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I was wondering the same thing about the referenced shower incident, did I choose something wrong and not get to see it? Also it seems the narrator says the same thing in between chapters no matter what you path you picked.
- Jan 11, 2018
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The Typist, it's just a suggestion and please you don't understand like a complaint: you can delete all love path(both girls), focusing plenty in the lust route and when you decide to put some romance, you can choose one moment or one chapter for this. So, i believe that the narrative structure will be more coherent, avoiding you have to create two sets of renders(one love and one lust) for one scene and it probably makes your coding easier.
PS: It's just a suggestion, you decide what you want.
PS: It's just a suggestion, you decide what you want.
That is from prior one where the black guy ( future bar tender ) she works out in front at the gym (does her limber moves
) walks in on her while in shower and after swinging the curtains quickly ... caught up in moment (of feeling her self up )never reacts just grabs his junk...(No scream no OMG!!!! nothing ..... lost me lol (small town girl went straight from love you honey in morning to no control.) Check post - 447, 448, 449, 450, 451, 457, 475, 476 I actually love NTR but issue of changing or even slamming a girl into it... with out any concern for building up to it.... Losses my love for it.
Side note my Fav so far NTR is
My Girlfriend's Amnesia any other suggestions on a possible FAV let me know i most likley played them
Game has talent behind it.. just have to get all ducks in a row 
- Aug 23, 2018
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Will there be more of a lead up to the NTR content if you are deleting the love route? I only ask because going from being shy and conservative to fucking strangers in a day or two is really jarring narrativly. I realize it's your game and your story to tell, but the desert will taste even better if we have to eat dinner first. Either that or perhaps change Claires attitude or motivation from the beginning (eg. the MC doesn't satisfy her and/or she has always wanted to sleep with other people) so that it's more believable. Having a sweet innocent girl suddenly going full slut is unsatisfying without context. The game "The Adventurous Couple" is a good model for a woman quickly going from monogamy to polygamy/cheating etc. At the end of the day it's your game and you can choose what direction to go, but i think a majority of people will find it more satisfying if there is a little more lead up or a little more context to Claire's actions.
Post above mine -- i was thinking same one "The Adventurous Couple" yeah... even tho.. i think she may need to take some pills and may need a doctor as much as she gets around lol --- That one sorta lost me after ch. 8 it takes her that long to think maybe her hubby wants some action... really??? lol
- Aug 23, 2018
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Yeah it's not a perfect game and it does go into full gear after chapter 8, but the journey there is good and i really want to know what happens next, which is a mark of good writing and narrative structure.
It got my blood pumping with grr... which means it hit a nerve... ( hitting a nerve with me is a good thing ) Flash back, same shit happened to me, or Yup been there got screwed over same way, Sort of that fight or flight feeling ..also with MyGirlfriendsA lol Hence my love for NTR ... i love to hate it lol... Making a story up and doing art on the fly really isn't such a good idea but i guess if you have the time. Go for it.... Well in my life i have tons of storys but no art ... So i search here. Been told i should write a book because of shit i have been threw. Sometime, i'll find the right artist i may throw him/her a bone
Adventurous Couple is a good model on the size of the updates which are very good.
Dreaming of Dana is a nice one to not NTR but it can be so if switched around a bit lol "Good Example of swinging couple if you choose to" ...yes went both routes to lol
...yes went both routes to lol
- Oct 13, 2016
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when I tried chapter 1 it didnt give me much. but this update proved that its not just another crappy game. i enjoyed that we get to play both and we can read whats going on with them, and their thoughts. i hope it will follow this recipe and continue exploring the minds and emotions and not just became another stupid game where they fuck anything and everyone are cheating.
p.s. The Adventurous Couple is "NOT" good if you ask me, no excitement at all as it lack the emotional part. so, not a game i would like this to become.
p.s. The Adventurous Couple is "NOT" good if you ask me, no excitement at all as it lack the emotional part. so, not a game i would like this to become.
You are a creator who is actively engaging with their fan base and even taking suggestions from a sector of the larger community whose interests don't strictly follow your own intended vision. For me it is refreshing to see an artist that is so invested in their fans, even the fans who push the content outside the original scope of the work. What is more you are posting your work to a free community where most are charging the fans to follow them. You are going as far as to take time out of a paying job inorder to ensure your followers see progress and feel valued.
You are awesome and we are grateful to have your interaction and devotion.
- Aug 23, 2018
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Good game...good game. That woman Claire have sexy body. Can't waste that on John alone let's shared it to whole town :heartcoveredeyes: Sharing is caring :evilsmile:. Btw nice cum. That's looks good on her. Keep it up :firstimekiss::happyblush:happyblush:heartcoveredeyes: hahaha
A couple that actually talks about their feelings? I am shooketh !
I like the game so far. Very good and detailed dialogue.
I like the game so far. Very good and detailed dialogue.
Like the new chapter! Would prefer for the love path to 'remain' in the game, but honestly, this game was the one that introduced me to the NTR fetish genre - and I don't regret it. In fact, though I primarily play this game because it has both paths, I do like the way they are 'connected' to each other. And, well, the lust path itself is done pretty great!
What I would probably like to see later (those are just ideas):
What I would probably like to see later (those are just ideas):
- A 'reverse harem' variation of the lust path, where your fiancee assumes dominance over you, and, possibly, any of the guys she has 'extracurricular activities' with;
- A variation of the lust path, where Olivia manipulates your fiancee into leaving you, and actively seduces you into becoming one of her 'toys';
- A more developed sub-plot for Jenni, possibly with you leaving your fiancee for her after you discover that she was cheating on you;
- And, of course, the continuation of the love path with your fiancee. Don't drop it. Please.
- Oct 14, 2016
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Edit 19/08/2019:
At the Path Selection #2 , I added a hidden tag for Claire love path [Missed Claire].
At the very end "Claire at the Bedroom" (Day 4)
The choice "Why do you say that?"
[Jenni Love = 0] isn't supposed to be there, so it was removed.
Edit 18/08/2019:
Attaching the new guide to match the latest version (Chp. 4 - Love Update).
A new game is recommended.
You can also find it on my
Enjoy!
At the Path Selection #2 , I added a hidden tag for Claire love path [Missed Claire].
At the very end "Claire at the Bedroom" (Day 4)
The choice "Why do you say that?"
[Jenni Love = 0] isn't supposed to be there, so it was removed.
Edit 18/08/2019:
Attaching the new guide to match the latest version (Chp. 4 - Love Update).
A new game is recommended.
You can also find it on my
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.Enjoy!
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- Jul 2, 2017
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