I haven't disappointed you yet, have I? Don't worry, Penny for Your Thoughts is going to be amazing. I promise.
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Avalon [v6.1] [Lockheart] - Original Size: 1.64GB
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No, you havent, this game is awesome and in my opinion you are the Dev that got humor closes to perfect on this site.I haven't disappointed you yet, have I? Don't worry, Penny for Your Thoughts is going to be amazing. I promise.
BTW, scratch my last comments, some of my saves got screwed because they didnt remember my name so i ended being: "Character Name". Its weird because some saves worked fine and some didnt
- Oct 15, 2019
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Oh boy can't wait to meet Leah, please don't change the name!
I always try not to read comments before playing an update of a game I like (... well love...) but that discussion between Ayhsel Lockheart and KoGa3 was a pleasure to read, and kind of made my day...
Very curious what will be burned down by this Leah
- Jul 12, 2018
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Should we expect an incest patch soon? Otherwise the dialogues with Leah are weird sometimes and don't really make sense (Thank you Patreon, NOT, hmpf...).
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- May 9, 2019
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Here you have:Should we expect an incest patch soon? Otherwise the dialogues with Leah are weird sometimes and don't really make sense (Thank you Patreon, NOT, hmpf...).
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Yeah I came here looking for same, it just doesn't quite have the same impact when they treat relationships between friends or roommates like some great taboo.Should we expect an incest patch soon? Otherwise the dialogues with Leah are weird sometimes and don't really make sense (Thank you Patreon, NOT, hmpf...).
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- Jan 28, 2019
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Just started game. Some thoughts.
1) Why "adopted uncle?" What does that even mean? Either make him her mother's brother or father's brother. Or remove the concept of "uncle" entirely and make her something like her father's best friend.
2) why is the guest room already her room? "Always your room already. I haven't changed it." That makes no sense. You're her uncle (adopted, whatever that means), so why would a room at your house already be her bedroom.... and if you had something set up for her, why would she go to a motel first?
3) this game is going to a slog to get through if Byron doesn't shut the fuck up. Take the "did you sleep on the couch because I shouted at you" line. His follow up is
Yeah.
You shook me up pretty good.
I'm a big guy, not many people can rattle me.
But that shout last night...
I didn't see that coming.
Are you part barbarian?
Because I seriously felt the ground shake.
I'm pretty sure there's a crack in the enterence hallway mirror.
Dude... SHUT UP. I don't want dialog so short that it strips the characters of personality, but holy shit, it's like this almost every time he talks.
4) GAME ALTERING PATH!
A decision, from nowhere, where me make a choice to influence the direction of the game... based on what? Who are these people? Why is this choice here? Yes, I know they're mentioned in OP's blurb, by why are we making a choice here? If these are Avalon's friends, wouldn't we meet both, and then have the choice take place, more naturally, later?
Are any of these game breaking?
No.
But it all feels weird, and I'm harshly dialing back my hopes and expectations for this game accordingly. Hopefully, that's hasty on my part and I'll grow to be much more interested in the plot...
1) Why "adopted uncle?" What does that even mean? Either make him her mother's brother or father's brother. Or remove the concept of "uncle" entirely and make her something like her father's best friend.
2) why is the guest room already her room? "Always your room already. I haven't changed it." That makes no sense. You're her uncle (adopted, whatever that means), so why would a room at your house already be her bedroom.... and if you had something set up for her, why would she go to a motel first?
3) this game is going to a slog to get through if Byron doesn't shut the fuck up. Take the "did you sleep on the couch because I shouted at you" line. His follow up is
Yeah.
You shook me up pretty good.
I'm a big guy, not many people can rattle me.
But that shout last night...
I didn't see that coming.
Are you part barbarian?
Because I seriously felt the ground shake.
I'm pretty sure there's a crack in the enterence hallway mirror.
Dude... SHUT UP. I don't want dialog so short that it strips the characters of personality, but holy shit, it's like this almost every time he talks.
4) GAME ALTERING PATH!
A decision, from nowhere, where me make a choice to influence the direction of the game... based on what? Who are these people? Why is this choice here? Yes, I know they're mentioned in OP's blurb, by why are we making a choice here? If these are Avalon's friends, wouldn't we meet both, and then have the choice take place, more naturally, later?
Are any of these game breaking?
No.
But it all feels weird, and I'm harshly dialing back my hopes and expectations for this game accordingly. Hopefully, that's hasty on my part and I'll grow to be much more interested in the plot...
1) Byron was adopted by Frank and Wendy. Their biological daughter, Sharol, had a daughter herself who is Avalon. Byron being adopted is significant to the story because his real father impacts the story. If it's not your thing, that's fine.
2) The guest room is already Avalon's room because it was hers when she was a baby. The house Byron is living in was Avalon's father's house before he passed away. Johnny, Avalon's father, left the house to his wife, Sharol, when he passed but she gave it to Byron when she found it too difficult to live in due to the memories of her husband. It's all explained organically through the story.
3) This is my first visual novel and yes, the dialogue does improve. But Byron is a bit goofy and if that's not your sense of humor, I've listed some recommendations of other games you might find more enjoyable below.
4) Yep, just like every other visual novel, there are choices that don't actually do anything. I'm just more forward about the fact that they're just flavor text. There are four paths in Avalon that are significantly different from one another and you'll have to experience all of them to get 100% of the sex scenes.
I really don't think you'll enjoy Avalon. It sounds like you'd enjoy work from a developer with a little more experience. I'm still in the early stages and I've got a long way to go. I know Love of Magic is supposed to be really good with a lot more choices and even a gameplay element. Light of My Life has more choices and the dialogue flows better. The Headmaster is a great sandbox-style visual novel with lots of sexual encounters but it uses Honey Select instead of Daz3D.
I certainly want you to have a good experience in this niche of AVNs, even if it isn't with Avalon. Sorry to hear your experience here was less than desirable. Perhaps check back when I start my next visual novel. Thank you for giving it a chance!
- May 9, 2019
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Oh boy, you are too nice. Our lord and savior Keanu Reeves would be proud of you.I really don't think you'll enjoy Avalon. It sounds like you'd enjoy work from a developer with a little more experience. I'm still in the early stages and I've got a long way to go. I know Love of Magic is supposed to be really good with a lot more choices and even a gameplay element. Light of My Life has more choices and the dialogue flows better. The Headmaster is a great sandbox-style visual novel with lots of sexual encounters but it uses Honey Select instead of Daz3D.
I certainly want you to have a good experience in this niche of AVNs, even if it isn't with Avalon. Sorry to hear your experience here was less than desirable. Perhaps check back when I start my next visual novel. Thank you for giving it a chance!
Most of his comment were either included in the novel but he could not wait till he kept reading to start complaining or he just complained because he dislike a character.
- Jul 10, 2017
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not everybody enjoyed that broke back mountain shenanigans ...
would you believe, I tried being rational and offer tons of beautiful thoughts, songs, flowers, poems, pictures, dates
... unless the chemistry kicks in, relationships never happen.
On the other hand ,,, some enjoy women jumping on them ... thanks for the lumber jack all babes want to jack!
would you believe, I tried being rational and offer tons of beautiful thoughts, songs, flowers, poems, pictures, dates
... unless the chemistry kicks in, relationships never happen.
On the other hand ,,, some enjoy women jumping on them ... thanks for the lumber jack all babes want to jack!
- Jun 20, 2017
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It's not uncommon for close family friends to be referred to as uncle even when there's no relation.
It used to be her family home back when her dad was still alive, her mother moved out when the dad died and gave the house to Byron, Ava still remained close with Byron for many years after her fathers death so it makes sense that guest room would be hers whenever she needed it. As for why she went to a motel, she had cut herself off from Byron in the last couple of years, so she couldn't assume he would still welcome her into his home. Distraught teenagers aren't exactly known for making well thought out decisions.
Not really seeing a problem here, but to each their own.
That's how life works dude, you don't always get to make informed decisions, sometimes you just have to make a choice and see where it takes you. Luckily for you, in this case you get to go back and make a different choice, would be great if life worked that way too.
- Oct 15, 2019
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1) Byron was adopted by Frank and Wendy. Their biological daughter, Sharol, had a daughter herself who is Avalon. Byron being adopted is significant to the story because his real father impacts the story. If it's not your thing, that's fine.
2) The guest room is already Avalon's room because it was hers when she was a baby. The house Byron is living in was Avalon's father's house before he passed away. Johnny, Avalon's father, left the house to his wife, Sharol, when he passed but she gave it to Byron when she found it too difficult to live in due to the memories of her husband. It's all explained organically through the story.
3) This is my first visual novel and yes, the dialogue does improve. But Byron is a bit goofy and if that's not your sense of humor, I've listed some recommendations of other games you might find more enjoyable below.
4) Yep, just like every other visual novel, there are choices that don't actually do anything. I'm just more forward about the fact that they're just flavor text. There are four paths in Avalon that are significantly different from one another and you'll have to experience all of them to get 100% of the sex scenes.
I really don't think you'll enjoy Avalon. It sounds like you'd enjoy work from a developer with a little more experience. I'm still in the early stages and I've got a long way to go. I know Love of Magic is supposed to be really good with a lot more choices and even a gameplay element. Light of My Life has more choices and the dialogue flows better. The Headmaster is a great sandbox-style visual novel with lots of sexual encounters but it uses Honey Select instead of Daz3D.
I certainly want you to have a good experience in this niche of AVNs, even if it isn't with Avalon. Sorry to hear your experience here was less than desirable. Perhaps check back when I start my next visual novel. Thank you for giving it a chance!
hey guys I have not been playing Avalon for couple of updates, did we get some scenes between Byron and Dallas?
- Mar 17, 2019
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I always like posting screens of scenes I really like or laughed at... Call it a bid for attention if you must.
But damn what's the point, might as well just add the whole game! Love the game and love you Lockheart keep it up you are awesome, if this is your first game I can't wait for you to get "good" at it!
Boy oh boy
But damn what's the point, might as well just add the whole game! Love the game and love you Lockheart keep it up you are awesome, if this is your first game I can't wait for you to get "good" at it!
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- Oct 15, 2019
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Alright this is starting to bother me, I'm sorry for posting your whole game but:
Oh this is going to be good!
I take that back
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Is there some patch I'm missing? Because the way that Leah keeps calling him friend when I know she means brother is really weirding me out
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Like this picture, why would them being friend have to be hidden, it makes no damn sense
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Like this picture, why would them being friend have to be hidden, it makes no damn sense
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