Saint_RNG

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Will we get the choice on the corruption path for Veronica to get breast implants?
Planned, but towards the very end of the game.

Game's not bad. Quite a bold strategy to lure players with BBC content if nothing more is planned after the prologue.

I see there are different routes for other family members. Does this mean the POV will change from the main girl or we'll just hear about it without watching it?
The POV will change but there will be no choice for the others, it's Veronica's actions that will initiate this or that route.

I honestly really enjoyed the prologue and really enjoyed the BBC/QOS overarching theme. Seeing that its not going to be continued at all later is pretty disappointing to see as it seemed like it was being set up as the primary throughput for all the future corruption Veronica would be facing especially in relation to the part of how her father views her sister's baby and what she has become. I understand it not being the main focus going forward, but I believe stripping it out completely would be a mistake. I really hope you reconsider and have it still be a part of the corruption, even if its not the main corruption like in his first release.

Btw just wanna say, you made a very attractive main character, especially when she does herself up. As a bimbofication fan, I'm really, really looking forward to future bimbofication that was teased. I can't wait to see her with bimbo lips, tits, and a bimbo butt as she continues the corruption path. As a suggestion, it wasnt mentioned in the teaser, but I hope she goes platinum blonde to really complete the bimbo look. Especially with her already being blonde, her going from blonde to 'bimbo' platinum blonde would add in the corruption of her image.

I also hope corruption path still has her 'make it in life' by the end of it. I hope the ending of the corruption path would be more like her leaving Nathan to be a billionaire's bimbo trophy wife than it would be her ending up as a junkie whore living in the streets.

Overall, I really did enjoy this first release and I hope you reconsider removing/ignoring the QOS content. It doesnt have to be the main focus but I think it works well for the story and adds a lot as one of the various corruption storylines going on. Really looking forward to the bimbofication too!
Thank you for your detailed feedback.

We'll see about the BBC/QoS theme, it wasn't initially planned but given that some people are talking about it, it could be a new fork late in the corruption route, I think Veronica has to be very corrupt to fall into this kind of fetish so it would happen around the 3rd quarter of the game.

The physical transformation will be rather close to the end, the aim being for the game to stop when she has completed her physical and mental transformation. What happens after that may be for another story.
I'd like the game to be fairly short (finish 100% dev in 2 years).

And yes, there won't be an ending where she becomes a drugged-out street whore. It'll be more like a high-class escort, a porn actress or a rich man's wife (several possible endings for the corruption route).

Have to say it's a strange choice to start with a really hot corruption premise which was being excellently executed (albeit at a somewhat fast pace) and then just hit the reset button on it...

Still, given the high quality of this intro I am looking forward to more and will definitely be signing up on your SubscribeStar.
Thanks !

The aim of the intro was mainly to push the content to the extreme, step back down and then gradually build up the intensity of the rest of the story.
I can understand why some people might not like that.
But I like teasing :sneaky:

And further corrupting the girl would be even more exciting.
And what I did not like is the black textbox, yes there is a key H, but it would be better to see both text and scene. Unfortunately, it's hidden and can not be manually changed.
That's exactly what's going to happen next, it just won't be with the BBC/QOS fetish (or at least much later given the early feedback).
I'm going to try to lower the opacity of the black textbox, usually it's designed to prevent the text from being unreadable on renders that are too bright.
 

Saint_RNG

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I agree, hope dev reconsider it but even if not, it's ok. Even Interracial route without all QOS BS will do just fine tbh.
I wouldn't mind doing interracial content (like for Sarah) without the BBC/QOS part. I'll see how I can integrate that without forcing the thing too much.

To be honest, I even stripped out some of the intro content (text) because I thought it was too extreme for the BBC/QOS fetish (particularly in the sentences that Monique asks Veronica to repeat).
 
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dolfe67

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And what I did not like is the black textbox, yes there is a key H, but it would be better to see both text and scene. Unfortunately, it's hidden and can not be manually changed.
Put this file into the /game sub-folder to remove the textbox. Works for pretty much all renpy games.
 
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PushMyButton

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the game is cool, the plot is normal, but I have comments to the character gg why does a young girl's chest hang to the floor as if she were 50 years old and she fed 3 children, a young girl should have slender and young breasts
 
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Saint_RNG

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the game is cool, the plot is normal, but I have comments to the character gg why does a young girl's chest hang to the floor as if she were 50 years old and she fed 3 children, a young girl should have slender and young breasts
They're a bit big for her build and I didn't want them to be too firm, too perfect. I may have gone a bit overboard on the fact that they fall. I'm going to see if I can fix this slightly for the next version.
 
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E_nigma

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So it's a yet another generic female protag qos corruption game? Why is every fmc game so generic and samey lol

At least you're up front about it so normal folk can hit ignore
 
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Saint_RNG

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So it's a cucks only qos type game? WHy is every fmc game so generic and samey lol
Only during the intro (The aim was to make it a little extreme). The rest of the game will be without this fetish (perhaps an optional branch towards the end for this kind of content since some people seem to be asking for it).
 
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Kitiuuu

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the game is normal, the plot is also normal, I like the characters, I would like to make a choice in favor of an intimate place in the settings or at the beginning of the game, remove the hair from the genitals or leave it, I don't really like this part of the body of a young girl, as for me this little bit looks disgusting
 

Saint_RNG

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the game is normal, the plot is also normal, I like the characters, I would like to make a choice in favor of an intimate place in the settings or at the beginning of the game, remove the hair from the genitals or leave it, I don't really like this part of the body of a young girl, as for me this little bit looks disgusting
Not easy to implement in reality, I'd have to do all the renders where there's a naked character in double and some parts of the story that rely on this pilosity would no longer make sense. (She's supposed to shave later in the Corrupted Route).

This hairiness is there to emphasise the fact that she's natural and rather innocent sexually speaking (she doesn't attach much importance to it). This may change depending on the choices she makes later on.
 

lgac1492

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Well, this was surprisingly good. Really a good start. However, it seems to me that the developer slightly exaggerated the "0 to 100" corruption issue. If I had to assess Veronica's initial "corruption" level I would say it is minus 1,000,000. That girl needs urgent sex education classes!. On the other hand, Monique's character is, by far, the most disgusting character I have ever seen in a Visual Novel. She is disgusting from the outside and inside. I just wanted to hit the monitor once and again. I guess the developer wanted to create something like a hypocritical "neofeminist", but again, he exaggerated a lot. In any case, the balance is positive. Congratulations to the developer and I hope you have luck. I just hope this isn't another "American" style NTR reduced to interracial fetish. From the developer notes it seems that this will not be the case, luckily.
 

belovedeggs

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I'll keep an eye on this one but I think it'll be too black and white (morality wise) for me :unsure:

If you do a middle path, that straddles the line of perversion and love that'd be right up my alley but that didn't look like it was in the plans so... as is I'll give it a go for a few updates but I'm not too hopeful about this one :confused: (not calling it bad or anything, just maybe not for me, because looking at the spoilers aside from the twins' pure path being a little bit interesting the rest either looks boring or too perverted and/or depressing for me :()
 

JenMistress

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Well, caught up with the Dev on this game.

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Thank you so much for this game, really was an interesting start, and I will be totally looking forward for more!!!
 
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