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I cant make it too obvious you know who is watching if you know what I mean.
- Feb 10, 2021
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Okay so, the pros: Cute girls I guess.
The cons? The story's whatever, it could even be good honestly to some degree. My main thing is, you should really have this ran under an editor. Have someone go through the script because there's a lot of stuff I don't understand. Is the girls name Ryan or Rayan?
The cons? The story's whatever, it could even be good honestly to some degree. My main thing is, you should really have this ran under an editor. Have someone go through the script because there's a lot of stuff I don't understand. Is the girls name Ryan or Rayan?
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Most of my opinions have already been outlined here. Writing needs work but fixable. The renders are struggling big time. New DAZ user? Please take the time before your next release to light your scenes and render them cleanly. The idea is good. The project seems legit but that's going to kill this thing in the crib if the renders look worse than what a real time 3D engine can put out. Not shade, but honest criticism.
- Sep 9, 2018
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LegacyUser thank you for your feedback, I myself not completely satisfied with the renders, but working with old CPU for rendering make the rendering time so long so redoing the image is bit hard know but I will try my best and yes sir I am new DAZ user, thanks again.
Fuck Anglo dominance. A bit diversity is enjoyable now and then. Honestly I don't even remember the names of my favorite adult games. By giving the characters more exotic/foreign names you have the opportunity to get some free flavor. You could even stand out a bit by it. Nobody will remember the 13th Katie, but maybe someone will remember Tatiana. You don't have to go full authentic Slav names and better don't because most of us won't be familiar with the alphabet or the pronunciation. Just do Hollywood (westerinzed) Slav names: Anna, Katja, Olga, Masha, etc.
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you have good point there ! I may even use one of the names you mentioned, thank you.
One person's skip is another person's kink.
This isn't an airport, you don't need to announce your departure.
- Jun 26, 2018
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If they're just skippable I guess I'm going to pass.
In any case, thanks for the game and good luck
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Never be afraid to ask for help too. There are people on the forum that are willing to help. My time is limited but I'd be happy to proof and edit English if you would like. Half the time I'm bored waiting on my renders to finish.
- Sep 9, 2018
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yeah and for the mac the anonfile is a mega, it must be a mistake, don't look to the name just look at the logo, thank you for the notification.
This game has nothing to show. It's 24 images of VERY low quality (likely preview renders), even the poses need more work.
Also, the Python and Renpy libraries are twice the size of the actual game content.
I'd say, interesting, but developer, there is no point in releasing a game with only ONE image as actual adult content. You won't gain followers that way.
You need to show at least SOME better looking images and some animation, if not just three poses alternating or something.
Your images are flat and lifeless. They are 1080p and that's about what good can be said about them.
As it is now, it has nothing of interest at all, other than the beginning of a story framework. And 24 images.
PS:
Game data: 11.5 MB
Renpy data: 133 MB
BTW, for the €1 patrons, they get the previous tier benefits
And images of characters on your patreon should not be locked to patrons only. You do need to show your skills off in some way, and you're not doing it in the game image slideshow.
Also, the Python and Renpy libraries are twice the size of the actual game content.
I'd say, interesting, but developer, there is no point in releasing a game with only ONE image as actual adult content. You won't gain followers that way.
You need to show at least SOME better looking images and some animation, if not just three poses alternating or something.
Your images are flat and lifeless. They are 1080p and that's about what good can be said about them.
As it is now, it has nothing of interest at all, other than the beginning of a story framework. And 24 images.
PS:
Game data: 11.5 MB
Renpy data: 133 MB
BTW, for the €1 patrons, they get the previous tier benefits
And images of characters on your patreon should not be locked to patrons only. You do need to show your skills off in some way, and you're not doing it in the
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- Sep 9, 2018
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thanks for trying the game and the feedback all will be fixed in the next update, and to be honest i spent like15 min setting up pateron so i konw it's a bet mess over there.This game has nothing to show. It's 24 images of VERY low quality (likely preview renders), even the poses need more work.
Also, the Python and Renpy libraries are twice the size of the actual game content.
I'd say, interesting, but developer, there is no point in releasing a game with only ONE image as actual adult content. You won't gain followers that way.
You need to show at least SOME better looking images and some animation, if not just three poses alternating or something.
Your images are flat and lifeless. They are 1080p and that's about what good can be said about them.
As it is now, it has nothing of interest at all, other than the beginning of a story framework. And 24 images.
PS:
Game data: 11.5 MB
Renpy data: 133 MB
BTW, for the €1 patrons, they get the previous tier benefitsgameimage slideshow.
- Sep 9, 2018
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i hope you don't get any nightmares tonight