While I have not yet read this novel, and I can't speak to anything about it, I can agree with your comment 100%. Having just attempted to read a novel that had better-than-average renders and writing that was so bad, it was just bad. Not translation bad either—just bad. I found it unreadable. I want cohesiveness and choices that actually matter in the novels I read—which seems simple enough on the surface but is hard to find in practice.
Now that is a nice view to wake up to in the morning...
Either that's:
B. Same Athena, no makeup and different hair. It's crazy how different she can look
Looks great IMO
That's why I personally enjoy making ALT series creations(alternative looks, lifestyle, age and so on) for characters. Seeing characters in a new light is always great and I for one always embrace change like that.
Nooone here is putting BW writing on the same level as any of Stephen King's novels, buddy. But the writing compared to the majority of options on this forum is S-tier, or at the very least, A tier. And one that comes hand-in-hand with incredible renders as well, the whole package can be undoubtedly rated as high as A+ for starters. If this VN isn't to your liking, then by all means, keep looking, but trashing an objectively excellent VN is trolling, plain & simple. I don't like broccoli, but that doesn't make it a disgusting vegetable to other people.
You are beating a dead horse of a topic for likes buddy. Though i suppose it's the instinct of a bootlicker to always find something to bootlick about, i never said anything about me not liking this vn i enjoyed it, the wholesomenees it provides is a great experience but would i give all the credit for it to storm and not the great soundtracks and renders?,what about inter connecting stories and great background stories the so called mafia sub plot is as cliche as it goes and is never the focal point of any character development except the Mc father's death.
Five minutes watching Zenda ...
