I'm... poorly written?
Sure.
Look, I don't like hunting for all 5 star games. I saw your game, for it's number of reviews, isn't the highest rated... but it certainly isn't horribly rated, so I thought, given the premise, it deserved a look.
And, to your credit, you make a better game then I would. Which is why I don't make games.
But before you go after someone for criticizing your writing, maybe you should wade through your reviews.
Your renders are decent and most people are here for porn. With that in mind, a lot of 5 stars tend to get handed out freely. And no doubt, some people actually did like the story.
But while I hoped for a hidden gem in this game, I'm not finding it. Writing is all over the place, characters behave bizarrely, and, as so many people try to make clear to you in the reviews, more words does not equal better content.
The premise is not bad. The characters could work. But as a story and a game experience, until you get out of the way of your own ego, and read and take to heart all your negative feedback, and treat it as input to help guide you to do better, instead of treating it as just an insult, your game will be mediocre, at absolute best.
