Ren'Py Abandoned Banshee Town - Inception [v0.3] [MackBook]

[twiztid]

Id like to suggest instead of Old Sis give an actual name, and the grammar in this needs to be fixed up. I am by no means a spelling guru but does the MC look like a ho XD. The storyline would improve with correct grammar. Not a bad start though, renders look good, some tweaks here and there. This can be a solid game with some good routes.

 

[Mario4don]

Some of them will be optional but some of them will be imperative because they will affect the story.

Mini games affect the story ?
Sounds a bit strange to me, and I've never seen anything like it in a game before, and besides it's a bit weird to have mini games in VN if the game isn't a sandbox.
I'm not a fan mini games in adult games in general but maybe I give a try to your game because rest of the game looks promising.

 

[brittC25]

Have to say, I loved the Tv series Banshee ( An ex-con assumes the identity of a murdered sheriff in the small town of Banshee, Pennsylvania; where he has some unfinished business.)
I kinda get the same feel from your game, but the Tv series was amazing, so if your game is a tie into that, it has a lot to live up to, beautiful women aside, great story and so on.
I will check back after a few updates, get someone to proof read for spelling mistakes and take out any grainy renders.

 

[MackBook]

Mini games affect the story ?
Sounds a bit strange to me, and I've never seen anything like it in a game before, and besides it's a bit weird to have mini games in VN if the game isn't a sandbox.
I'm not a fan mini games in adult games in general but maybe I give a try to your game because rest of the game looks promising.

There is so much to talk about mini-games. So I can say, mini-games will be so various without going into detail. I mean, they will be like point and click, won't be that hard. I think this will be fun to play like this. Also, I said there will be lots of mini-games, and one of them is management. And this management mini-game is the one that will affect the story.

 

[MackBook]

Have to say, I loved the Tv series Banshee ( An ex-con assumes the identity of a murdered sheriff in the small town of Banshee, Pennsylvania; where he has some unfinished business.)
I kinda get the same feel from your game, but the Tv series was amazing, so if your game is a tie into that, it has a lot to live up to, beautiful women aside, great story and so on.
I will check back after a few updates, get someone to proof read for spelling mistakes and take out any grainy renders.

I will add scenes from the original series in the next versions.

 

[Qwert99]

MC doesn't like a 14 year old twat.

Colour me interested.

 

[EZ8lt]

I like the vibes from this, but it desperately needs a proofreader.

 

[ArturiousDesign]

That Description gave me Cancer ...

 

[Deleted member 260853]

Is this based on the banshee TV show omg I always thought that that TV show would be a great AVN I even wanted to make one based on it but I was too lazy

 

[laeg]

Is this based on the banshee TV show omg I always thought that that TV show would be a great AVN I even wanted to make one based on it but I was too lazy

if u like game...minimal donation is 1 dolar per month

 

[JB08]

Couldnt get into the game. I have no idea what im reading half the time. The grammar is horrible. I stopped when you take Miko to dinner.

 

[Ara-sH]

IS this based on Banshee series or completely separate?

 

[MackBook]

IS this based on Banshee series or completely separate?

It's not directly connected to the series for now but I'm planning to connect it somehow.

 

[Ara-sH]

It's not directly connected to the series for now but I'm planning to connect it somehow.

Very good, Banshee TV series was one of the most underrated from this past years.

 

[KenneX]

Awesome premise and renders but very poor English. Maybe find a proofreader, it destroys mah immersion, I can't read this with a straight face. And maybe stop using 3-4MB PNGs, you have webp at your disposal.

 

[Fayran]

English Fix:

Hello, I present you here my little English Fix (with the Incest patch included).

I have either rewritten most of the texts or improved the grammar to the best of my ability. It's probably not perfect but it's definitely better

I hope I don't have to say it but this is NOT OFFICIAL so use it at your own risk. If you find spelling errors or other stuff just let me now.

I think I will continue to work on it and improve it but after a good 6 hours of writing, changing text, proofreading and more writing I need a break.

Installation:

1.Put it in and Overwrite it

PC: BansheeTown-pc\game
MAC: BansheeTown.app\Contents\Resources\autorun\game\
Compressed Version:

And because It looks like I had way to much time I even made a compressed version with the English fix included just for fun (The English fix is just ~30 Minutes older than the most recent one so there are some minor grammar fixes not included.)

Not sure if everything is fine cause I just skipped trough the game but it should be fine. If not tell me.

PC: ~128 MB
Mac: ~90 MB

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[baklol]

two flex one add names for sister and second if walkthrough mode is there then it would be good and waiting for next update nice work dev hoping new update will come soon enough

 

[Phoenix Rises]

The game looks promising but the English language level is horrible and it takes away a lot of the fun.
I hope you get someone to translate for you because like I said, it looks promising

 

[Thedude715]

Read some comments saying that the english is not the best but i'ts readable.
So I thought a grammatical error here a misspelling there whatever, but the english is awful like machine translation level awful.
which is a shame as the setup is more interesting then your standard my dad died and now I'm gonna bang my mom and sister.
The user Vizzyk made a patch making the game readable, kudos to them it should be pinned to the main post.

 

[MackBook]

English Fix:

Hello, I present you here my little English Fix (with the Incest patch included).

I have either rewritten most of the texts or improved the grammar to the best of my ability. It's probably not perfect but it's definitely better

I hope I don't have to say it but this is NOT OFFICIAL so use it at your own risk. If you find spelling errors or other stuff just let me now.

I think I will continue to work on it and improve it but after a good 6 hours of writing, changing text, proofreading and more writing I need a break.

Installation:

1.Put it in and Overwrite it

PC: BansheeTown-pc\game
MAC: BansheeTown.app\Contents\Resources\autorun\game\
Compressed Version:

And because It looks like I had way to much time I even made a compressed version with the English fix included just for fun (The English fix is just ~30 Minutes older than the most recent one so there are some minor grammar fixes not included.)

Not sure if everything is fine cause I just skipped trough the game but it should be fine. If not tell me.

PC: ~128 MB
Mac: ~90 MB

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PC (MEGA)

Thanks for your effort.