VN Ren'Py Altered [v0.3] [Mr.J]

[LeRoy2299]

Nice hairstyle

 

[Mr.J_Dev]

Nice hairstyle
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The Abe lincoln special

 

[Woodstock_1983]

I remember bringing this up to the Dev but it looks like it wasn't fixed. I thought it was supposed to say make a guy blush not girl?

 

[Juerhullycin]

I remember bringing this up to the Dev but it looks like it wasn't fixed. I thought it was supposed to say make a guy blush not girl? View attachment 4181008

MC just tries to be funny

 

[Mr.J_Dev]

I remember bringing this up to the Dev but it looks like it wasn't fixed. I thought it was supposed to say make a guy blush not girl? View attachment 4181008

Sorry forgot to clarify its meant to be a joke

 

[battali0n]

Glad your enjoying it so far, as for the skipping and avoiding topic, I decided to go with avoiding certain content and the secondary cast of girls(Those who are not tied heavily to main plot of the story).
The reason why the primary cast of females isn't avoidable is due to how I wanted to write the story. The story isn't just about the M.C, but also these women that are a part of his life. That's why if I cut out any of the primary cast in anyway it will make certain points in the story confusing.
As for the sexual content, There will always only be one guy the M.C, While I generally don't mind lesbian content in other people's games. I still prefer for the M.C to always be involved in some way and not just feel like he is sitting in the corner waiting to be tagged in. All that being said while I did have to change a decent chunk of my original outline for the story, to accommodate for being able to bring the option to avoid certain sexual content and the secondary cast of females(You can pick and choose who you want to decline a relationship with).
If people are respectful in voicing their opinions and critiques about the story I'm willing to listen and take it into consideration, but I will only make changes that won't change my overall plan for the story. I know I kind of rambled there, but hopefully this helps.

Hi,
I'm a bit late to the party because I have started waiting until several updates before I check a new developers work out. I was really impressed and enjoying your VN until I got this vibe that your were going to add lesbian content and I stopped to read the thread.
I used to support a lot of harem developers until everyone started turning them into Poly's with lesbian content. At first I was really bored by it and skipped through it but as time went on it began to grow into disgust. In a harem game I want the girls to only be interested in and only sexually interact with me.
Some developers understand the demographic and unless lesbian is their particular kink they will make it optional, as in the player decides whether it happens or not.

After reading through the thread I really still do not have a take on what you will be doing so I wanted to ask.

Will all lesbian content be optional?

Skipping it means it still happens and that ruins the Li for me and I then want to exclude her from the harem.

Could you please explain?

 

[Mr.J_Dev]

Hi,
I'm a bit late to the party because I have started waiting until several updates before I check a new developers work out. I was really impressed and enjoying your VN until I got this vibe that your were going to add lesbian content and I stopped to read the thread.
I used to support a lot of harem developers until everyone started turning them into Poly's with lesbian content. At first I was really bored by it and skipped through it but as time went on it began to grow into disgust. In a harem game I want the girls to only be interested in and only sexually interact with me.
Some developers understand the demographic and unless lesbian is their particular kink they will make it optional, as in the player decides whether it happens or not.

After reading through the thread I really still do not have a take on what you will be doing so I wanted to ask.

Will all lesbian content be optional?

Skipping it means it still happens and that ruins the Li for me and I then want to exclude her from the harem.

Could you please explain?

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. To answer your question:

Lesbian content will always be avoidable, I'm leaving it up to reader to pick what kinks they want to see.
Basically if you don't select a specific kink to happen, then it never happened in the story.
Hope this helped

 

[D4rkK1ng]

Very good VN,
I liked the story (i like the mystery and the underworld/secret services ellements) and visuals are also very good too.
MC is quite good and capable, (but sometimes he looks very skinny and tall and some other times he looks buff and nice so i guess the MC visuals need some refinement) and furthermore all the Lis are beautiful ,interesting and with their own unique personalities
Though my favorite LI by far is Saeko and she is gonna by my main LI for sure (if there is option for solo ending it will be with her)
Albeit i certainly gonna also play a harem

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. To answer your question:
Lesbian content will always be avoidable, I'm leaving it up to reader to pick what kinks they want to see.
Basically if you don't select a specific kink to happen, then it never happened in the story.
Hope this helped

I will also want to thank dev for giving us the choice to choose on the Lesbian content and the clarification that if don't choose lesbian choice then it doesn't happen (and not that i just dont see it),
for example the last scene with Saeko ... personally i want her for myself so im relieved that i had the choice to say No.
I'm quite fed up with the forced lesbian content on many VN and that the LIs suddenly become bi or in some instances almost full lesbian and the MC stops to be the main factor and becomes third wheel in many instances.
Thanks again dev.

Finally i want to say that espacially for First VN its a great job and i really enjoyed it.. i started playing early in the night... and i couldnt stop playing.
I highly reccomend it.
4.5/5

 

[Mr.J_Dev]

Very good VN,
I liked the story (i like the mystery and the underworld/secret services ellements) and visuals are also very good too.
MC is quite good and capable, (but sometimes he looks very skinny and tall and some other times he looks buff and nice so i guess the MC visuals need some refinement) and furthermore all the Lis are beautiful ,interesting and with their own unique personalities
Though my favorite LI by far is Saeko and she is gonna by my main LI for sure (if there is option for solo ending it will be with her)
Albeit i certainly gonna also play a harem


I will also want to thank dev for giving us the choice to choose on the Lesbian content and the clarification that if don't choose lesbian choice then it doesn't happen (and not that i just dont see it),
for example the last scene with Saeko ... personally i want her for myself so im relieved that i had the choice to say No.
I'm quite fed up with the forced lesbian content on many VN and that the LIs suddenly become bi or in some instances almost full lesbian and the MC stops to be the main factor and becomes third wheel in many instances.
Thanks again dev.

Finally i want to say that espacially for First VN its a great job and i really enjoyed it.. i started playing early in the night... and i couldnt stop playing.
I highly reccomend it.
4.5/5

Appreciate the kind words and I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.
I hope to release the next update soon (I might be able to release it before the year ends, but latest would be January.), but this chapter is going to be one of the longest I've released so far. So it's still going to take awhile before this update is ready.

Thanks for reading!