VN Ren'Py Angel & Demon [v0.1] [Saint]

[Saint_RNG]

Veronica is written like she lived in an Amish community until a day ago. There's not being corrupt, then there's being an 80 IQ dumbass who can't puzzle out why you'd touch something that feels good lol

The aim is to create a contrast. As I said earlier, I doubt that people like the MC still exist in the West today, but you shouldn't expect too much realism in an AVN.

Also, bizarre choice to revolve the intro around something that won't even be present later on. You're going to attract people who want what you're not making, and not the people who'll want whatever it'll actually contain.

It was a risky choice, I admit.
I tried to remove as many references to skin colour or racial differences as possible before the release. But Monique's character was based on that so I had to leave some in. In the future I'll try to put some interracial back into a sub-route but there won't be any focus on abnormal penis size, skin colour or superiority/inferiority of an individual's 'race'.

Well, this was surprisingly good. Really a good start. However, it seems to me that the developer slightly exaggerated the "0 to 100" corruption issue. If I had to assess Veronica's initial "corruption" level I would say it is minus 1,000,000. That girl needs urgent sex education classes!. On the other hand, Monique's character is, by far, the most disgusting character I have ever seen in a Visual Novel. She is disgusting from the outside and inside. I just wanted to hit the monitor once and again. I guess the developer wanted to create something like a hypocritical "neofeminist", but again, he exaggerated a lot. In any case, the balance is positive. Congratulations to the developer and I hope you have luck. I just hope this isn't another "American" style NTR reduced to interracial fetish. From the developer notes it seems that this will not be the case, luckily.

yes, almost all the content including Monique was taken to extremes (some people love it, some people hate it), I hope there aren't really people like her in real life...
As previously requested, the interracial will be part of a totally optional sub-branch in the corruption route, and even then I'll try not to overdo it on the fetish. (It'll probably be reserved for a separate DLC once the game is 100% complete).

 

[swbfvd]

There may be a sub-route in the corrupted route where Veronica refuses bimbofication and prefers to keep her body as it is (as can be seen with certain porn actresses who prefer to remain natural).

Thats good to know, I love her body, is her maybe becoming a pornstar in the plan at all?

 

[Enlight432]

It wasn't initially planned but maybe I'll add a few scenes about it (nothing serious, they won't end up in love if that's what you're expecting). The twins are very "separate" characters in the story, their story focuses solely on their relationship or on characters outside the family.

Personally, I'm not looking for a romantic relationship between MC and her brother, I'm looking for a tense sexual relationship between the two

 

[Pentagono22]

Congrats to the dev,
this game is really promising, I recommend putting "netorare" in the tags, I hope the NTR is done well, it would be fantastic, when is the next update?

 

[JaszMan]

What a terrible game! If this game is going to be like that too, with all the schizophrenic stuff and long conversations with imaginary characters, it's going to be awful.

Well, I am big on the whole supernatural storylines where the heroine is either in danger of becoming a demon or has a choice to become one, Zoe's Temptations had that. To see the Goody-Goody character have a fall from grace as it were is fun to watch. The Pure routes are fun too,but I prefer the corruption routes myself. This story has that conflict, whether she listens to her demon on her shoulder or her angel,but is being a little devil worth it in the end.

 

[stahalle]

i liked the start and thought interracial would be a big part of this game, but than i read the spoilers and now i know that its not for me. good luck with your game.

 

[Prokopije]

I'd say somewhere in between, she won't be able to fuck everyone (especially within her family if that's what you're implying) but there will still be choices.

I asked because I don't want to see MC in sexual acts with male NPC's I find unattractive.
So, better to ask will there be any forced sex content, which will happen no matter what?

 

[Wilwock]

The aim is to create a contrast. As I said earlier, I doubt that people like the MC still exist in the West today, but you shouldn't expect too much realism in an AVN.



It was a risky choice, I admit.
I tried to remove as many references to skin colour or racial differences as possible before the release. But Monique's character was based on that so I had to leave some in. In the future I'll try to put some interracial back into a sub-route but there won't be any focus on abnormal penis size, skin colour or superiority/inferiority of an individual's 'race'.



yes, almost all the content including Monique was taken to extremes (some people love it, some people hate it), I hope there aren't really people like her in real life...
As previously requested, the interracial will be part of a totally optional sub-branch in the corruption route, and even then I'll try not to overdo it on the fetish. (It'll probably be reserved for a separate DLC once the game is 100% complete).

There's a difference between realism and believability in writing. I can believe in a weird sci-fi universe, a character like Superman is running around, despite the total lack of realism. I can't believe in a world like ours, with someone who has lived in it her whole life and has had a boyfriend that long, would be so ignorant. Just something to consider.

 

[Saint_RNG]

Thats good to know, I love her body, is her maybe becoming a pornstar in the plan at all?

Yes

Personally, I'm not looking for a romantic relationship between MC and her brother, I'm looking for a tense sexual relationship between the two

Not planned then
At some stage of corruption, she might fool around with him, but his personality is rather inverted (he's not a big alpha-fucker and he's not going to become one).

Congrats to the dev,
this game is really promising, I recommend putting "netorare" in the tags, I hope the NTR is done well, it would be fantastic, when is the next update?

For future tag it's planned.
Next update end of August (at the latest).

I asked because I don't want to see MC in sexual acts with male NPC's I find unattractive.
So, better to ask will there be any forced sex content, which will happen no matter what?

Forced with her boyfriend, the rest will depend on her decisions ( so choices).
What happens between the intro and the endings isn't totally set in stone at this stage. But certain characters will be essential to progress along the road to corruption. The pure route will only have the boyfriend for the MC (in addition to the POVs of the other family members).

 

[Saint_RNG]

There's a difference between realism and believability in writing. I can believe in a weird sci-fi universe, a character like Superman is running around, despite the total lack of realism. I can't believe in a world like ours, with someone who has lived in it her whole life and has had a boyfriend that long, would be so ignorant. Just something to consider.

Her boyfriend is just blind (even selfish) to his girlfriend's needs. But this will change in the next release

 

[R1k0]

It's great that the developer is interested in his game and responsive to questions. Will there still be male domination in the game? And scenes when lewd things happen without the heroine's consent, I don't mean rape, but some pressure to push her and overcome her resistance. Or it would look like this: a demon girl whispering in one ear does this, and an angel in the other doesn't.

 

[Trainer7]

Very interesting start, I look forward to seeing where this goes!

Keep up the good work dev

 

[Saint_RNG]

Will there still be male domination in the game? And scenes when lewd things happen without the heroine's consent, I don't mean rape, but some pressure to push her and overcome her resistance. Or it would look like this: a demon girl whispering in one ear does this, and an angel in the other doesn't.

Kind of, probably towards the beginning/middle of her corruption, the aim is not for her to be a submissive but instead tend towards the opposite.

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[R1k0]

Kind of, probably towards the beginning/middle of her corruption, the aim is not for her to be a submissive but instead tend towards the opposite.

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Yeah, it's common when you want the story to go this way and the game developer has the exact opposite plan. Well, maybe it won't be as bad as it sounds.
I remember something similar.

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[DoceDoceComoMel]

THX. It looks good, I'll try it tomorrow when I get back from work.

 

[Saint_RNG]

Hi everyone,

I just wanted to thank you all for your initial feedback (most of it positive and encouraging) !

Also, and I'm only going to do this once, let me inform you that

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• Of course, your financial support will be greatly appreciated and will motivate me, but it's not needed and it won't help me produce the rest of the adventure any faster. I'm already devoting all my free time to it and I can't do any more than that (apart from depriving myself of sleep, but I might not last very long that way ),
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[magneticbird]

Now these renders look great!

 

[ronysins]

Excellent Game and Great Renders. Keep This.