VN Ren'Py Because I Love Her [Love Update Steam] [The Typist]

[Segnbora]

It's an NTR game. Reread the original post. My impression — and I welcome the dev telling me i'm wrong — is that there's going to be a lot of NTR before you have the choice to open or close the relationship to others. My guess is that the gameplay will be the MC deciding to stick with the fiancée and how he feels about that, falling into Jenni's arms instead, a potential threesome with Jenni and the GF, or possibly even pursuing a relationship with Olivia. Those last two may be purely speculative. But there's gonna be NTR for a while, I'd guess, and if there are options to "avoid" it they're probably going to lead to it still happening while the MC remains unaware.

 

[a55555]

amazing game

 

[TheTypist]

May i ask if this statement renders the one in the original post, about waiting for chapter 5 or 6 for such content, null and void? As per such content will probably never happen?

I’ve just decided that the path I created now with just Claire and the MC will replace it entirely as it’s much easier for me to script and figure out. These paths I’m looking at are easier to work with, therefore future updates will contain less struggle from a multi path stand point.
It also seems most the folks who wanted the love path hate ntr to begin with. So this game isn’t exactly their cup of tea anyways and I doubt (from what I’ve seen) that until later chapters they’d enjoy its current state anyhow. But again, I’ve made it quite clear this is mostly an ntr game anyways. So yes by chapter 5 or 6 I hope to have some solid paths for sure. I’ll always like writing it, I’ll always enjoy scripting it. Some will hate it, some will love it. Luckily for me, even with all the stress and hate in my normal life (OG followers actually know a bit about me personally) the love I get from a lot of this community definitely overcomes the hate.
The problem is that the hate does come off as criticism I take in at times and it may ruin certain aspects for others who actually love the style I originally possessed. With that being said, I’ll also be taking breaks from the discussion in order to relax and just type away like I did before without second guessing anything.
Sorry, my reply turned to a rant and led me to digress. But anyhow, thanks for being active on the thread. And cheers.

 

[Segnbora]

If an NTR game is the game you want to write, then write it and ignore criticism from people who hate the genre; they're never going to like the game and it's pointless to try to satisfy them. Do it well, make it believable, make the character arcs not only authentic but interesting, and you'll have plenty of support.

 

[Ennoch]

I’ve just decided that the path I created now with just Claire and the MC will replace it entirely as it’s much easier for me to script and figure out. These paths I’m looking at are easier to work with, therefore future updates will contain less struggle from a multi path stand point.
It also seems most the folks who wanted the love path hate ntr to begin with. So this game isn’t exactly their cup of tea anyways and I doubt (from what I’ve seen) that until later chapters they’d enjoy its current state anyhow. But again, I’ve made it quite clear this is mostly an ntr game anyways. So yes by chapter 5 or 6 I hope to have some solid paths for sure. I’ll always like writing it, I’ll always enjoy scripting it. Some will hate it, some will love it. Luckily for me, even with all the stress and hate in my normal life (OG followers actually know a bit about me personally) the love I get from a lot of this community definitely overcomes the hate.
The problem is that the hate does come off as criticism I take in at times and it may ruin certain aspects for others who actually love the style I originally possessed. With that being said, I’ll also be taking breaks from the discussion in order to relax and just type away like I did before without second guessing anything.
Sorry, my reply turned to a rant and led me to digress. But anyhow, thanks for being active on the thread. And cheers.

I made no arguement against ntr, i just wished to know if there will be romance between those two on a detailed level later on with all the ntr. So you replace it with a different approach? Thats fine, i was just inquiring, wasn't hinting on anything.

Yes, i'm afraid you'll have to get used to the extreme remarks from both party, they are in direct opposition and can't really stand one another. They'll both hate you a bit if you give the other even a bit of a slack. Don't think too much of such remarks. Much easier said then done, i know. Especially if you care. But its your story. Your vision. Just remind yourself that you are the fateweaver of this story, others may as well love or hate it but they are mere onlookers.

I was only curious to hear if romance will take place among all the lewds really I love how the girl looks in your avatar. I'm not exactly fond of certain ntr variants but just for that look i will play this. She is gorgeous :happyblush

 

[acidnightmare]

What conversation in the kitchen is claire referring to? When did my character put thoughts in her head? Was that not shown at all? Do we not see the events in the gym? i'm really confused.
Oh and i'm not against the NTR genre, i'm here to play an NTR game, its just the sudden shift into high gear confused the hell out of me narratively.

EDIT: Ok I figured it out. I think there is something wrong with the code! I had claire on the love route and as soon as chapter 2 started it thought i was on the NTR route, I think this is an error because if you follow the NTR route from the begining, you have the dream and are able to tell claire about it. Then the gym scene happens. Thats why i was so confused, events happened that had nothing to do with my choices. For reference @TheTypist I started a new game choosing the same options (i like to slowly corrupt rather than jumping in the deep end, so keeping claires love high and her lust low) and got the same outcome where i'm dining with Jenni then cut to text about a car ride where everyone is upset.

 

[Tsathoggua]

Okey, Here is what I think, It's okey, because your Fiance got corrupted easily shouldn't there be a Transition? like more Temptation scene.
I Love the NTR where the guy don't find out her GF/WIFE/FIANCE is Fucking around, It's more exciting for Me, Hope we can have a Different option of what kind of NTR route to take.
But if the Author wants to continue the all out Cuckolding I'm fine with it, because I can only support few NTR games, I'm a Poorfag... INSERT SAD FACE HERE.

 

[naabii]

Good game, very good writing, feels like paths are gonna be cool in the future, great job!

Got the same problem as @acidnightmare , when you follow the love path, you get the NTR events. Also, love path is not very satisfying at the moment, i don't get why the MC has to cum that quickly in the club event for example: he was not described as not satisfying his wife. That's a tricky stuff imo, because it leads to cuck anyway, because MC looks unable de satisfy his partner. Which cuckolding is not necesserely about.

Edit: maybe too quick to go to the slut path, as some said.

great work anyway, will look for more updates

 

[MasterDk78]

I have to say, she cooled off pretty fast from being the innocent girl to be a sex maniac.
Not much teasin, nor did your best girl friend have any chance to get to you before your gf opens up and do everything with you. a little dissapointed, start went really good, loved the intro. i like being teased, knowing we are working towards something. really a shame. but we cant all like the same, tis was just my thinking.

 

[ThunderStruck]

I think Claire was set up by MC and her friend on NTR path. NTR story is clear that MC wants her to become more open minded to different sexual kinks and he asked her friend for an assistance. She's still conflicted with her feelings but clearly can't control herself when faced with situations similar to the glory hole event. Beside that ending sex scene love path really has not enough content, or clearly is not developed enough to comment. We'll see how the story will go further, but I have high hopes for this title on both NTR and love paths.

 

[BigBabs69]

With all the path changes,i'm wondering if the forced NTR path where Olivia corrupts Claire instead of the mc is still going to be a thing.Although i'll still enjoy the game either way,that path sounded like it was ganna be good.

 

[Queen of Hearts]

What conversation in the kitchen is claire referring to? When did my character put thoughts in her head? Was that not shown at all? Do we not see the events in the gym? i'm really confused.
Oh and i'm not against the NTR genre, i'm here to play an NTR game, its just the sudden shift into high gear confused the hell out of me narratively.

Same exact issue, super confusing ending the chapter on the love route only to be thrown into the NTR route going forward. So I'm also stuck with the NTR router no matter the options even after playing through 3 times now.

 

[LordofEntropy]

I believe it's just a bug that the conversation about the shower encounter seems to always appear no matter what choices, pretty sure TheTypist already acknowledged it somewhere in the thread. It is indeed a bit confusing lol.

 

[redle]

Innocent to full slut in less time than it takes me to write up this post. I honestly can't decide if I find it refreshing or completely lacking. On the one hand, this is a porn game so it's nice to see actual porn content. On the other, welcome back to 70's porn where the rule of thumb is, "if more than 2 people are in the same room, someone better already be stripping or fucking."

The game certainly has potential to be quite a fun piece of work. I just need to get my head in the right mind-set for a fun sex romp rather than a realistic engrossing plot. Although it doesn't sound like you have fully committed to going that route (as you plan to add a fleshed out love route, although maybe that too will be sex-crazed right from the start), and I do wish yourself and other authors would commit their games to a more singular direction.

In truth I would say that my own interests lean much more toward a solid love route than a full blown NTR route. In spite of that, I would still say drop the love route entirely from the game. Maybe I'll be surprised and you will wrap them together well. Right now, however, it looks like it is going to progress much the same as other games, that is, as 2 separate and unrelated stories that the player can only break by playing.

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[Claudio83]

The update is short, but it's exciting, good the gloryhole idea!

 

[Yamakasi20]

Really happy i tried this game out, definetly amazing and my cup of tea.

The only constructive criticism i may add is that i wish the NTR path had the option to straight up lie or hide to the MC. Maybe.

On both ends though, get those regular updates, keep it organised and you have a winner.

 

[Deleted member 327695]

Yea, make a path where she lies to the MC.

 

[naabii]

Does anyone know where Jenni's model come from? It's quite the thing imo.

 

[Dars]

Love this game but I have only 1 question; what happened in the shower ? Or did I made a wrong choice ?

 

[Mikeleg]

I was wondering the same thing about the referenced shower incident, did I choose something wrong and not get to see it? Also it seems the narrator says the same thing in between chapters no matter what you path you picked.