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Yes, you got that right. The writer changed mid game. The second writer wasn't Russian though, she was a native English speaker.
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Thought so, in the beginning the dialogues were somewhat decent, than it got worse and the picked up again a couple updates later.
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Bfff, I'm not 100% sure (if someone else is, please chime in) but I think it happened around the time of the yacht party.
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I think I noticed it earlier, maybe day 5 or 6, but I'm also not entirely sure.
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Ok, so I did some revision and there were actually 3 writers for this game.
I'm not sure if the first one was in fact the dev himself, but in the post linked below the second writer called Burt Reynolds Mustache mentions he had become the new leading writer and clarifies some aspects (BTW he's a long-time user on this site and is now collaborating with PhillyGames in City Of Broken Dreamers.)
https://f95zone.to/threads/babysitter-final-v0-2-2b-t4bbo.2428/post-462286
He was in charge, for example, of the night out with the girls which led to the jacuzzi scene at the MC's apartment, as well as of probably my favourite one: the bowling date with with Christine where they two end up at a karaoke bar.
He was the writer for quite a while until early 2019, when some difficulties arose and he left the project.
The new writer called Sindel took charge of the project in April 2019. It must have been at the end of the yacht event or right after it because she wrote the cam session with Jessica where she chats with her patrons. She's also the writer of T4bbo's second game.
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Oh wow I just assumed T4bbo was the writer for both his games. Has Sindel worked on any other games? I like her writing is she was responsible for Babysitter's story
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As I said, she was only responsible for the writing of the latter part of the game. She arrived when the game had been in development for 2 years already. Her user here is JFSindel, in case you wanted to contact her for some reason.
She's currently writing Babysitters, which we don't know if will be completed as T4bbo suffered a family tragedy this summer and hasn't said anything since he informed his patrons about it
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Well I finally got around to finish both routes and I have to say it's a pretty decent game. Better in some instances, worse in other but overall enjoyable. Is there an ending where Christine doesn't leave at the end on the horny route? I got the one where they break up and from the Walkthrough it seems like there is an addition where you start dating Jessica, but I didn't get it. Maybe I missed the part.
I didn't know there was an ending where she leaves that's not NTR. My ending was with Christine and dating Jess on the side.
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Mine was like "Yeah, everything was really cool and passionate, they did a lot of stuff and Christine learned a lot about herself, but there was a point where they knew i wouldn't work out longterm, so they broke up."
Seems like there are quite a few different endings here that I didn't get besides the ntr ones.
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She will always leave on the horny roiute, what matters perhaps more on that route is who you end up with.
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Seems like I messed up everythig since I didn't end up with anyone. Do you know who the possible ladies are? I guess Jessica and Sonya are an option, maybe Veruca?
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Jessica is certainly one yes (kind of)...can't recall off-hand what other ends you get without re-checking myself. If you wish for Chris to stay you have to go the love route (and avoid the NTR), this route also has the possibility of you both being with Jess too.
If you want a specific end it's wise to use the walkthrough after your first run through, lots of diff things can affect the endings.
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It is somewhat strange that a game with so many sex scenes does not create a mod gallery
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Why? As strange as people who play these mainly for the story with a scenes a nice bonus? Let's be serious, with all but maybe a handful of games, the animated scenes in most VN's are awful...easier to just watch porn if that's what you want.
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I played the love route first and while I liked the ending more I liked that Jess got more screen time in the horny route. In both routes I sadly missed some key parts to get her more involved as it seems since she moved on in my first playthrough and MC and Christine as well as it seems, without her. I guess with both routes done I'm good and also done with the game for now, it certainly is good, but not good enough to keep me interested for more playthroughs, especially since it's only a variation of what I've already gotten or ntr stuff that I'm not into.
You need to fuck Jess at least three times on the horny route (including sleeping with her on the couch in the cabin) Chris will leave you (in the horny route) but you'll be with Jess