VN Ren'Py Completed Amy Girl Next Door [v1.0] [Moogoo]

[Prefect4587]

HUNUTAN I was working on doing a different VN that I had in mind but have decided I want to carry this one on so I am currently remaking this story with better (hopefully) renders and definitely better writing it will be written from the start rather than the middle like this one lol. the premise will be the same but taking into account the suggestions people have made.

Yea, the girl from this game is great. Keep her.

 

[Demnor]

HUNUTAN I was working on doing a different VN that I had in mind but have decided I want to carry this one on so I am currently remaking this story with better (hopefully) renders and definitely better writing it will be written from the start rather than the middle like this one lol. the premise will be the same but taking into account the suggestions people have made.

Great news, we're looking forward to the future adventures of your cute and sexy MC. Really looking forward to what you will come up with. Any plans on a SubscribeStar page or are you just going to wing it for now?

 

[Demnor]

Oh I forgot to ask, what's the timeline for your next release? Can't wait to have some fun with Amy again

 

[Midsommardrottning]

This is really good for a practice game.

Nice render for the MC, I just wish the story continued!

Can't wait to see what the creator will come up with next!

 

[moogoo]

Oh I forgot to ask, what's the timeline for your next release? Can't wait to have some fun with Amy again

Thanks for your patience. ETA on release for chapter 1 is about 7 to 10 days from this post. The release will be under a different name not sure if the mods will create a new post or post on this page.
Chapter 1 won't add too much more story but will serve to lay out the premise and introduce all the main characters. It is a completely remade VN using the same premise but changed slightly to reflect the intent to tell a longer story.
There are some artistic changes. Hopefully for the better, but it is the same character.

 

[Demnor]

Thanks for your patience. ETA on release for chapter 1 is about 7 to 10 days from this post. The release will be under a different name not sure if the mods will create a new post or post on this page.
Chapter 1 won't add too much more story but will serve to lay out the premise and introduce all the main characters. It is a completely remade VN using the same premise but changed slightly to reflect the intent to tell a longer story.
There are some artistic changes. Hopefully for the better, but it is the same character.

That's great news! do you know the name? - just want to know what to look for.

And have you created a SubscribeStar page or somewhere to support your projects?

 

[ƤΘŁ∆Яi$]

OMG !
Just played it, loved it !
It's too short, renders are not very good, and text isn't perfect, but that MC... Wow !
I read someone saying "She's too skinny", or "Just like 99% of female protagonist VNs"...

I just can't agree.
Imo there's just too few good female protagonists VNs out there to complain.

If the story looks like another one, so what?
And this first game (or first release ? <3) being really short, we can't really compare it to big VNs. We don't know the backstory, the plot, etc...
Would be like watching 2 seconds of Chappie and saying "Meh, it's like Terminator" just because there's a robot.
Also, correct me if I'm wrong, but a renpy FP VN with an MC which age is more of a daughter than a mother, isn't that common. I meen, there's GGGB, which was a long VN and got to be completed, Pleasureville - Maddy's Diary, which was abandonned far too soon, Arizona Unbridled, don't know if we're gonna see more some day, and I think that's about it...

Also, I love skinny girls, and it might be the first one I find with one this skinny... Amazing !
Please keep here, and keep her body as it is

For a first try, it's really good
Keep up the good job !
And please, don't abandon the game because of some haters, listen to the ones who love your game(s)

 

[Midsommardrottning]

...but that MC... Wow !
I read someone saying "She's too skinny", or "Just like 99% of female protagonist VNs"...

I just can't agree.
Imo there's just too few good female protagonists VNs out there to complain.

.....

Also, I love skinny girls, and it might be the first one I find with one this skinny... Amazing !
Please keep here, and keep her body as it is

Yeah I agree with this to a certain extent. I find it a bit boring when a heroine starts with a hyper feminine body, especially in stories like this. I find it much hotter when they start skinny and then as the story progresses so does their body.

Ideally it's optional if the woman is the MC, but progressive growth and that stuff is god tier in my mind.

 

[Midsommardrottning]

Thanks for your patience. ETA on release for chapter 1 is about 7 to 10 days from this post. The release will be under a different name not sure if the mods will create a new post or post on this page.

Release when?

 

[Demnor]

Thanks for your patience. ETA on release for chapter 1 is about 7 to 10 days from this post. The release will be under a different name not sure if the mods will create a new post or post on this page.
Chapter 1 won't add too much more story but will serve to lay out the premise and introduce all the main characters. It is a completely remade VN using the same premise but changed slightly to reflect the intent to tell a longer story.
There are some artistic changes. Hopefully for the better, but it is the same character.

Does anyone have any news on this next release? 7-10 days and was posted in November last year January (29th). Anything?

 

[drenai1]

Does anyone have any news on this next release? 7-10 days and was posted in November last year. Anything?

Actually, a quick scroll up the page will show that the 7-10 day ETA was posted January 29th. of this year, not November of last year.

That having been said, I'll confess that I'm a bit curious myself about the delay.

 

[xirbeus]

what morph did you use for MC?

 

[Demnor]

Actually, a quick scroll up the page will show that the 7-10 day ETA was posted January 29th. of this year, not November of last year.

That having been said, I'll confess that I'm a bit curious myself about the delay.

Does anyone have any update on Moogoo and a new version?

 

[bagodoughnuts]

I would like to see this continue to be developed. She could do the bad guys, and then daddy...

 

[Demnor]

Any word from Moogoo?

 

[Inzi1993]

anyone know the name change of this game?

 

[Franky28]

Mis a jour le 13.09.22

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[CutieLvr]

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Overview:
Short VN around 30 minutes of play time, was created as a test game that probably will not be updated just for the purpose of learning renpy and testing my art style. The story is not great as the pictures were made first and the story made to fit but posting as I think there is enough for some to enjoy.
The story follows a young women who has a sudden change of life situation and is "reluctantly" forced to adjust.
If people like this sample let me know as I am working on another VN in a similar vain but hopefully better written and slightly slower corruption.
Please don't be shy offering constructive criticism I definitely need it and aslong as it is not just someone being a tool I will listen.​

Thread Updated: 2021-12-29
Release Date: 2021-12-29
Developer: Moogoo
Version: 1.0
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
Length: 30 minutes
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I just found this game, and I know that it is a "complete" game. If the dev is still on this site I would like to ask him if he has plans for another game and if he plans to use Amy in his new game. She is so cute and down to Earth, a very lovable character. It would be a shame to just let her sail off into the ink well.

 

[Pede rasta 1]

i love it

 

[Envoye]

Thanks guys for excellent feed back I am glad people did judge with consideration of it being a test game.

Thanks to the mods for posting and sorting the page out.

1. Grammar.
Very much noted and something I will work on. Trying to get readers into the mind of the character (and writer) without just describing the emotion is I guess the art of writing and a skill I am working on.

2. Facial emotion of MC not fitting the writing.
Yes I agree was something I noticed while creating it. This is a penalty for ramming a story in to a series of pictures rather than the other way around, but noted and a major consideration for my next project.

3. Quality of renders.
I guess this was the major reason of the test game. I knew I had a good character I had created but trying to use her while keeping the renders at a reasonable data size was so tricky. Things like simple backgrounds might be less immersive but can cut 75% of the render time and render size so finding the right balance is the hard part, maybe I went too far this time. Oh and low 720p was a bad speed choice I will go higher next time.

4. Male protagonist.
I know this is the most popular game type but it just doesn't interest me.

5. Sex scenes too simple.
Yes very much noted using one main picture with just facial changes was too little next game it will be more detailed. Finding the balance of using a new 1 to 2 mb picture or just changing the face for 200kb feels like an easy choice but there is definitely a down side.

6. Story telling.
This is what I find hard, I have an idea for a moment or scene but fitting that into a full story is the skill.

7. Choices and routes.
Obviously this is the dream but also multiples the work massively and something I will need to consider.

8. NTR and darker themes.
I get people do not like it and for good reason, maybe it is a cop-out to reach a emotional point without putting in the leg work with other less abrasive means. I will consider other options in the future although I like it.

Any News to another game or developing this one?