Ouch! It should be "I'll be" and not "you'll be". *Imagine as I'm just punching my own face at this moment.*This is not bad. The renders arent that good. You can see the line around the lady parts for the first girl. There is a difference in the skin tone. And they are all a bit grainy. I saw worse and I think it is because of not enough render power?
The writing has a strong engrish vibe to it. Need a better translations and/or proofreading.
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Just had to laugh at this line ... ^^
There is potential, so keep up the work
Yup, the render power is pretty minimal, my VGA isn't on the top, sorry for that!
Thanks for your comment!