VN Ren'Py Completed Alison Fall of the Apple [v1.0] [OneManVN]

[dacris69]

Nice new game, the events stirred some emotions but towards the end felt unrealistic; the girl was raped and nearly killed and after just a couple of hours, she was all smiling and trying hot dresses.

 

[AWolfe]

Nice new game, the events stirred some emotions but towards the end felt unrealistic; the girl was raped and nearly killed and after just a couple of hours, she was all smiling and trying hot dresses.

Yeah. When I first played it the thought that crossed my mind is that she's got some agenda and is intentionally manipulating the MC. No one in the real world shrugs off trauma like that. No one. Not even someone with bipolar disorder can flip that fast to a near-manic state. Perhaps she was drugged? Which she couldn't have been as the MC was camped next to her. Yeah, unrealistic.

I just shut my brain off and went with it, figuring that the developer will (hopefully) rewrite those scenes down the road after he becomes more comfortable with the f95zone community and he gets accustomed to being a (porn) game developer.

 

[BrainDeadMonkey]

All I can say is this. Give this next update a chance. If you still don't like it then I guess there is nothing I can do The game is in its day one. You want me to end it already? The characters haven't even been introduced yet... Honestly.

No worries on us giving the game a chance, it usually takes 5 to 10 updates to get a solid feel for the game, no one is getting ahead of the curve just yet.

I honestly believe that every one who took the time to write more than one line of criticism here really wants this game to work out one way or another. We're cheering all the way for you man

 

[OneManVN]

Considering that teaser with her in the cowgirl pose sitting on the MC's crotch (both fully clothed) that VT posted, you can understand why I was shocked. Alas, humor often doesn't translate well in forum posts unless one liberally slathers with emojis and/or explicitly states that they're joking.

We're all good, dude.

Sitting where now? She's on his belly fyi. And I am going to explain a few things with spoilers since people are making assumptions. And that's acceptable, I just want to give them a chance to understand if they wish to spoil the story themselves.

 

[*inhales*Boi]

if the games tags have incest and pregnancy (and the game isnt horrific like another game on this site) then its a must download for me, just pregnancy alone and ill pass until its added

 

[OneManVN]

Major story spoiler. I love talking about the game/story with the community and I want you to know something.

Major spoiler about my little angel Alison.

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As for those of you who say no one does this or that, please stop that. People have been told no one survives a gunshot to the face, some survived 7. People say no one recovers from "Insert here" humans have. No one recovers from "This" is people basing it on their own experiences and understanding of the world. I have spoken to survivors of such horrible acts done upon them. And I kinda know where I am going with this. I'm not just writing with a blindfold on hands tied behind my back. The story is barely a day old. Give it time, and you will understand.

 

[OneManVN]

if the games tags have incest and pregnancy (and the game isn't horrific like another game on this site) then its a must download for me, just pregnancy alone and ill pass until its added

Like I said before, it is part of the story. But I am not going to fast forward there lol.

 

[*inhales*Boi]

thats fine, just let me know when your there(via tags)

 

[OneManVN]

thats fine, just let me know when your there(via tags)

Will do!

 

[Hyped]

Major story spoiler. I love talking about the game/story with the community and I want you to know something.

Major spoiler about my little angel Alison.

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As for those of you who say no one does this or that, please stop that. People have been told no one survives a gunshot to the face, some survived 7. People say no one recovers from "Insert here" humans have. No one recovers from "This" is people basing it on their own experiences and understanding of the world. I have spoken to survivors of such horrible acts done upon them. And I kinda know where I am going with this. I'm not just writing with a blindfold on hands tied behind my back. The story is barely a day old. Give it time, and you will understand.

Ever heard of the saying "the exception proves the rule". There's a lot to buy-in with this story in such a short amount of time.

Also, the guy looks like he's 25 and she looks 30+. Where does the incest come in? Unless she's his sister.
Edit: Guess I misread the incest bit based on another comment.

 

[OneManVN]

Ever heard of the saying "the exception proves the rule". There's a lot to buy-in with this story in such a short amount of time.

Also, the guy looks like he's 25 and she looks 30+. Where does the incest come in? Unless she's his sister.

You lost me completely. Alison looks 30 to you? Well, I guess we all see things differently. As for where the incest comes in, I have already explained it in a previous spoiler. It's part of the story, it's implied and yet undecided if more. But the fact that it is implied, and part of it, even if it ends up being just writing makes it content in the game sadly/gladly depending on who you are. And as for who she is, I guess you'll have to wait. Or

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[Hyped]

You lost me completely. Alison looks 30 to you? Well, I guess we all see things differently. As for where the incest comes in, I have already explained it in a previous spoiler. It's part of the story, it's implied and yet undecided if more. But the fact that it is implied, and part of it, even if it ends up being just writing makes it content in the game sadly/gladly depending on who you are. And as for who she is, I guess you'll have to wait. Or

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How old is she supposed to be? It's possible that since most teen games use characters that look 13 to pass as 18, the scale could be skewed a bit.

The mere mention of incest makes it possible for anyone to report the game. Why would you take that risk if you don't feel strongly about it?

Worth keeping in mind, the average player isn't going to parse all of the text, it has to be easy to follow.

 

[Princess Groundhog]

Edit: Guess I misread the incest bit based on another comment.

OMVN posted a few pages back about Alison's background and the incest (at least thus far) comes from that. If you want to spoil the story a bit, it's there.

 

[OneManVN]

How old is she supposed to be? It's possible that since most teen games use characters that look 13 to pass as 18, the scale could be skewed a bit.

The mere mention of incest makes it possible for anyone to report the game. Why would you take that risk if you don't feel strongly about it?

Worth keeping in mind, the average player isn't going to parse all of the text, it has to be easy to follow.

Yes man, most of them use teenagers. Alison is a 18-21 age group purchased as such. She is supposed to be 19 in the story turning 20 not far from here.

 

[OneManVN]

How old is she supposed to be? It's possible that since most teen games use characters that look 13 to pass as 18, the scale could be skewed a bit.

The mere mention of incest makes it possible for anyone to report the game. Why would you take that risk if you don't feel strongly about it?

Worth keeping in mind, the average player isn't going to parse all of the text, it has to be easy to follow.

Because I am not going to play it on the screen. It's part of the darker story. Background on her past.

 

[UncleVT]

Added v0.2.5 to OP.

Developer Here: 0.2.5 is here. Moving forward I will now try to bring an update every month. Or every 2 weeks for my patrons on their tiers. For you guys, I will fill in all of the missing content with the new branches slowly. And of course, there will always be a monthly free build. I've learned a lot these last few days. And I thank you all for the support. If you enjoy my work please consider supporting me. I'll continue to deliver. Please keep sending feedback and if you have issues leave a comment. I'll fix the script same day likely and send you it to replace yours with it.

The PC version is marked as 1.0 but it's v0.2.5.

 

[AWolfe]

Warning: old v0.2.0 Renpy saves are NOT compatible with v0.2.5.

EDIT: Started a new game. Got to the last image that was in v0.2.0 and when I click to advance the game crashes. Was this new release tested at all? Because it crashes the instant you try to access any of the newly added content.

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[TiffanyMonroe]

I would have never guessed she was supposed to be 19. Are you sure you used the right model pack?

 

[ThunderRob]

as one of the early fans of this game i try to stay positive..BUT...dude..no more "old saves wont work" lol...angry mob stuff right there i'll tell you what..as this game is very narrative driven..having to click through it all over and over without "skip" to new content is nervous twitch inducing

 

[AWolfe]

I would have never guessed she was supposed to be 19. Are you sure you used the right model pack?

She looks to be in her mid-to-late twenties, and perhaps as old as mid-thirties (varies from pic to pic). Teen? Didn't see that.