- Sep 28, 2018
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This game has some potential. Enjoy the characters so far. Gonna add this to my "Watch" list.
The Engrish didn't make you suicidal? I need to start using my patience is extremely decreasing. lolOverall Nice Update.
But a little Summary:
Good:
- Every Girl looks good (and unique in her own Way)
Sandy = Redhead
Cora = I like the "GothStyle" and maybe it's just me, but she kinda reminds me of the Stepsister from "Freeloading Family"
April = Cuty, i dig Pigtails & Freckles
Nicolette = Blonde Bombshell
Kitty = Tattoos. We need more tattooed Girls!! Even tho i'm not the biggest Fan of her Haircut.
Bad:
- Grainy Renders
- Facial Expressions (Nelia looks like The Grinch or some female Ape from Planet of the Apes in d1_intro04 / d1_club10 / d1_locker13) and Images like d1_herosandy54.png
- Sandys Pussy looks like her Lips are glued together when she spreads her Legs for the first Time. d1_herosandy01 + d1_herosandy02
- Decisions: I have to choose to go Home and Fuck Sandy or i can stay and watch Cora & April?? UNFAIR!
other Decisions lead mostly to the same End.
Neutral:
- Many Typos like: "HER Cock" and Half Nine but Clock shows Half Ten
- Story. Kinda Irrelevant so far. I guess there is Potential, but right now it`s just boring.
- For me there is to much Moaning and "Dirty Talk" and Stuff like: Paradise/Angel/Princess blah blah, blah.
- Nelia looks much better with the Ponytail. Leave it like that
- Sammi. Couldn't care less about him.
Not really, there are a lot worse Games out there, where i kinda understand nothing.The Engrish didn't make you suicidal? I need to start using my patience is extremely decreasing. lol
Oh and Sandy called the mc Greg.
Yeah, you're right. lol I'm ok now. After seeing Nicollete, I put the pill bottle down.Not really, there are a lot worse Games out there, where i kinda understand nothing.
"Perfect" English is more pleasing to read, for sure, but as long as i can read the Context out it's fine for me.
Also i think i'm not the best Example for perfect english, so i only complain when it is like i wrote in the first Sentence ^^
=+
instead of +=
; same you used =-
in place of [/icode]-=[/icode] for Cora. It can seem to be the same, but it isn't. Instead of increment the value by X or Y units, you are assigning a new positive value.=+3
here.Okay, I'm gonna make more skipping if someone's curious just for the hot scenes. I'll pay attention to it!nice update..alot of reading..which makes the engrish more annoying..because there is so much more of it with that much reading..lol...some really nice yumyum scenes..pigtails girl i'm sure will become a fav among the players here..lol
dont really need the skipping imo just less Engrish and more English. But again that is my opinion.Okay, I'm gonna make more skipping if someone's curious just for the hot scenes. I'll pay attention to it!
Thanks for your opinion!
My saves worked. Do I really need to restart?Version 0.3 out :
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Changelog:
Save Games:
- Added 181 images with ~ 10000 words
- Added a Bonus Scene by free poll of Patreon.
- Added a new route. (Nicolette)
- Added a new character (Nelia's manager)
- Added a new feature with the hidden point system.
- New Nelia is completely finished on the Day 1 (Photo session, Locker Room and Club)
- Changed some codes in the previous versions (Because of that, your old save files don't work anymore. Sorry for that, but if you don't want to start a new game, use my save games!)
- Changed the main menu image (April, who is the winner of the first poll) and the design too.
- Sounds are disabled.
- Day 2 morning with Sandy is fixed.
- Fixed some old pictures.
- Fixed other bugs.
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PS : walkthrough for patreon, would need an other hero
Just copied from his patreon, maybe you need because of change in the point system, can't tellMy saves worked. Do I really need to restart?
got this error in gameI'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/v03.rpy", line 402, in script
jump d3_aftpool
ScriptError: could not find label 'd3_aftpool'.
ya..what she said..i like reading..its not the amount of content..its the translation of said content at timesdont really need the skipping imo just less Engrish and more English. But again that is my opinion.