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Welcome to all the new patrons, and thank you all for your continued support.
Progress is slow but steady. One GPU does that to you.
On the bright side! Three new animations are now completed and ready to go.
I intend to add at least one more new animation to this update (possibly two if funds allow it.) for a total of 4 or 5 animations coming 0.5.5 (Dom)
I will talk to you guys sometime next week with more on the update.

-OMVN
 

Keldar

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I will be honest I am finding this game hard to get through. I find the prologue story elements and Alison's responses pretty far fetch. They don't seem realistic given her trauma. And no I'm not offended or shocked that isn't my motivation. I just find Alison to be fake as the level of trauma suffered is significantly brutal, and yet she passed through nearly unscathed. It just feels off. The story elements of people in power and the corruption and police procedures are clearly written by someone who has done zero research into these things. I'm going to put you in a cell to be raped with no record of your arrest let alone trial because I have a deal with the warden? WTF? That isn't how things work or could work. The risk reward calculation makes no sense for the warden, yet I am suppose to just believe this because reasons?

I am the harem route but I stopped as I just found the dialogue and story so unbelievable and badly written. After the few animations with your police partner in the morning I was unimpressed. Does the story get more anymore ridiculous as the mayor's first scene? I saw it and was yeah right this isn't even remotely believable as people in public office in democracies are constantly under scrutiny and that security guard could easily get a payout exposing the mayor. I hate the mayor but the pay is too good isn't believable as a deterrent based on the level of depravity the mayor is showing, especially given the guard hates him. It is terrible writing and I expect meh writing in a porn game but this is a whole other level of bad.
 
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McWoodz

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I will be honest I am finding this game hard to get through. I find the prologue story elements and Alison's responses pretty far fetch. They don't seem realistic given her trauma. And no I'm not offended or shocked that isn't my motivation. I just find Alison to be fake as the level of trauma suffered is significantly brutal, and yet she passed through nearly unscathed. It just feels off. The story elements of people in power and the corruption and police procedures are clearly written by someone who has done zero research into these things. I'm going to put you in a cell to be raped with no record of your arrest let alone trial because I have a deal with the warden? WTF? That isn't how things work or could work. The risk reward calculation makes no sense for the warden, yet I am suppose to just believe this because reasons?

I am the harem route but I stopped as I just found the dialogue and story so unbelievable and badly written. After the few animations with your police partner in the morning I was unimpressed. Does the story get more anymore ridiculous as the mayor's first scene? I saw it and was yeah right this isn't even remotely believable as people in public office in democracies are constantly under scrutiny and that security guard could easily get a payout exposing the mayor. I hate the mayor but the pay is too good isn't believable as a deterrent based on the level of depravity the mayor is showing, especially given the guard hates him. It is terrible writing and I expect meh writing in a porn game but this is a whole other level of bad.
I'm just going to explain some things you seem to have missed.

The year is 2038 and the corrupt have been running New York for around a decade.
Anyone who attempted to expose the most powerful man in the city would mostly likely end up dead.
There is not really anyone to expose him to as the press and the police are owned.
He is under zero scrutiny.
I have no idea how you could possibly claim to know "how things work or could work" in a long corrupt fictional version of future NY.

As for Alison's reaction to what happened - Alison is far from a normal girl and she has never had a normal life so can not be expected to react like a regular person would in the same situation.

Also, when you chose the Harem route, you should've seen some text saying
"Love is the real, canonical story. The Harem and Dom paths are "What if " Scenarios created for your viewing pleasure and enjoyment." Meaning those routes are not to be taken too seriously.
 

McWoodz

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I'm curious to know... Is the main story done?
No. Long way to go. It's just that it had been so long since Dom got an update OMVN decided to put some time into that. It's by far the shortest route so far.
After the dom update is completed later this month the next update made will either be for the main Love route or for OMVNs other game The SHRiNK. The patrons will decide which one's next.
 

Aweful

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Such a questionable room...
1. The glass makes the room look smaller than it really is (the bed placement)
2. The reflection of the ornamental pillar that doesn't exist along the actual wall/railing outside the room xD
3. Where's the door? Is it supposed to be that on the right, along the "back" wall? With a sort of step at the bottom making this room look more like it was meant to be a shower? xD

lol
 

Keldar

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I'm just going to explain some things you seem to have missed.

The year is 2038 and the corrupt have been running New York for around a decade.
Anyone who attempted to expose the most powerful man in the city would mostly likely end up dead.
There is not really anyone to expose him to as the press and the police are owned.
He is under zero scrutiny.
I have no idea how you could possibly claim to know "how things work or could work" in a long corrupt fictional version of future NY.

As for Alison's reaction to what happened - Alison is far from a normal girl and she has never had a normal life so can not be expected to react like a regular person would in the same situation.

Also, when you chose the Harem route, you should've seen some text saying
"Love is the real, canonical story. The Harem and Dom paths are "What if " Scenarios created for your viewing pleasure and enjoyment." Meaning those routes are not to be taken too seriously.
[I had wrote justifications for my previous post but frankly NONE are needed as I gave my SUBJECTIVE opinion about a piece of fiction and I am completely justified in said opinion even if other people agree or disagree with said opinion.

So... why the fuck do you care? I don't like the story, it is shite in my opinion. I don't want or expect my OPINION to change your mind about the game. I don't need people to agree with me about any subjective media. I don't like peaches, I don't care if you like peaches, why do you care if I hate them? My hating them doesn't impact your enjoyment in the least and your enjoyment of them doesn't impact my hating them. The same is true about this game. If you like the game then play the shit out of it and enjoy it. I certainly don't begrudge you your enjoyment. I let the developer know (as many developers come here to read feedback) I disliked their game and I gave constructive criticisms as to why. The dev can take this information and do whatever they like with it. I mean I didn't review bomb the game or anything just gave my honest opinion. so suck it up princess I don't like the game.
 

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[I had wrote justifications for my previous post but frankly NONE are needed as I gave my SUBJECTIVE opinion about a piece of fiction and I am completely justified in said opinion even if other people agree or disagree with said opinion.

So... why the fuck do you care? I don't like the story, it is shite in my opinion. I don't want or expect my OPINION to change your mind about the game. I don't need people to agree with me about any subjective media. I don't like peaches, I don't care if you like peaches, why do you care if I hate them? My hating them doesn't impact your enjoyment in the least and your enjoyment of them doesn't impact my hating them. The same is true about this game. If you like the game then play the shit out of it and enjoy it. I certainly don't begrudge you your enjoyment. I let the developer know (as many developers come here to read feedback) I disliked their game and I gave constructive criticisms as to why. The dev can take this information and do whatever they like with it. I mean I didn't review bomb the game or anything just gave my honest opinion. so suck it up princess I don't like the game.
I honestly don't care what you like, I was merely trying to explain some of the things that you seemed to have missed.
The response you gave seemed disproportionately aggressive but, y'know, that's just my opinion.

Side note - I can eat a peach for hours.
 

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[I had wrote justifications for my previous post but frankly NONE are needed as I gave my SUBJECTIVE opinion about a piece of fiction and I am completely justified in said opinion even if other people agree or disagree with said opinion.

So... why the fuck do you care? I don't like the story, it is shite in my opinion. I don't want or expect my OPINION to change your mind about the game. I don't need people to agree with me about any subjective media. I don't like peaches, I don't care if you like peaches, why do you care if I hate them? My hating them doesn't impact your enjoyment in the least and your enjoyment of them doesn't impact my hating them. The same is true about this game. If you like the game then play the shit out of it and enjoy it. I certainly don't begrudge you your enjoyment. I let the developer know (as many developers come here to read feedback) I disliked their game and I gave constructive criticisms as to why. The dev can take this information and do whatever they like with it. I mean I didn't review bomb the game or anything just gave my honest opinion. so suck it up princess I don't like the game.
I only see one princess here responding to nice post like a caveman...... constructive criticism hahahahahah
 

OneManVN

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Such a questionable room...
1. The glass makes the room look smaller than it really is (the bed placement)
2. The reflection of the ornamental pillar that doesn't exist along the actual wall/railing outside the room xD
3. Where's the door? Is it supposed to be that on the right, along the "back" wall? With a sort of step at the bottom making this room look more like it was meant to be a shower? xD

1. The glass makes the room look smaller than it really is (the bed placement) I didn't make the room.

2. The reflection of the ornamental pillar that doesn't exist along the actual wall/railing outside the room xD It exists on the outer wall. Otherwise, why would it reflect? Is it a ghost asset that has come to haunt you?

3. Where's the door? Is it supposed to be that on the right, along the "back" wall? With a sort of step at the bottom making this room look more like it was meant to be a shower? xD The door is exactly where it is clearly shown. To the right of the image, you are seeing. It's not a great design, or asset mind you, but it gets the job done. In fact, the door doesn't even open!
 
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OneManVN

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I will be honest I am finding this game hard to get through. I find the prologue story elements and Alison's responses pretty far fetch. They don't seem realistic given her trauma. And no I'm not offended or shocked that isn't my motivation. I just find Alison to be fake as the level of trauma suffered is significantly brutal, and yet she passed through nearly unscathed. It just feels off. The story elements of people in power and the corruption and police procedures are clearly written by someone who has done zero research into these things. I'm going to put you in a cell to be raped with no record of your arrest let alone trial because I have a deal with the warden? WTF? That isn't how things work or could work. The risk reward calculation makes no sense for the warden, yet I am suppose to just believe this because reasons?

I am the harem route but I stopped as I just found the dialogue and story so unbelievable and badly written. After the few animations with your police partner in the morning I was unimpressed. Does the story get more anymore ridiculous as the mayor's first scene? I saw it and was yeah right this isn't even remotely believable as people in public office in democracies are constantly under scrutiny and that security guard could easily get a payout exposing the mayor. I hate the mayor but the pay is too good isn't believable as a deterrent based on the level of depravity the mayor is showing, especially given the guard hates him. It is terrible writing and I expect meh writing in a porn game but this is a whole other level of bad.
Seeing as you fancy voicing your opinion, I figured I may as well do the same. After all, you clearly are a much better writer and storyteller than I am. In fact, from what I've been told your game is one of the best ones on F95. Fyi, if you don't like it don't play it. As for your opinion, I've said this once or twice. Idc.

Now before I proceed with ignoring you permanently and focus on what matters. There was nothing constructive about your opinion.

As we speak, somewhere in a country that is not the safe little space country you are clearly living in... Based on the level of arrogance displayed in this text. There are people who get arrested and are thrown in jail permanently for simply sneezing on the wrong shoes. No due process, no trial, no trace of anything.

In 2038 in a highly corrupt, even more so than the current level of real-life corruption in 2020 NYC which is enough to make all of my story believable. Someone who has connections, can and will do anything they want. The mayor has connections all the way up to the top, and a simple phone call from him can make you cease to exist. Go live in Chechnya and mouth off on the president there, watch what happens to you. Since you like realism that is.

And if that's not something you can "swallow" then that's not a problem for me. Write your own ultra-realistic story, based on years of research and interviews with victims. I will continue to write my poorly written unbelievable story to my heart's content. Take care now, and don't waste your bandwidth downloading my unbelievable story, I'm sure there is a daughter somewhere out there asking her daddy to massage her breasts to improve her circulation waiting for you. Much more believable no doubt.
 

OneManVN

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Back in the land of zero fucks to give about opinions.
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This lethal short little thing gets her very own 270frames (9 seconds warmup animation.) just a teaser for this release. Her story will continue with part two in a week or two. Should have part one out hopefully by Friday/Sat on patron. I didn't want to leave people waiting without having at least something for this release.
 
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Aweful

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I will be honest I am finding this game hard to get through. I find the prologue story elements and Alison's responses pretty far fetch. They don't seem realistic given her trauma. And no I'm not offended or shocked that isn't my motivation. I just find Alison to be fake as the level of trauma suffered is significantly brutal, and yet she passed through nearly unscathed. It just feels off. The story elements of people in power and the corruption and police procedures are clearly written by someone who has done zero research into these things. I'm going to put you in a cell to be raped with no record of your arrest let alone trial because I have a deal with the warden? WTF? That isn't how things work or could work. The risk reward calculation makes no sense for the warden, yet I am suppose to just believe this because reasons?

I am the harem route but I stopped as I just found the dialogue and story so unbelievable and badly written. After the few animations with your police partner in the morning I was unimpressed. Does the story get more anymore ridiculous as the mayor's first scene? I saw it and was yeah right this isn't even remotely believable as people in public office in democracies are constantly under scrutiny and that security guard could easily get a payout exposing the mayor. I hate the mayor but the pay is too good isn't believable as a deterrent based on the level of depravity the mayor is showing, especially given the guard hates him. It is terrible writing and I expect meh writing in a porn game but this is a whole other level of bad.
I agree with OneManVN... If you don't like it, create your own shit. I'm sure you can do better with your terrible sentence structure and your ability to describe events poorly.
(y):coffee:
 

gestved

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Well, I've skipped last update, so this time I've started it all over again and went with the love route first, and to my surprise characters had changed quite a lot when the last love update started. Renders looked pretty bad compared with earlier versions, girls eyebrows were for some reason almost gone, poor Shadow looked hideous, and that version of her was actually my favorite before.

Them I've played the new harem update, when I got in the new content I noticed difference in the lightining and thought it would be as bad as the love version, but it's a hundred times better, girls look fine and not much different than before. I'm guessing the dev started using a new rendering software and struggled a bit with it at first.

I enjoyed the framing of scenes in this update as well, older updates sometimes looked too distant in the framing, now you can see the characters in much more detail

The dev plans on rerendering the last love update? I know it's time consuming, but at least it would be just in the rendering side, the script and coding is already done
 

RandyPhoenix

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I wont saw any walkthrough for game. Being Asshole, kind or proffesional? :D Anyone can say me some hints about that. I mean being asshole gives domination path? Or being kind will give love path maybe?
 
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