VN Ren'Py Alternate Existence [S2 v2.2.1] [MrKnobb]

[TwistGamerONS]

I see some getting errors when using the patch... let us know what the issues are.. ill see if i can speak to "whomever" created the patch and get it fixed.

Think the main issue was people need to remove the “backup” folder and just use the 2 files.

Minor problem was when Summer says tsk the character convo was for sum not summ so had an error.

Also isn’t it spelled “exhibitionist”?

 

[LWtbo]

I just found the character info menu top right hand coner I wondered what that was lol.
However while reading up on the girls I noticed that Asami's info says she has been working for the family over 7 years.
And yet just before she was giving the MC a hardon in the first kitchen scene.
When he ask's her how long she has worked there she only says 5 years?.
Did she forget how long she's had that job?

Just curious.

 

[HansDampf788]

In the first release there's only voyeurism. One girl getting fucked by her boyfriend, you can choose to keep watching or not (there is something going on with her and the MC, there is a point where you can choose to kiss her or not) and the aunt having a threesome with two escorts (male+female) but doesn't get fucked by the dude and you have to see it and talk with the dude after that.
In the second release there are two sex scene with the MC, that is technically one because they are on different paths. You either bang the MILF next door or her daughter, both optional.

About enjoying it or not, I have no fucking clue. The game is interesting, well written (the MC gets annoyingly self-deprecating at times, but other than that it's not bad), the girls look nice, but I'm completely lost with who is a love interest and who's not and how much more voyeurism with the "technically not love interests" this game is gonna have. I mean, I don't expect the MC to bang everyone from day one, but I don't want to focus on someone just to learn after a while that she's not actually a LI, but I'll get "a turn" when she finish banging someone else.

This post shows me three things that are wrong with this game when it is supposed to be a harem game, 1st in a harem game it should not be hard to tell who the LI's are, 2nd the only guy in a harem game that should fuck any girl is the MC (for me that also counts for non-harem games), and 3rd you should not lose scenes in a harem game because you have to choose one girl over the other and that is how it is in all my favorite harem games.

Hey, maybe the Dev is just doing the same shit as the Dev of AOA Academy and redefines the harem tag by his own standards.

 

[Grelk]

I hope there's a choice to not forgive the Aunt for giving MC up

 

[eddie987]

This post shows me three things that are wrong with this game when it is supposed to be a harem game, 1st in a harem game it should not be hard to tell who the LI's are, 2nd the only guy in a harem game that should fuck any girl is the MC (for me that also counts for non-harem games), and 3rd you should not lose scenes in a harem game because you have to choose one girl over the other and that is how it is in all my favorite harem games.

Hey, maybe the Dev is just doing the same shit as the Dev of AOA Academy and redefines the harem tag by his own standards.

At this point this is not a harem game so the tag was put there prematurely. Going by the site's definition it will be when the MC is in a relationship with 3 women at the same time and so far he can go on a date with one girl (again you have to choose between two) and have casual sex with another.

About the LI's, like I said I have no fucking clue. I got more confused after some people answered my original question... It was the same with the devs other game, where there were women you couldn't pursue at all or didn't have an ending, but at least there you could tell there are three main love interests, who eventually got their individual endings with one of them having a... harem-like one too (well not really, but there were other women involved in their sex life in a casual way). Here you see incest+harem and apparently none of the two women the MC is related too are actual love interests.

 

[HansDampf788]

At this point this is not a harem game so the tag was put there prematurely. Going by the site's definition it will be when the MC is in a relationship with 3 women at the same time and so far he can go on a date with one girl (again you have to choose between two) and have casual sex with another.

About the LI's, like I said I have no fucking clue. I got more confused after some people answered my original question... It was the same with the devs other game, where there were women you couldn't pursue at all or didn't have an ending, but at least there you could tell there are three main love interests, who eventually got their individual endings with one of them having a... harem-like one too (well not really, but there were other women involved in their sex life in a casual way). Here you see incest+harem and apparently none of the two women the MC is related too are actual love interests.

And this tells me that the Dev has no idea about the harem and incest fanbase.

 

[LegendKing23]

For real why do i have to choose between her mother or herself? I just finished the update but supposedly "harem" game making me choose between that girl or that girl like wtf?

That's why i'm not playing that A.O.A. Academy it's got the harem tag for no reason to me.

 

[Tysonator2000]

My first thought is the main character like Jensen? He does show up in the game briefly at the movie theatre. The way some of the women react around him is almost similar. Personally I like Daniella and hope she doesn't end up being a random character that things never go anywhere with. Also, I really hope we aren't forced to see Dwayne's dick every episode.

 

[The ArcKnight]

In the first release there's only voyeurism. One girl getting fucked by her boyfriend, you can choose to keep watching or not (there is something going on with her and the MC, there is a point where you can choose to kiss her or not) and the aunt having a threesome with two escorts (male+female) but doesn't get fucked by the dude and you have to see it and talk with the dude after that.
In the second release there are two sex scene with the MC, that is technically one because they are on different paths. You either bang the MILF next door or her daughter, both optional.

About enjoying it or not, I have no fucking clue. The game is interesting, well written (the MC gets annoyingly self-deprecating at times, but other than that it's not bad), the girls look nice, but I'm completely lost with who is a love interest and who's not and how much more voyeurism with the "technically not love interests" this game is gonna have. I mean, I don't expect the MC to bang everyone from day one, but I don't want to focus on someone just to learn after a while that she's not actually a LI, but I'll get "a turn" when she finish banging someone else.

First, thank you for the concreate reply.
I appreciate people directly answering my questions.
This just deepens my concern though. If the players can't tell 2 episodes in who, if anyone, is going to be a Love Interest in a harem game then their might be a problem.

There also seems to be some miscommunication going around.
I see The Dev say that the proper Love Interests will be ONLY touched by MC, which is fantastic!
But we see a few of the girls having relationships/sex not with the MC.
So, having the Dev say the above, obviously this should put them firmly in the "Not going to be love interests" categories, yes?

If you are just including the voyeurism in the game to be able to have a sex scene for each update. I can assure you, if your story is good enough, people will not care you don't have a sex scene. Hell, look at Out of Touch, the game in my signature. It didn't have sex for the first 17 chapters of the story. Want to know what it did have though? A banging ass story that kept you entertained to the point that you cared about the characters to the point that when the sex happened, you weren't saying "FUCKING FINALLY" you were saying "FUCK YEAH, MC AND (HAREM MEMBER) DESERVE THIS! GO YOU!"
Seriously, just give the MC the sex scenes.

 

[Gavrilo Princip]

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Ren'Py Version: Ren'Py 7.2.2.491
Sun Apr 04 02:51:20 2021
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[eddie987]

First, thank you for the concreate reply.
I appreciate people directly answering my questions.
This just deepens my concern though. If the players can't tell 2 episodes in who, if anyone, is going to be a Love Interest in a harem game then their might be a problem.

There also seems to be some miscommunication going around.
I see The Dev say that the proper Love Interests will be ONLY touched by MC, which is fantastic!
But we see a few of the girls having relationships/sex not with the MC.
So, having the Dev say the above, obviously this should put them firmly in the "Not going to be love interests" categories, yes?

That's what confused me. The dev said "only MC will be fucking Li's and his harem". Does that mean that every woman we see with someone else is automatically not a LI (so already two of them crossed out) or does he mean that will happen after they become part of this supposed harem?

 

[xXwankerXx]

Samara, Summer and Anne are not love interests but you will be able to have your fun with them.

Say what ?? Those 3 ain't LIs ?? Da fuq ?? Who the fuck are the LIs then ?? Sorry for the interrogation, but u lost me after that statement. Did the dev say that or is it your personal opinion coz I'm confused AF. There's a big ass harem tag, and the aunt, her bitchy daughter and sweet Samara ain't LIs ?? Ok, in Samara's case the MC would be a massive douche to steal her away from his friend, but the other two ??

I see some getting errors when using the patch... let us know what the issues are.. ill see if i can speak to "whomever" created the patch and get it fixed.

Be a bro' and ask him if Anne and her daughter are LIs or if the MC can at least fuck them coz I'm confused AF after reading Englen's post. Also, will the game really be a harem game or was that tag put there prematurely... I don't have a problem with choosing between the ladies, but it's better to come clean so that the other players won't mistake it for a harem fuckfest if it's not. The headache isn't worth it, believe me.

I hope there's a choice to not forgive the Aunt for giving MC up

Well yeah, but first we need to hear her explanation, then judge. And why wouldn't you forgive her or want to avoid her when some spankings can do the job.

About the LI's, like I said I have no fucking clue. I got more confused after some people answered my original question...

I feel you bruh, me too. Like damn, man. That bitch put him in a foster care system and let him struggle his whole life to put food on the table and make money. Why she shouldn't be a LI to really "redeem" herself is beyond comprehension.

If you are just including the voyeurism in the game to be able to have a sex scene for each update. I can assure you, if your story is good enough, people will not care you don't have a sex scene.

True dat. Nobody gives a flying fuck about voyeurism scenes, why do devs even bother to put them in their games ?? Devs should do 2 things, tell their stories how they want and choose between NTR or non NTR. Period. Voyeurism and dream sex scenes are just a waste of precious time and resources. Plus, it makes the MC look like a pathetic creep who is happy to watch and fap bcz he can't seduce a woman.

 

[Englen]

Say what ?? Those 3 ain't LIs ?? Da fuq ?? Who the fuck are the LIs then ?? Sorry for the interrogation, but u lost me after that statement. Did the dev say that or is it your personal opinion coz I'm confused AF. There's a big ass harem tag, and the aunt, her bitchy daughter and sweet Samara ain't LIs ?? Ok, in Samara's case the MC would be a massive douche to steal her away from his friend, but the other two ??

The girls in the game are basically split in 3 categories, Main LIs, harem members and flings/hook-ups. There are gonna be like 15 girls. You will be able to get close to Anne and her daughter Summer and have your fun with them but you wont get as close to them as you will the main LIs.

 

[The Sailor Man]

And this tells me that the Dev has no idea about the harem and incest fanbase.

Oh so..... from where you have the conclusion that Anne is aunt, or is your wish to have a incest here? And the escort scene , let me to tell you this, Anne tell you from the start than is in girl only amd the Samara scene is only two ppl what have sex, from man perspective want to bang a sexy girl and make her a submisive, probably after hear how tell her what to wear and not, and from women is just sex to achive his own purpose, and MC even care, you can enjoy the sex scene or not is your decision. And if you play a game only after read some comentary on this post ... then... your los. You better know the dev from previous game and after make statement about some concept. And forgive my bad english.


Edit : And who care about LI and who is LI when have this beautiful girls even from previous game to bang? you guy are nuts you look for the needle in the hay cart. it's just a pretext to complain. Come one, you are better than that.

 

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[Englen]

Man what are you talking about how are they not a main LI? Do you know it somehow from dev? Then who the heck the supposedly "main LI"s here? Who left if they are not that doesn't make any sence. First game making me choose between Tania or Andrea then that neighbor or her daughter now this shit.

I thought i will finally enjoy a harem and incest game from mrknobb i was so happy after other game now we got this kinda things going on.

Andrea and Tania are both girlfriend options, they even say in the dialogue that you aren't picking between them but instead who you spend time with.

 

[Gavrilo Princip]

You're using a mod, I believe.
Click the "Reload" button on the error screen. Shouldn't happen again.

click reload button million times nothing happened

 

[xXwankerXx]

You will be able to get close to Anne and her daughter Summer and have your fun with them but you wont get as close to them as you will the main LIs.

So u can just fuck them, but u can't romance them. No dates, no sweet talk or shit like that, is that correct ?? I hope the sex scenes are good at least.

Then who the heck the supposedly "main LI"s here? Who left if they are not that doesn't make any sence.

Ikr. He kicked us in the nuts once with RTP, and he does it again with AE... I'mma file a complaint against him. I don't understand how you can fuck the aunt and not romance her, but maybe her ex-hubby gets back in the pic and we see that sweet happy ending that the husband deserves after what he did to her and her daughter. This is bullshit, bro'.

I thought i will finally enjoy a harem and incest game from mrknobb i was so happy after other game now we got this kinda things going on.

It doesn't have to be all women on MC's dick only, but at least the really attractive ones with a smash or pass option, especially those who try to "redeem" themselves for being cunts in the past. Storywise, the aunt tries to buy MC's affection and make him forgive her for what he had to endure bcz of her, not getting romantically involved doesn't make sense, this is an incest game, not some slice of life cheap crap. We now wait for the 0.3 update, and we don't even know who the damn LIs are... wtf ??

 

[The ArcKnight]

That's what confused me. The dev said "only MC will be fucking Li's and his harem". Does that mean that every woman we see with someone else is automatically not a LI (so already two of them crossed out) or does he mean that will happen after they become part of this supposed harem?

That right there is something I absolutely detest.
Don't introduce a girl, make us watch her fuck someone else, and then introduce her later as one of the main love interests.
You will lose a portion of your audience that do not want to see someone they will be fucking having sex with someone else first.

Also, introducing all these side characters first before introducing any of the main love interest just muddies the waters.
I want a clear goal and who the MC is supposed to care about.

Lets say there are 15 girls as reported
Of that, 3 of them are Main Love Interests
another 5 of them are Harem members but not main girls.
and finally, 7 are casual flings.

If you have such a large cast, why introduce the 7 casual girls first?
If you have girls which you will have only casual flings, why do you need the voyeurism? Just have the MC score with one of the fuckbuddies instead if you need sex content but don't want to jump the shark with the Main girls or Harem members.

I for one would rather be able to focus on the Main Love interest or Harem members then any casual flings with someone who won't remain loyal to MC. I'm cool with side characters having their own love interests but that shouldn't be at the expense of the MC having time with his love interests, he is the Main Character after all.

 

[KeiNineX]

So the three main girls at the moment are not LIs? I don't really care cause I don't like them but who are the LIs then? This is kinda weird.