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My pleasure, and i just retested the build from the links, i suppose it's possible it got corrupted? Anyhow glad it got resolved and I'm sorry. Next time message me directly I'll get on it asap.
Roger that. I'm on the 'gentle route" and still going through the added content. (I just had to max out the text speed in prefs as I was getting annoyed with the slow text display. I read pretty fast, and having to wait for words to appear was starting to get on my nerves.) Just got to the catch/don't choice.
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All i can say is it's gona spoil the story if you read this.That sounds very promising, thanks for that!
Can you give any insight on the pregnancy part or corruption? (I know this is just an introduction but,) I'd just hope it's MC that does the impregnation, I'd rather not hook up with a girl that's pregnant with another man's kid, and corruption element in games often warrants NTR, which I'd like to avoid if at all possible
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I think it's the damn glossiness.Comment: in the scene where she's hugging him, her closed eyes look really weird. It looks like there are shiny, solid black plastic things where her eyelashes should be. Bad render of the lashes.
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i ALWAYS go gentle/nice guy in games if possible..so reading the dev's spoilers makes me happy knowing it'll lead to my fav stuff..lol
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Well that's why i don't try to remove any of those options. People like speedy text, some like it slow default. I play with medium personally.
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Excellent, thank you! And nah, doesn't really spoil anything, merely gives me something to really look forward to, and THAT I REALLY do look forward to =P
That also wasn't a spoiler because that's only the destination, but it's still the journey that matters, and you didn't spoil that ;P
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You and i are gonna be good friends lol. I can't even stand going pro right now, it's about to get "Interesting" I wonder if any of you noticed anything different about the writing this time.
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I wouldn't dream of it! But this might be a spoiler though...
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Yeah, try to get rid of the gloss if you can. RL eyelash makeup is usually non-gloss or semi-glass anyway.
Next issue: I just got to the scene where they arrive at the MC's apartment. The scaling is way off. Alison is almost as tall as the doors. A standard door is around 7' tall. That would make the MC a (tall) basketball player who'd have to duck his head to get through his own doors.
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Ooh you're such a mean little tease! Haha, can't wait to see =P
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Have you ever seen her heels? Serious question. And i didnt design the house. It's a European style apartment, Idk maybe their short over there.
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Again, i did not design the products. I will however see if I can touch up and mask the shine with nearby pixels color. In the future i will refrain from using so much makeup. Maybe it wont shine with closeups. OK, so i checked and it's not even the lashes that's her eyes. They didn't close entirely. And no i am not going to redo it. Imperfections are part of a learning process. Now i know to make sure i don't use gigantic lashes that come with default makeup sets.
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Next quibble (PJs scene)...
Alison: "It's really comfy."
Michael: "I hope you're comfortable in it."
Alison: "Yeah, it's really comfy."
So Michael asks a stupid question that she already gave him the answer to before he asked. Then she repeats herself. No offense, but this is a bit of bad writing.
Alison: "It's really comfy."
Michael: "I hope you're comfortable in it."
Alison: "Yeah, it's really comfy."
So Michael asks a stupid question that she already gave him the answer to before he asked. Then she repeats herself. No offense, but this is a bit of bad writing.
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It's really comfy, and Yeah it's really comfy is not the same thing first of. Second. One was someone expressing themselves, while the other was same person responding to a question, plus they are both being awkward and nervous in that moment. I get that it's kinda lame one liners. But same thing? not really. I will get more creative in the future, no worries it has already been altered. From home entry and beyond. The writing will continue to hopefully improve.
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I do hope you understand i appreciate your honesty. I also noticed the lack of emotion, feeling and one liner paint drying on wall on some of the writing. But i was on a tight schedule which i set. And i wanted to release something before life got busy again. I will go through it over and over many times during development. In hopes to make it as good as it can get. So thanks for playing.Well, at least it isn't one of those crap Russian-English translations.