VN Ren'Py Completed Atonia: The Holy Church of Ascension [v2.0 Final] [3Diddly]

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Malcowitz

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Yeah, can't people just go out and say "this is a hardcore cucking game, it also features interracial and at the end you're gelded" or just say it straight out?
 
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Trainer7

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I don't quite get the choice system here, as in what's the point of it?

It's a hard ntr game and that's fine, but why have all those choices if they're literally for nothing? Feels like a wasted opportunity.

For example, you could have had it where all the studying has the mc pass the test and the bishop starts giving him special tasks like sending him out with the missionaries and bringing back new potential converts, or assisting Natalya with something, or earning a position with the guards and so on, while he continues to drive a wedge between the mc and his wife. Among many other options.

Visuals are good, and the story has a lot of potential so I'm curious to see what happens, but there's clearly a lot of wasted potential too.
 

punisher2099

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Thank you for the warning, i'll go to "ignore" list.
We'll see what happens in the future since in practice "ignore" only greys out the game.
You can change that in preferences now pick hide instead of transparent.
 

viper217

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Hmm.... major plot flaw for a visual novel. To have an NTR sense of loss, you have to establish a normative sexual environment with the main characters or there is no sense of attachment/exclusivity/betrayal. There is no real warm up for the main characters relationship, no baseline, so we don't see how the female character really changes, compromises and betrays. This is kind of the main hook in NTR - betrayal (hence the reason that a lot of people really dislike it) The female character in the setting of a dystopian future would make the rational choices that she makes all the way through the novel as they are logical if you want food, shelter and a strong protector. To turn this story around there needs to be more of a sexy introduction to what the couple had before they went to Religilopolis prime. This baseline relationship sets the tension for what is being lost with the rest of the interactions/choices later. Just my thought, having played nearly a bazillion of these type games.
 

sonhot

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I dunno, looked like a pretty roundabout way of saying: We're going to cuck the shit out of you. :whistle::coffee:
It's the injustice and no-win situation caused by the stealer/bull being insufferable bastards with plot armor that define netorare rather than just cuck or cheat.
Yes it sounded just like you said and by being upfront about it people won't be asking if it's avoidable anymore since it's clearly not. Unlike many other games being vague as shit.
 

Amanda Carter

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Ouch one more, you have a lot of game and some have been abandoned and keep insisting that you waste time. :FacePalm:
Actually he doesn't have any abandoned game. Yes, it takes years for him to finish the games but none are abandoned.

Katie's Corruption: Completed
Sugar Galore: Updated 2 weeks ago
Wifey's Dilemma: On hold, will be completed after Sugar Galore
Atonia Blues: Completed
Hannah's Corruption-Comics: Completed
 

Jeepster

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This is a story about a very Naive couple get sucked into a cult... with a girl as smart as a bimbo from some of these other Ren'Py's. I do like me some NTR :love: Ya have to think, all these other woman he bangs, he finally picks one... to be his main breeder. -- This sounds like Braveheart when the one getting married had to give themselves to the King over that area.

The story picks up one night in part 2--> It was very late one night after his wife was used yet again, the brainwashing almost taking complete control. When the MC sneaks into the room thru a panel he has been working on for a week or 2. When he creeps over to the so called chosen one and stabs a knife quickly into his Juggler keeping him from yelling out to the gaurds. :LOL: releasing him to meet his GOD. After in which he takes over the Cult, due to the un-written rule! "Keep What You Kill!"

Then after his wife learns of what happened becomes jealous due to the many options her Husband has :ROFLMAO::p
 
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lok34

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Atonia: Holy Church, Atonia Blues, Hannah's Corruption = The exact same story, different setting...
 

Jeepster

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Hmm.... major plot flaw for a visual novel. To have an NTR sense of loss, you have to establish a normative sexual environment with the main characters or there is no sense of attachment/exclusivity/betrayal. There is no real warm up for the main characters relationship, no baseline, so we don't see how the female character really changes, compromises and betrays. This is kind of the main hook in NTR - betrayal (hence the reason that a lot of people really dislike it) The female character in the setting of a dystopian future would make the rational choices that she makes all the way through the novel as they are logical if you want food, shelter and a strong protector. To turn this story around there needs to be more of a sexy introduction to what the couple had before they went to Religilopolis prime. This baseline relationship sets the tension for what is being lost with the rest of the interactions/choices later. Just my thought, having played nearly a bazillion of these type games.
Your Dead on, there is no connection besides seeing some porn. If they stayed there a bit and it maybe showed other woman besides the 2. How the daily lives would be better by being there etc etc. Like maybe they was just passing thru and was heading elsewhere instead of just ---- HI, I'm here, Please brainwash us! or at least my future wife :LOL: and knock all common sense out of her :LOL::ROFLMAO::D
 
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viper217

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Your Dead on, there is no connection besides seeing some porn. If they stayed there a bit and it maybe showed other woman besides the 2. How the daily lives would be better by being there etc etc. Like maybe they was just passing thru and was heading elsewhere instead of just ---- HI, I'm here, Please brainwash us! or at least my future wife :LOL: and knock all common sense out of her :LOL::ROFLMAO::D
Yes for these stories there really needs a balance of tension in the relationship about will she stay true or give into her desires. The double betrayal of a family member (brother/father) seducing your wife into betraying and cheating on you works well in NTR as it hits the double betrayal bonus points. Now we could have a plot twist, the cult leader has a favourite concubine that he has set aside, MC then seduces her to betray the cult leader and they run away together. MC seduces cult leaders daughters, then takes over as messianic cult leader of all (roll the harem ending). The options are endless there's a reasonable premise here to work with it just needs tweaked to create more tension. So the MC gets cucked, does he take it or does he turn the tables giving people some control over turning a shitty ending around, just a thought.
 

Yotsuyu

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Yeah, can't people just go out and say "this is a hardcore cucking game, it also features interracial and at the end you're gelded" or just say it straight out?
Unless I missed it somewhere in the narrow hallway that is this story. There isn't any interracial at all. There was in the previous one but, not in this one. Also the warnings were pretty clear.

Hmm.... major plot flaw for a visual novel. To have an NTR sense of loss, you have to establish a normative sexual environment with the main characters or there is no sense of attachment/exclusivity/betrayal. There is no real warm up for the main characters relationship, no baseline, so we don't see how the female character really changes, compromises and betrays. This is kind of the main hook in NTR - betrayal (hence the reason that a lot of people really dislike it) The female character in the setting of a dystopian future would make the rational choices that she makes all the way through the novel as they are logical if you want food, shelter and a strong protector. To turn this story around there needs to be more of a sexy introduction to what the couple had before they went to Religilopolis prime. This baseline relationship sets the tension for what is being lost with the rest of the interactions/choices later. Just my thought, having played nearly a bazillion of these type games.
Yeah, that's the main problem with these. They're over before they really have a chance to get started. I know they're just throwaway short stories but, there's just no time to get invested in anyone and things just kinda happen. They are okay but, they could be a lot better.
 
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My only complaint tweek about this on first play was that the tattoos and piercings needed to be introduced bit more staggered and kept hidden from MC I bit longer. The second transformation seemed a bit extreme for public display
But like most of 3 diddly stuff it was good fun
 

Meaning Less

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I don't quite get the choice system here, as in what's the point of it?

It's a hard ntr game and that's fine, but why have all those choices if they're literally for nothing? Feels like a wasted opportunity.
This is a common choice system in japanese NTR games.

You basically can play the entire game in the love route first to stay oblivious, this way all you see are the girl behavior changing and everything is left to your imagination, it is basically a foreplay playthrough to see things exclusively from the mc perspective.

Then on your second playthrough you can actually use the spy option to confirm what she was doing behind your back.
 
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