VN Ren'Py Abandoned Another Man's Wife [v1.092] [Too Perilous]

[Grumpy Old Aussie]

i had a hunch that Tori's 2nd game will involved that one small teaser they use on steam as a news banner
which is steph using a blindfold
maybe it'll be that usual "u'll be more aroused if ur not knowing who's touching u" thing that is used here and there in porn world

That would work for some of the paths, but on the paths where Steph/Jason have already fucked, its a bit of a non-event.

Got bad feeling about This business trip that Steph and Jason are going on. It has Jason the pimp using Steph (as a prostitute) to sign contracts and make deals with old wealthy partners written all over it. Feel like I’ve played enough NTR games to know what’s going to go down and don’t think we will be able to stop her, maybe they give you option to not see the scene, but that’s it.

Jason is going? I must have missed that. If you are referring to the guy in the pool that is a different guy.

Me too... I loved the chemestry with the MC and his wife... early on . They were fun. THey thought that adding a little spice in the marriage would be fun..... Then we start to go a little down hill. I hope the Dev can keep the story kinda light and not get into a heavy plot. That would not be much fum IMO.

You hit the nail on the head. The Steph-MC interaction on the first night is what grabbed me and I think a lot of others. Then it went to they have these secrets so most of that interaction lost value as it was them dancing around their secrets. Now its Tori calling the shots and Steph flopping between being Tori's bitch to doing her own thing without MC all in 3 days. The Steph-MC interaction that grabbed everyone is suddenly just a distant memory and MC is now just a puppet.

 

[Grumpy Old Aussie]

This would be something I'm genuinely interested in, because I can't figure it out other than just [it's a premise given at the start of story not open to interpretation]. It would vastly improve the story imo if there were some reveal about how mc spied on Tori fucking or something and she looked like a demon in bed, I dunno just spitballing....

Like a few others here I've always found Tori unlikeable and unnattractive, and the main draw of game for me was hijinx with the wife.

I find Tori attractive physically but definitely unlikeable. A character being unlikeable is not necessarily a bad thing, but in Tori's case its she comes across as someone who dominates the story. Again not a bad thing except in this story the MC-wife dynamic already has enough drama in the bi-polar wife without adding an overwhelming force like Tori to the story. Suddenly MC is just an irrelevant side piece who is at the whim of these two women tussling for control.

There lies my biggest frustration with the game. The game on day one, my character feels like a central piece of the game in this extraordinary dialogue between a dynamic couple. By the time we reach the current place in the game I feel my character is surrounded by a nest of vipers who will throw him away on a whim at any time, his bi-polar wife especially.

 

[Nurikabe]

I base my assumptions on the game I played so far, and judging by that, I'm not very confident; out of the 5 possible outcomes, only one could go this way, but only if you haven't chosen the "I like it" option- so even this branch is probably more likely to go the "Everybody enjoys it" path; also because you only get there if you say you enjoy watching your wife getting fucked.

All the other paths are the usual "MC is the weaver of fate" approach, where happens whatever MC says he is into. If he doesn't enjoy watching his wife getting fucked, it won't happen and he interrupts Steph and the black dude.
As so often in these games, the player and the main char are considered one and the same, and the idea that I want to see the main char suffer without him (or her) enjoying it doesn't come to mind and isn't a playable path.
Especially in games with cuckolding, this would be welcomed probably not only by sadists like me, but also by the target audience of cucks who maybe don't want to have a say in what the bull does with their wives.

So, when it comes to storylines that start with Steph and black dude fucking: you could develop a dynamic between them that shifts the relationship between MC and Steph and the enjoyment comes from seeing this "fall from grace", this struggle for and loss of control and power and so on- there are so many more things than just fucking that define and can intrude into a relationship; and even the fucking can be improved, not necessarily by "harder scenes", but by all the power games and structures that surround it.
But of course, if only happens whatever MC says he's into and he agrees to, then we end up with another game of "choose your sex scenes" decisions instead of a "You decide for MC, but you don't decide what happens" approach with some more interesting story telling.

You've described the anti-swinger route, the submissive cuckold. Some aspect of what you described was the apparent intention of the original "bad ending" plan for this game. The devs have since revised that plan significantly with the desire to remove all negative intentions where there was a winning path and a losing path. The current intention is to have players feel that they "will win, win big, or win really big."

This probably negates any chance of a deep, dark, sadomasochistic cuckold path happening in this story.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Got bad feeling about This business trip that Steph and Jason are going on. It has Jason the pimp using Steph (as a prostitute) to sign contracts and make deals with old wealthy partners written all over it. Feel like I’ve played enough NTR games to know what’s going to go down and don’t think we will be able to stop her, maybe they give you option to not see the scene, but that’s it.

It's a decent guess, though given everything that's happened in the game and the style this author likes; my hunch is it'll be less like [A perfect marriage], or [game I cant remember name where wife gets blackmailed at office that makes sex toys], you know, the typical fem protag ntr/corrupt flavor.......... and far more like the cuckold/reluctant path in couples duet.

I don't think he'll be a pimp, the author is way too in love with the cooldude Jason persona to make him appear lowlife - i think itll be closer to some side narrative on how now steph is now entranced by teh bbc, and the husband acquiesces to hearing her describe her liasons on the trip with random men. (This all occuring on the dom1/dom2 paths)

 

[packard1928]

I don't think this will turn into a BBC game. Steph has to date,,, been with two white guys , one lady and one BBc. I think she realizes the opportunity for many different types of sex... and... enjoys it all. Yes I hate how she is doing it... sometimes a controlling bitch... others not. Me personally I try not to read to much into it... I enjoy what they do together. I did not care for the morning after where she and Gina had an off camera experiance where the MC was not invited.... But he did not care.

 

[Dom Toretto]

Can we get the android link to 1.06i update please

 

[Grumpy Old Aussie]

I don't think this will turn into a BBC game. Steph has to date,,, been with two white guys , one lady and one BBc. I think she realizes the opportunity for many different types of sex... and... enjoys it all. Yes I hate how she is doing it... sometimes a controlling bitch... others not. Me personally I try not to read to much into it... I enjoy what they do together. I did not care for the morning after where she and Gina had an off camera experiance where the MC was not invited.... But he did not care.

Well I think MC will have to get use a to a lot of offscreen sex without him with Tori and Jason and Steph, but think happy thoughts, fun endings apparently.

The BBC thing came about because on the Steam pics Steph has another BBC on her away trip and a few of us saw Steph heading towards the BBC whore story line and we decided to have some fun with it. It may or may not happen or for all we know that might be her big reveal, Queen of Spades lol.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

I don't think this will turn into a BBC game. Steph has to date,,, been with two white guys , one lady and one BBc. I think she realizes the opportunity for many different types of sex... and... enjoys it all. Yes I hate how she is doing it... sometimes a controlling bitch... others not. Me personally I try not to read to much into it... I enjoy what they do together. I did not care for the morning after where she and Gina had an off camera experiance where the MC was not invited.... But he did not care.

I hope you're right, but my take is the whole first half was just establishing a setting for the game the dev truly wanted. Indeed, I may be reading into too much, but there's just something different about the way the jason/tori interactions go versus those between steph and donnie or steph and paul, the flow feels much more preselected?, and less tentative, as if this is the "true path". I dunno, we'll see, obviously all speculation to kill time before updates.

Well I think MC will have to get use a to a lot of offscreen sex without him with Tori and Jason and Steph, but think happy thoughts, fun endings apparently.

This is much closer to how I think it will go (on all paths except for full high confidence). There will be a lot of sex between Steph and Jason (and Tori at times), and Steph and others, and mc won't be a part of it (but the dialogue will make it sound like he enjoys it that way).

It'd be kinda fun to make a formal record of everyone's predictions assembled in a single post, so we could refer back to it when game is done and see who was the closest.

 

[Joshy92]

I don't really like the thought of Steph going on a business trip without hubby
Hopefully she doesn't do anything without the mc's input
I don't think she will but I worry a bit tbh

I don't want her to just come back with a vagina full of cum
without asking the mc first

 

[Grumpy Old Aussie]

It'd be kinda fun to make a formal record of everyone's predictions assembled in a single post, so we could refer back to it when game is done and see who was the closest.

I volunteer you for the job lol

I don't really like the thought of Steph going on a business trip without hubby
Hopefully she doesn't do anything without the mc's input
I don't think she will but I worry a bit tbh

I don't want her to just come back with a vagina full of cum
without asking the mc first

Damn Joshy I'm stuffed if I can work out if you're serious or making fun. You got me.

 

[Joshy92]

I volunteer you for the job lol


Damn Joshy I'm stuffed if I can work out if you're serious or making fun. You got me.

The second part was just me trying to be funny lol

But am being serious about the first part
I really hope she has honest open conversations with the mc while she is away

 

[packard1928]

I don't really like the thought of Steph going on a business trip without hubby
Hopefully she doesn't do anything without the mc's input
I don't think she will but I worry a bit tbh

I don't want her to just come back with a vagina full of cum
without asking the mc first

THey may have that conversation yet... we do not know what will transpire after the MC, Jason, Steph and Tori evenings.... MC may give her the green light before she goes.

 

[Grumpy Old Aussie]

THey may have that conversation yet... we do not know what will transpire after the MC, Jason, Steph and Tori evenings.... MC may give her the green light before she goes.

If we get the choice. Often he says to himself he doesn't want to, and he gives the go ahead without any input from us.

THey may have that conversation yet... we do not know what will transpire after the MC, Jason, Steph and Tori evenings.... MC may give her the green light before she goes.

Yep maybe. She will go regardless I think. She was very keen to go even though she got the call to say the deal was dead. I want to see what this reveal is before considering more of the story.

 

[packard1928]

If we get the choice. Often he says to himself he doesn't want to, and he gives the go ahead without any input from us.


Yep maybe. She will go regardless I think. She was very keen to go even though she got the call to say the deal was dead. I want to see what this reveal is before considering more of the story.

About the call... I missed that. If that is the case... and she goes anyway... then it is for another reason.. That pool scene is interesting. Someone mentioned a while back that that was a co-worker. I do not think so.. The caption reads like he asked her if she was here for business or pleasure. She Responded " Pleasure " So... why is she there if not for business. A rendezvous ???

 

[Power Broker]

The devs have since revised that plan significantly with the desire to remove all negative intentions where there was a winning path and a losing path. The current intention is to have players feel that they "will win, win big, or win really big."

Thanks for the info, I'm not following the devs so closely. Of course, this is bad news for me. I don't consider storylines with "losing MCs" bad, in fact, a good "fall from grace" story is very enjoyable for me and a "big win". But maybe somebody who can distinguish between himself and the protagonist of a fictional story is a minority here and maybe the happy fairytales where good wins and the hero gets the girl are what devs think their audience wants.

 

[Grumpy Old Aussie]

Thanks for the info, I'm not following the devs so closely. Of course, this is bad news for me. I don't consider storylines with "losing MCs" bad, in fact, a good "fall from grace" story is very enjoyable for me and a "big win". But maybe somebody who can distinguish between himself and the protagonist of a fictional story is a minority here and maybe the happy fairytales where good wins and the hero gets the girl are what devs think their audience wants.

Well the devs may have the same idea of happy ending as you do, we don't know yet.

About the call... I missed that. If that is the case... and she goes anyway... then it is for another reason.. That pool scene is interesting. Someone mentioned a while back that that was a co-worker. I do not think so.. The caption reads like he asked her if she was here for business or pleasure. She Responded " Pleasure " So... why is she there if not for business. A rendezvous ???

He isn't the co-worker so probably one of the guys she has to meet. The call happened the morning after the night club. Steph said the company was going in to receivership and that the deal was all but dead but Steph wanted to go anyway.

Steph tells MC all about her work call that has nothing to do with him but refused to tell him about the phone call the day before that was his business as it was about his sex life that she reckons is none of his business. Go figure. This woman does my head in.

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

Well the devs may have the same idea of happy ending as you do, we don't know yet.


He isn't the co-worker so probably one of the guys she has to meet. The call happened the morning after the night club. Steph said the company was going in to receivership and that the deal was all but dead but Steph wanted to go anyway.

Steph tells MC all about her work call that has nothing to do with him but refused to tell him about the phone call the day before that was his business as it was about his sex life that she reckons is none of his business. Go figure. This woman does my head in.

She’s like a Jekyll & Hyde personality with some bipolar narcissist mixed with a sociopath

 

[packard1928]

I am sure all will be reviled ! The phone call is probably tied to something we have not seen or herd yet. Or, an event yet to happen. I kinda like where the game sit at the moment. We complain ( not bad though ) but it is kinda cool that we do not know where the Dev will take it or us. If it was predictable... it would be boring ! Along the way we see some hot women having sex !

 

[m4pII]

Not sure how I feel about this.

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

Well I think MC will have to get use a to a lot of offscreen sex without him with Tori and Jason and Steph, but think happy thoughts, fun endings apparently.

The BBC thing came about because on the Steam pics Steph has another BBC on her away trip and a few of us saw Steph heading towards the BBC whore story line and we decided to have some fun with it. It may or may not happen or for all we know that might be her big reveal, Queen of Spades lol.

I’m not a patron of this game but the other NTR games I do patron, when there is a poll for what scene or what character they want to see more of, it’s always bbc or old guys that win the vote, so there probly winning the vote in this game too