There's VERY little content, just a short intro. Yet the amount of "pls support me on patreon" is really amusing.
Not a bad experience though.
Not a bad experience though.
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don't listen to this guy or what other people are saying about "fucked up body proportions" she kinda busty but there way worse offenders on this site.
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got bored and clicked something together, bc I think the head art sucks ^^
Not that good, but I had fun for making it
Not that good, but I had fun for making it
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+ The two guys at the bus stop looked so shitty that I had to laugh out loud
+- Angel looks like a sex doll... or rather the 2004 3D model of a sex doll
+- She never looks directly at the camera (you can point her eyes at your custom camera in DAZ)
- The DigiUrge logo in the beginning, along with the poopy music, was the saddest thing I've experienced today
- Is this even rendered? It looks like unrendered DAZ materials. Even 3Delight shouldn't look like this
- Look at the enclosed screenshot. Even the characters don't look at each other. And damn, her dad looks creepy af
- Her brother Jake looks older than their dad. A LOT OLDER. And like a Simpsons character
- Landon is almost as creepy as his dad but DAMN is the dad creepy
- Angels looks like 3 different girls throughout the demo
The demo is super short. The renders are so bad that they made me laugh at times. This is the "The Room" of the F95 universe. The dev is the Tommy Wiseau of this universe. Her dad creeped me out and I'm sure I'll have at least one nightmare about him. The fact that so much stuff was so bad yet the dev seems endearing in a few spots during the demo will probably make me return. But not to fap. To laugh. And I'd rather laugh than be frustrated by bad games.
+- Angel looks like a sex doll... or rather the 2004 3D model of a sex doll
+- She never looks directly at the camera (you can point her eyes at your custom camera in DAZ)
- The DigiUrge logo in the beginning, along with the poopy music, was the saddest thing I've experienced today
- Is this even rendered? It looks like unrendered DAZ materials. Even 3Delight shouldn't look like this
- Look at the enclosed screenshot. Even the characters don't look at each other. And damn, her dad looks creepy af
- Her brother Jake looks older than their dad. A LOT OLDER. And like a Simpsons character
- Landon is almost as creepy as his dad but DAMN is the dad creepy
- Angels looks like 3 different girls throughout the demo
The demo is super short. The renders are so bad that they made me laugh at times. This is the "The Room" of the F95 universe. The dev is the Tommy Wiseau of this universe. Her dad creeped me out and I'm sure I'll have at least one nightmare about him. The fact that so much stuff was so bad yet the dev seems endearing in a few spots during the demo will probably make me return. But not to fap. To laugh. And I'd rather laugh than be frustrated by bad games.
I respect that. This is just a demo though, v0.1b is longer. And as far as v0.2b, I am making it longer with more choices.
I plan to develop the scenes and characters as much as possible. It may take awhile before the main character actually has a sex scene, though I do plan to have sex scenes with other characters before then.
1. Honestly, I like her the way she is and probably won't change her body. I may eventually reduce her breast size just a tad (not too noticeable though as big breasts are part of her character) and give her a little more "cushion for the pushin" in the rear end once I get the 'glute control' package in Daz3d, but overall her body will remain as is for the most part.
2. I do give the users the option of keeping her pure all throughout the game. Check out the section where I explain the Pure path, Naive path, and the Experimental path. It will be up to you how the story ends up for the most part.
3. There will be plenty of those types of misfortunes for her, especially in the Naive path.
Thank you for the suggestions and thank you for your interest in the game!
Thanks for your harsh but honest review. It is your opinion and everyone is entitled to it. Harsh? Yeah, but thanks anyways...
Just to explain:
1. The two guys are g2, I didn't want to use my g8 males for roles that would only be used once and never seen again. I only have so many resources starting out, this sht is expensive man...
2. I like how Angel looks. If she looks like a sexdoll, then so be it.
3. Still new at this, so thanks for the advice and pointing out the flaws so I can work on them. It is still very early in development and you have only played the demo so far so not much to go off of.
4. I Have only been doing this for a month and don't have all that much time and honestly put together the logo at the beginning with custom music rather quickly, so it will get better with time.
5. Iray takes forever on my rig, sorry I don't have a state of the art pc right now. And again, I don't have that much time to sit and wait for a 3Delight render that takes 10 minutes an image. I will have to settle with this quality at this time til I can get a better rig. I'm sorry it's not up to your standards.
6. Honestly I did think the Dad looked creepy af too, but he's the only figure I have that looks older. Jake is in his mid twenties and I disagree with you that you think he looks older than the dad. Whatever though, to each their own opinion.
7. She has her hair changed, idk how you can say she looks like 3 different characters, but whatever man.
Anyways, again thanks for your review of the demo.
Thanks.
Perhaps I did over-do the please support part
Just a side effect of spending a crap ton of my savings on this project I guess
After reading a bit more about it on patreon, I feel like it will have way too much stats that will just end up in a boring stat grind like many of the free-roam/sandbox games on here.
If every character has stats like affection and contempt, this will not only be a heavy grind for players on already 3 possible routes/paths, but it will eventually also slower your development times as you have to keep track of every stat and keep building in scenes that ask for certain stat requirements, which I imagine will also have different plays of the scenes. For example scene A for having more affection, scene B for having more contempt.
It'll just be a mess and fail if not done correctly.
Since this is your first game from a developer perspective, I recommend you focus the game to be a Visual Novel for now without too much of these stat interactions.
Learn the engine, focus on doing the content you want to include and get yourself familiar of the work flow a developer will & should have when trying to deliver a good and hopefully polished product.
If every character has stats like affection and contempt, this will not only be a heavy grind for players on already 3 possible routes/paths, but it will eventually also slower your development times as you have to keep track of every stat and keep building in scenes that ask for certain stat requirements, which I imagine will also have different plays of the scenes. For example scene A for having more affection, scene B for having more contempt.
It'll just be a mess and fail if not done correctly.
Since this is your first game from a developer perspective, I recommend you focus the game to be a Visual Novel for now without too much of these stat interactions.
Learn the engine, focus on doing the content you want to include and get yourself familiar of the work flow a developer will & should have when trying to deliver a good and hopefully polished product.
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18 days... 21 in some jurisdictions, and in a very few it's 16... ROFL
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I know my review was a bit harsh, but I try to be as honest as possible because I think the devs deserve it. I certainly never hate on anything just to bring anyone down. I really appreciate you replying to my review, DigiurgeCreations !
I do agree, it can be quite pricey. Have you considered getting the VIP membership at DAZ for 7 bucks a month? There is a lot of cheap stuff for sale, like models and hair and all that. For about 20 bucks, you could probably get about 4 or 5 throwaway characters. And if you'd like to save even more money, you could just take the base G8 male and change it up with a few sliders. Even if you'd create monsters with G8, I'm sure they'd look much better than the G2 ones you're using right now.
I didn't say she looked bad and I'm sure that there's a crowd for her looks.
I agree and I will check out the next few versions.
By "only doing this for a month"... do you mean you just started out learning DAZ, rendering and Renpy? If so, aren't you worried about being a bit too quick? Given a few more months you might be much better at all that stuff and release something that would give off a much better impression of your skills.
Have you thought about getting this?
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It's 10 bucks. You just model your scenes, save them as DUF files (scenes) and then let the batch renderer do the renders while you're not sitting at the PC. You could get a much better quality without having to "sit and wait" like you said. For 10 bucks, I'd say it's worth checking it out. Higher quality might make a lot more people want to support you on Patreon.Whatever you do, please don't change the dad. He may be creepy as fuck, but other than 100 other games that I played and soon after forgot about, I will probably never forget this guy. That's a good thing and something you could build upon. Like, make all the males creepy af even if the girls are sex dolls. It could be its own genre and I think I'd play it for the entertainment value alone. Being serious here.
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Thank you for the advice. Truthfully I have already gotten the hang of the whole stat requirement thing in my test game I made. I will however focus on the VN part of the game mostly in regards to the Affection/Contempt portion of the game. The aim of the Affection/Contempt system is just meant to give you, the player of the game, the freedom to interact more or less with who you want.
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True, honesty is much appreciated bc it will only help me get better. Thank you for the awesome response!
I'm following up with your advice and will certainly get the batch render script. A totally awesome thank you for that!
And yes, I began learning Daz3D, rendering, and Renpy on June 2nd of this year, but I'm a quick learner and dedicated to my craft. That is why I'm not offended by the criticism and welcome it so that I can learn and become better, so again, thank you.
Not that good? This is freakin' awesome!got bored and clicked something together, bc I think the head art sucks ^^
Not that good, but I had fun for making it
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Thank you!when the next version?
Right now I have the 0.1b version available for $1 Patrons on
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as part of a special launch offer and am currently working on v0.2b for an August release..
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I think it looks like a good start and if development keeps going at a steady pace, I'll be very pleased! I went ahead and pledged as a Patron, let's see where this goes. Oh, and, I like the model you used. I don't care if it's "realistic" or not. I did see a few typos, minor stuff like apostrophe use.