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switches ?Simple really, some of the girls in the Harem and Dom routes are switches.
switches ?Simple really, some of the girls in the Harem and Dom routes are switches.
Reaaly speedy witches....switches ?
A switch is someone who can take either the role of dominant or submissive.switches ?
I'm just going to explain some things you seem to have missed.I will be honest I am finding this game hard to get through. I find the prologue story elements and Alison's responses pretty far fetch. They don't seem realistic given her trauma. And no I'm not offended or shocked that isn't my motivation. I just find Alison to be fake as the level of trauma suffered is significantly brutal, and yet she passed through nearly unscathed. It just feels off. The story elements of people in power and the corruption and police procedures are clearly written by someone who has done zero research into these things. I'm going to put you in a cell to be raped with no record of your arrest let alone trial because I have a deal with the warden? WTF? That isn't how things work or could work. The risk reward calculation makes no sense for the warden, yet I am suppose to just believe this because reasons?
I am the harem route but I stopped as I just found the dialogue and story so unbelievable and badly written. After the few animations with your police partner in the morning I was unimpressed. Does the story get more anymore ridiculous as the mayor's first scene? I saw it and was yeah right this isn't even remotely believable as people in public office in democracies are constantly under scrutiny and that security guard could easily get a payout exposing the mayor. I hate the mayor but the pay is too good isn't believable as a deterrent based on the level of depravity the mayor is showing, especially given the guard hates him. It is terrible writing and I expect meh writing in a porn game but this is a whole other level of bad.
No. Long way to go. It's just that it had been so long since Dom got an update OMVN decided to put some time into that. It's by far the shortest route so far.I'm curious to know... Is the main story done?
[I had wrote justifications for my previous post but frankly NONE are needed as I gave my SUBJECTIVE opinion about a piece of fiction and I am completely justified in said opinion even if other people agree or disagree with said opinion.I'm just going to explain some things you seem to have missed.
The year is 2038 and the corrupt have been running New York for around a decade.
Anyone who attempted to expose the most powerful man in the city would mostly likely end up dead.
There is not really anyone to expose him to as the press and the police are owned.
He is under zero scrutiny.
I have no idea how you could possibly claim to know "how things work or could work" in a long corrupt fictional version of future NY.
As for Alison's reaction to what happened - Alison is far from a normal girl and she has never had a normal life so can not be expected to react like a regular person would in the same situation.
Also, when you chose the Harem route, you should've seen some text saying
"Love is the real, canonical story. The Harem and Dom paths are "What if " Scenarios created for your viewing pleasure and enjoyment." Meaning those routes are not to be taken too seriously.
I honestly don't care what you like, I was merely trying to explain some of the things that you seemed to have missed.[I had wrote justifications for my previous post but frankly NONE are needed as I gave my SUBJECTIVE opinion about a piece of fiction and I am completely justified in said opinion even if other people agree or disagree with said opinion.
So... why the fuck do you care? I don't like the story, it is shite in my opinion. I don't want or expect my OPINION to change your mind about the game. I don't need people to agree with me about any subjective media. I don't like peaches, I don't care if you like peaches, why do you care if I hate them? My hating them doesn't impact your enjoyment in the least and your enjoyment of them doesn't impact my hating them. The same is true about this game. If you like the game then play the shit out of it and enjoy it. I certainly don't begrudge you your enjoyment. I let the developer know (as many developers come here to read feedback) I disliked their game and I gave constructive criticisms as to why. The dev can take this information and do whatever they like with it. I mean I didn't review bomb the game or anything just gave my honest opinion. so suck it up princess I don't like the game.
I only see one princess here responding to nice post like a caveman...... constructive criticism hahahahahah[I had wrote justifications for my previous post but frankly NONE are needed as I gave my SUBJECTIVE opinion about a piece of fiction and I am completely justified in said opinion even if other people agree or disagree with said opinion.
So... why the fuck do you care? I don't like the story, it is shite in my opinion. I don't want or expect my OPINION to change your mind about the game. I don't need people to agree with me about any subjective media. I don't like peaches, I don't care if you like peaches, why do you care if I hate them? My hating them doesn't impact your enjoyment in the least and your enjoyment of them doesn't impact my hating them. The same is true about this game. If you like the game then play the shit out of it and enjoy it. I certainly don't begrudge you your enjoyment. I let the developer know (as many developers come here to read feedback) I disliked their game and I gave constructive criticisms as to why. The dev can take this information and do whatever they like with it. I mean I didn't review bomb the game or anything just gave my honest opinion. so suck it up princess I don't like the game.
Such a questionable room...
1. The glass makes the room look smaller than it really is (the bed placement)
2. The reflection of the ornamental pillar that doesn't exist along the actual wall/railing outside the room xD
3. Where's the door? Is it supposed to be that on the right, along the "back" wall? With a sort of step at the bottom making this room look more like it was meant to be a shower? xD
1. The glass makes the room look smaller than it really is (the bed placement) I didn't make the room.
2. The reflection of the ornamental pillar that doesn't exist along the actual wall/railing outside the room xD It exists on the outer wall. Otherwise, why would it reflect? Is it a ghost asset that has come to haunt you?
3. Where's the door? Is it supposed to be that on the right, along the "back" wall? With a sort of step at the bottom making this room look more like it was meant to be a shower? xD The door is exactly where it is clearly shown. To the right of the image, you are seeing. It's not a great design, or asset mind you, but it gets the job done. In fact, the door doesn't even open!
Side note - I can eat a peach for hours.
Seeing as you fancy voicing your opinion, I figured I may as well do the same. After all, you clearly are a much better writer and storyteller than I am. In fact, from what I've been told your game is one of the best ones on F95. Fyi, if you don't like it don't play it. As for your opinion, I've said this once or twice. Idc.I will be honest I am finding this game hard to get through. I find the prologue story elements and Alison's responses pretty far fetch. They don't seem realistic given her trauma. And no I'm not offended or shocked that isn't my motivation. I just find Alison to be fake as the level of trauma suffered is significantly brutal, and yet she passed through nearly unscathed. It just feels off. The story elements of people in power and the corruption and police procedures are clearly written by someone who has done zero research into these things. I'm going to put you in a cell to be raped with no record of your arrest let alone trial because I have a deal with the warden? WTF? That isn't how things work or could work. The risk reward calculation makes no sense for the warden, yet I am suppose to just believe this because reasons?
I am the harem route but I stopped as I just found the dialogue and story so unbelievable and badly written. After the few animations with your police partner in the morning I was unimpressed. Does the story get more anymore ridiculous as the mayor's first scene? I saw it and was yeah right this isn't even remotely believable as people in public office in democracies are constantly under scrutiny and that security guard could easily get a payout exposing the mayor. I hate the mayor but the pay is too good isn't believable as a deterrent based on the level of depravity the mayor is showing, especially given the guard hates him. It is terrible writing and I expect meh writing in a porn game but this is a whole other level of bad.
I agree with OneManVN... If you don't like it, create your own shit. I'm sure you can do better with your terrible sentence structure and your ability to describe events poorly.I will be honest I am finding this game hard to get through. I find the prologue story elements and Alison's responses pretty far fetch. They don't seem realistic given her trauma. And no I'm not offended or shocked that isn't my motivation. I just find Alison to be fake as the level of trauma suffered is significantly brutal, and yet she passed through nearly unscathed. It just feels off. The story elements of people in power and the corruption and police procedures are clearly written by someone who has done zero research into these things. I'm going to put you in a cell to be raped with no record of your arrest let alone trial because I have a deal with the warden? WTF? That isn't how things work or could work. The risk reward calculation makes no sense for the warden, yet I am suppose to just believe this because reasons?
I am the harem route but I stopped as I just found the dialogue and story so unbelievable and badly written. After the few animations with your police partner in the morning I was unimpressed. Does the story get more anymore ridiculous as the mayor's first scene? I saw it and was yeah right this isn't even remotely believable as people in public office in democracies are constantly under scrutiny and that security guard could easily get a payout exposing the mayor. I hate the mayor but the pay is too good isn't believable as a deterrent based on the level of depravity the mayor is showing, especially given the guard hates him. It is terrible writing and I expect meh writing in a porn game but this is a whole other level of bad.