I can really not understand this. He has 5 "proofreaders" (!) named at the end of this update. Are they all 6 years olds, has none of them ever go to school?
Dear "proofreaders" the plural of a noun in English is s and NOT 's. If you write for instance "girl's" that means as much as "of the girl", "something that belongs to a girl". If you however want to say that there is more than 1 girl, that would be "girls", not "girl's".. a normal plural. This stupidity can be seen hundreds of times by different nouns in the dialogues or thoughts, throughout the whole game.
And if you want to say that something belongs to you, that would be "yours", not "your's". Coz "your's" would be in fact the short of "yours is", which would make in fact no sense.
And please understand that "here", "hear", "hair" and "her" mean by no means the same..
Not to mention (but this is a wide spread problem in a certain gneration) that a question mark is a question mark is a question mark and should only be used after a QUESTION, not after a sentence that may suggest a certain degree of uncertainty but is NOT a question.
My God, provided these "proofreaders" are native Americans (which they seem to be, judging by the good amount of elaborated phrases and intellectual words used here) what kind of fuckin' schools do you guys have there in the USA? Have you, dear "writers", ever seen one school form inside? And if yes, how do they let you go through from class to class with such "knowledge"?
5 "proofreaders"... my God.. amazing indeed: