- Thread starter MackBook
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- Sep 26, 2019
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Thankfully a hero fixed the English for this game, it was getting painful to read through.
Dev, do yourself a favor and have someone that knows how to speak English fix your text before updating. It's just weird following what's supposed to be a hardened criminal talking about the female anatomy like a 10 year old at the playground.
Edit: Maybe do a little research on what it's like to dominate a woman that is to be a loyal slut for your business. That whole interlude was very underwhelming.
Dev, do yourself a favor and have someone that knows how to speak English fix your text before updating. It's just weird following what's supposed to be a hardened criminal talking about the female anatomy like a 10 year old at the playground.
Edit: Maybe do a little research on what it's like to dominate a woman that is to be a loyal slut for your business. That whole interlude was very underwhelming.
Yeah, the game will come out of visual novel and will add mini-games like this.
Great work, when he said 'Stop his Clock' I thought was gonna knock him out, NOT KILL HIM haha
Its a great start,
Thanks for your effort.
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If you need help, I can re write to English for you, send me the text and I will write for you
- Dec 19, 2017
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My try at an overview:
You are about to enter a world, where there are no rules, the only law is a loaded gun,
It's a jungle, a concrete jungle where the beautiful, the brutal, and the brave all meet in the streets of Banshee...”
One brutal man is reshaping the world into his own vision of hell, and no man can stop him...”
But a woman with a heart of gold will try desperately to bring him back from the brink of destruction.
Edit: I know, a little over the top.
You are about to enter a world, where there are no rules, the only law is a loaded gun,
It's a jungle, a concrete jungle where the beautiful, the brutal, and the brave all meet in the streets of Banshee...”
One brutal man is reshaping the world into his own vision of hell, and no man can stop him...”
But a woman with a heart of gold will try desperately to bring him back from the brink of destruction.
Edit: I know, a little over the top.
Didnt played with this...can someone tell me if it is better?English Fix:
Hello, I present you here my little English Fix (with the Incest patch included).
I have either rewritten most of the texts or improved the grammar to the best of my ability. It's probably not perfect but it's definitely better
I hope I don't have to say it but this is NOT OFFICIAL so use it at your own risk. If you find spelling errors or other stuff just let me now.
I think I will continue to work on it and improve it but after a good 6 hours of writing, changing text, proofreading and more writing I need a break.
Installation:
1.Put it in and Overwrite it
PC: BansheeTown-pc\game
MAC: BansheeTown.app\Contents\Resources\autorun\game\
Compressed Version:
And because It looks like I had way to much time I even made a compressed version with the English fix included just for fun
Not sure if everything is fine cause I just skipped trough the game but it should be fine. If not tell me.
PC: ~128 MB
Mac: ~90 MB
MAC (MEGA)
PC (MEGA)
- Aug 25, 2016
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Man, the production is great on this - renders, GUI, soundtrack (except for the singing during the flashback bit - usually don't like vocals over different dialog). But the writing is so wack that it occasionally crosses over into unintended brilliance (like 'Money Bitch'). It's a bit jarring, like you're reading the dialog for a game that should be featuring basic Honey Select models, but you're actually in this lushly rendered environment instead. Upside is the dialog is one of the easiest things to fix. Honestly can't weigh in on the story yet, because even though events seem to be moving unnaturally fast, the dialog makes it feel like MC is in a fever dream, so it keeps you a little off-balance throughout.
Yes, I saw feedbacks about them and I will try my best to fix them.
- Jun 14, 2020
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My English Patch? If yes. On what system do you play it? Windows, Mac or Linux?
win patch is ok for me...
btw i found little bit disturbing to speaking about vase like Her but it is realy deacent work thank u
win patch is ok for me...
btw i found little bit disturbing to speaking about vase like Her but it is realy deacent work thank u
lol I knew I forgot something but I didn't know what. Thanks for pointing it out
And Thank you very much np in my language we r doing something like this....but it is not usual for englishlol I knew I forgot something but I didn't know what. Thanks for pointing it out
- Feb 25, 2020
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Yeah It will have sandbox but not like you won't have to go somewhere and find some item.