VN Ren'Py Abandoned Alternative Family [v0.5] [Giant Dwarf]

TheDick69+ · Jun 6, 2022

I downloaded the game and liked it. Tried it again with the fixed script and liked it even more. Proofreading, yes, but you have already said that yourself. Not a fan of trap, but if the scenes are avoidable that would be good with me. Else I do have a Ctrl key on my keyboard and I know how to use for it skipping!

Keep up the good work Dev!

And many scenes with Olivia...

Deleted member 1571716 · Jun 13, 2022

Gave this a go and it needs a ton of work. Renders are grainy and some are out of sync with the writing. Dev needs a proofreader posthaste. Also, is it 'Ryan' or 'Rayan'? Either way, that character needs a redo. Besides the fact it needs proofreading, the writing is subpar. Reads like a 12 year old wrote it. I will keep an eye on this. I wish you luck, Giant Dwarf

Giant Dwarf · Jun 13, 2022

Wolf™ thank you for the feedback, I totally agree with what you said and some changes are already been made, for more details please check Patreon page or discord, thank again I appreciate your feedback.

Deleted member 1571716 · Jun 13, 2022

Giant Dwarf said:
Wolf™ thank you for the feedback, I totally agree with what you said and some changes are already been made, for more details please check Patreon page or discord, thank again I appreciate your feedback.

I hope you're not going to remove Ryan? Your new pic has her/him removed. Ryan would be the only reason I would keep my eye on this one. Am about to head to the gym now, will join your Discord when I get back.

Deleted member 1571716 · Jun 13, 2022

Giant Dwarf joined and became an iron tier patron so you know I'm watching.

Giant Dwarf · Jun 13, 2022

Wolf™ thank you sooo much for your support it means a lot to me and you are welcome to watch as you like after all I am still in the beginning and I need a lot of feedback and guidance.
PS: your name is really hard to tag.

Deleted member 1571716 · Jun 13, 2022

Giant Dwarf said:
Wolf™ thank you sooo much for your support it means a lot to me and you are welcome to watch as you like after all I am still in the beginning and I need a lot of feedback and guidance.
PS: your name is really hard to tag.

You're welcome and yeah, I know.

Giant Dwarf · Jun 21, 2022

New character

ahxjosu · Jun 25, 2022

is harem in planning?

Giant Dwarf · Jun 25, 2022

ahxjosu absolutely

ahxjosu · Jun 26, 2022

Giant Dwarf said:
ahxjosu absolutely

no jel?

Daveck · Jun 29, 2022

I can forgive the giant exclamation mark, but not the flashbang white background it's on.

Giant Dwarf · Jun 30, 2022

Next update review:

trying a new rendering method and I need your opinion on quality.

YogSothoth1982 · Jul 2, 2022

TheDick69 said:
I downloaded the game and liked it. Tried it again with the fixed script and liked it even more. Proofreading, yes, but you have already said that yourself. Not a fan of trap, but if the scenes are avoidable that would be good with me. Else I do have a Ctrl key on my keyboard and I know how to use for it skipping! Keep up the good work Dev! And many scenes with Olivia...

The truth is that if they can be avoided, then it's a game that may interest me. But as far as I know, they can only be skipped, so in my case, I don't think I'll get to play the game.

GephGephersson · Jul 9, 2022

Interesting story but the English needs a once over. or twice.

Giant Dwarf · Jul 10, 2022

bamachine I just finished the story for the next update so I had the chance to take a look at the script that you fix and I really like it, it's way better than the original, so if you have some time I would like to take a look at the new update script too and fix all the error that I have maid, thank you in advance.

bamachine · Jul 10, 2022

Giant Dwarf said:
bamachine I just finished the story for the next update so I had the chance to take a look at the script that you fix and I really like it, it's way better than the original, so if you have some time I would like to take a look at the new update script too and fix all the error that I have maid, thank you in advance.

OK, I sent you a DM.

estrada777 · Jul 12, 2022

Updated Android port. Nothing too fancy but let me know if you have any issues.

Version: 0.5

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