Ren'Py Abandoned Banshee Town - Inception [v0.3] [MackBook]

[MackBook]

No worries. If you need help with English, there's a few good people here that can help. I'm not one of them though. GrammerCop is a good choice though.

Thank you. I will try to contact when the time comes.

 

[Weasel_Face]

True. We have been disappointed a lot. But, I wasn't going to be the one to ask as most times I'm a bit too 'uncouth' about it. lol

MackBook Shouldn't this say 'antique vase'?

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Maybe the vase was up to no good or liked pulling pranks

 

[B00GY_M@N]

is this at all based on the tv show Banshee?

 

[Deleted member 15555]

Thank you. I will try to contact when the time comes.

does the game ends when you meet Isabelle, the game kicks me out to the main menu after that.

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

I'm so ready for a gangster game

 

[Wicked Garden]

Any mafia or gangland style of game will always be welcomed to me. I'm liking playing a older character, whose name isn't Max. The game though, is suffering from poor grammar and definitely needs a proofreader, but there's plenty of proofreaders lurking on this site that will do it for bags of skittles. Back to the story. The renders look great and I like the idea of a Father versus Son plot. The house appears to be divided with Big Sis coming to her senses to finally reach out to her baby brother, while the younger Sis appears to enjoy her life as a Daddy's girl. I don't know if this game will feature incest , but what I do know is that Big Sis is a babe and I can't wait to see the Mom.

Best of luck MackBook.

 

[zinx1702]

is this at all based on the tv show Banshee?

maybe or maybe not, but the show was dope.

 

[Tragic Princess]

does the game ends when you meet Isabelle, the game kicks me out to the main menu after that.

Yes.

 

[root]

I remember "Banshee" with Antony Starr (now The Boys)

 

[Avaron1974]

Town of Banshee.

I think what i'll do is find a bar, steal the identity of a member of law enforcement and then beat the shit out of people on a regular basis.

All that while hiding from my former life as a criminal myself.

 

[erkper]

Please get a native English proofreader/translator. Right now, the Engrish... it hurts.

 

[botc76]

I'll write until the Engrish is corrected, because apart from that it sounds worth trying.

 

[Vrijgeest]

It needs and you have heard this enough probably a good proof reader and also more humour. It is very dry. I had to stop as it was just too painful. The renders are good but give a few laughs.

 

[ginkamikaze]

Yes, my native language is not English. I will fix, sorry.

If you need a hand I can proofread pro bono

 

[Profound_Madman]

If you need a hand I can proofread pro bono

Are you shaking him down?

 

[Deleted member 2412505]

It will be completely depend on choices.

You mean we can have a harem if we want in the underworld! My day just got better
The name voted me thinking that it could be horror/paranormal game.
Bookmarked and downloading now. Will give my feedback later. Keep up the good work.

 

[ElLocoDelJarabe]

Was such a good show, glad to see the MC playing such a good role in The Boys

 

[Deleted member 770309]

It will be completely depend on choices.

Harem for me then.

 

[Joyce Harding]

Bad grammar aside I think this will be a pretty good game.

 

[putzseila]

I have no problem with NTR...only when I am the cuckold of history.

Beautiful models, clean and beautiful graphics (I hope you add some scenes of violence, because without crimes it is not a gangster underworld), a plot that seems very interesting and with many possibilities of exploitation (becoming responsible for debt collection, taking care of the exploitation of the brothel, murder and even extortion of politicians). I see a lot of potential and it can become a great game and if you listen to the players' feedback we can help with ideas.

I wish you good luck in the project and I will follow closely.