon...

*Gulp*

Edit: Yep. Blood. Bad Ending. The works...

 

[OneManVN]

Couldn't you have just had a "If name = [Default] or '' then Prompt for a name" voodoo in there?

Could have should have, and probably would have, if I wanted to deal with a lot more issues. Like the name being written in the game probably over 1000 times.

 

[Zenithtb]

Could have should have, and probably would have, if I wanted to deal with a lot more issues. Like the name being written in the game probably over 1000 times.

Ah, I meant, at the start of the Update that added the option to set your own name. Unless someone at the start of the game entered the same name you used as the MC, it'd never be called...

AH! You didn't use a Variable previously, and hard-coded the original name, right?

I think my method would still work though... As long as you Search / Replaced 'Michael' with '[mc]' in previous chapters...

Edit: Water under the bridge. Just my ex-programmer mind solving problems that don't need solving...

Edit: Typo;


Edit: I'd like a game where I can play as 'Oldman' - I align with him quite smoothly!

 

[Avaron1974]

Edit: I'd like a game where I can play as 'Oldman' - I align with him quite smoothly!

Plenty of those around, won't find it here but plenty of others.

I'm afraid you'll have to play nicely with the girls here, even in the dom path.

 

[OneManVN]

Plenty of those around, won't find it here but plenty of others.

I'm afraid you'll have to play nicely with the girls here, even in the dom path.

Not entirely accurate, but yes. 99% on point. Some girls just like it rough, and there is absolutely nothing I can do about it! I tried talking sense into them, I really did. But we won't have any cages, or physical abuse, or anything forced by MC ever.

 

[Zenithtb]

Not entirely accurate, but yes. 99% on point. Some girls just like it rough, and there is absolutely nothing I can do about it! I tried talking sense into them, I really did. But we won't have any cages, or physical abuse, or anything forced by MC ever.

May I refer you to my previous posts:Here, here and here.

She just has the face of a girl I'd like to love, alone, by myself, for myself, in ways I desire, when I desire, unwatched, unseen, unheard, without trace.

 

[Avaron1974]

Not the kind of stuff I have any interest in, noping the fuck out right now.

 

[OneManVN]

Not the kind of stuff I have any interest in, noping the fuck out right now.

Probably a good call.

 

[OneManVN]

Not the kind of stuff I have any interest in, noping the fuck out right now.

This might make ya feel a little bettah.

Spoiler: Kissy kissy.

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[Zenithtb]

Probably a good call.

Awww! I was only teasing. Didn't mean to really unsettle anyone!

As an edit: I'm a normal functioning member of society, a partner, a father of two etc. I'm nice all-the-fricking-time. When I game, occasionally, I wanna be the Bad Guy, doing things I otherwise cannot do IRL.

Do not let my weird outbursts lead you to think I'm like that off the internet. I'm a lovely, cute and fluffy being in reality

 

[Aristos]

This game looks so damn good but I need to ask something: I'm not into futa so which of the ladies comes with a hidden present?