I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!
Thank you for your feedback. I really appreciate that. I'm going to research the eye issue and try to re-render the really bad ones.
Now that you mentioned Dallas i had to look at the photos on the first page, because i do not think i encountered her in game. That is the other girl with freckles right? If that is her then yes she is cute, much more than Octavia or the detective girl, actually reminds me of Avalon. Did i miss something, or have i just forgotten about her? I do not know but i am pretty sure i did not see her in game. I remember only Avalon, her mom, Octavia and the detective girl. I may have forgotten though, playing a couple of games at the moment.Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! The models are all Genesis 8; the most recent models. In future games, I'll probably work with more realistic looking models though. I know Avalon looks a bit plastic but I was head over heels in love with the model when I saw it, I couldn't resist! Thank you again for playing!
Thank you for playing! I'm glad you found it humorous, I worked really hard on their personalities and I feel like that hard work really paid off. I'm taking extra care with the next Act so it'll be about four to six weeks before it is out.
I'm glad you enjoyed the game. You didn't like Dallas? People seem very divided on Dallas. Octavia has been difficult to work with, her model is... unique. In the right light, she's very pretty but it can be hard to capture that sometimes. Most of the story does revolve around Byron and Avalon though, and it will in the future too.
As Harlequin said, there's two paths. If you choose the Dallas path, all the encounters that you had with Octavia will no longer happen and instead you'll get scenes with Dallas. You essentially get to choose who the secondary girl is.
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Comments like these really help keep me going!
Much better. I was avoiding the octavia route because she looks like a granny in a younger person's body to me... if that makes sense.
Lol. It does make sense. But she's supposed to be very maternal. Loving. Caring. Kind of like a grandma, I guess.
Thank you for pointing these out! I've redone some of the images and I think they look much better now. If you notice anymore, please let me know!
Thank you! For this amazing game. I love that you have stepped up and tackled this subject matter. It needed done and you are doing it brilliantly. "Janies Got A Gun"?
Thank you, I really appreciate that. It's a tricky subject, indeed. I wanted to convey the impact rape has on someone. And I feel like a few scenes really bring that out and show it in all its horror. But I also wanted to move on from that subject and show that you can still find love, you can get back your sexuality and you can still be happy after such an ordeal. I may have just moved the story along too quickly.
Dallas was my favorite part to write early on. In fact, I'd say the Circle Game is probably the reason I decided to extend Avalon from a practice game to a full on story. As the other characters started really taking shape and growing into their own, I quickly became attached to them as well. When I did Penny's lingerie store scene, I really adored her as well. If everyone else starts to see her as I see her, she could warrant her own spin off game.
