Hello guys! I recently found this game a couple of days ago and got hooked on it instantly! The only thing really holding it back is the Machine translation, so i tried "remaking" the translation a bit. I spend the last two days completely rewriting the whole Intro sequence! By "remaking" it, i mean that i basically took the machine translation and made it into actually comprehensible dialogue. It's not perfect, as english isn't my first language, but i think it's still better than the machine translated version! I removed all the wierd Japanese Symbols in the text, and fixed the text going over the edge of the dialogue box! Note that these fixes only apply to the tutorial section of the game, and not the full game. I also didn't fully "translate" the event where you loose agianst the ghost in the very first mission, because i wanted to focus on translating the Tutorial stuff first. Since my english is not the best, you will surely be able to find some grammatical errors here and there, sorry about that.
Seeing as how
Silentce plans to redo the translation anyways, im not sure if i will continue with my translation, since he could probably make a better one anyways. Since this is my first time translating a game, I would like some feedback from you guys.
It may seem shitty to some, but I think it's still a step up from the machine translated version!
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