VN Ren'Py Because I Love Her [Love Update Steam] [The Typist]

[BeardedJack]

Played the update and i really like where the game is going. A path where all the guys who like to get cucked will be happy, but finally a game with a path where your girl loves you and you can actually share her with others without just being there and watching, where she wouldnt let anyone touch her without having you by her side, where you actually always join the action and control the situation, telling her what to do/avoid. I just dont want this to be another cuck/voyeur only game. Thanks creating this little gem and i hope it will be fully developed.

 

[TheTypist]

Played the update and i really like where the game is going. A path where all the guys who like to get cucked will be happy, but finally a game with a path where your girl loves you and you can actually share her with others without just being there and watching, where she wouldnt let anyone touch her without having you by her side, where you actually always join the action and control the situation, telling her what to do/avoid. I just dont want this to be another cuck/voyeur only game. Thanks creating this little gem and i hope it will be fully developed.

And thank you for being so active on my thread, these types of replies really motivate me. I try to log on lesser now because I’m truly in my zone finally where I needed to be. I think everyone who follows or believes will love the future, and if not, I know I will at the least haha.
Cheers to the future.

 

[NamelessKnight]

And thank you for being so active on my thread, these types of replies really motivate me. I try to log on lesser now because I’m truly in my zone finally where I needed to be. I think everyone who follows or believes will love the future, and if not, I know I will at the least haha.
Cheers to the future.

@TheTypist, your game is like a rough diamond that needs to be cut and if you're careful it can become the best of the genre. With the necessary adjustments and a well-structured and coherent script, your game will improve with each update

 

[MrWally]

it is strange when i don't talk with her about the dream, further in the game in the bedroom she is mentioning the dream… bit of a bug i guess

 

[DarkenDragon]

so I just gave this game a try seeing how the thumbnails looked very good and the basic plot was a bit interesting.

but after the first 10 mins or so, I find it quite annoying that the writing has quite a lot of issues. but nothing a quick edit couldn't fix. for instance there were quite a few times the name "John" showed up instead of the name I chosen, made me really confused at first at what was going on. This really should be fixed asap. nothing worst than being confused out of the immersion.

another one was the whole truth or dare section with jenni, when you play truth or dare, you ask the person which they like to choose and then the person asking would choose the question or dare. but for some reason it was the opposite, the person asking truth or dare was the recipient. which again confused the hell out of me as to who was speaking and making me think maybe the names were incorrect?.

another suggestion would be when naming the main character or the fiance, also mention what the default is, in case the player doesnt wish to choose it, they know they have predetermined names already if they would like to use it.

hope these help with making your game much better in the future.

 

[ive_got-problems]

I'm confused about what happened between chapter 1.1 and 2.1. I went from having lunch with my friend, to something happening in the shower with my wife?

 

[The Evil]

Awesome was, chapter 2.1 but quiet short honestly. Hopefully next chapter will be a bigger one.

 

[Phoeniix]

so I just gave this game a try seeing how the thumbnails looked very good and the basic plot was a bit interesting.

but after the first 10 mins or so, I find it quite annoying that the writing has quite a lot of issues. but nothing a quick edit couldn't fix. for instance there were quite a few times the name "John" showed up instead of the name I chosen, made me really confused at first at what was going on. This really should be fixed asap. nothing worst than being confused out of the immersion.

another one was the whole truth or dare section with jenni, when you play truth or dare, you ask the person which they like to choose and then the person asking would choose the question or dare. but for some reason it was the opposite, the person asking truth or dare was the recipient. which again confused the hell out of me as to who was speaking and making me think maybe the names were incorrect?.

another suggestion would be when naming the main character or the fiance, also mention what the default is, in case the player doesnt wish to choose it, they know they have predetermined names already if they would like to use it.

hope these help with making your game much better in the future.

Not my game but...
when the default name shows up intermittently it may NOT be a "quick edit" fix, depending on the cause. So have some patience with the developer. If you really find it confusing...just use the default name. GP about mentioning the default name at the beginning, that IS a simple edit. The issues you describe so far, seem to be scripting errors. I have not been able to get the 2.1 Mac version to work without crashing yet, but I believe my issues are from old saves, so I am starting again from the beginning...

 

[ZagorTeNay]

So "love route" is planned for later? With focus on Main character becoming more "alpha", assertive, etc?
Damn the girl is too gorgeous for NTR.

 

[Virulenz]

I suggest to change the OT...NTR is NOT avoidable...sure, there is a little chance to avoid the scenes, but the Text and Storyline always refer to them as if they happened. This game is absolutely only for NTR Fans...and sorry, i´m none of them. I even tried to cheat the Lust to -999 and got rid of the scenes, but then nothing made any sense...talking about peeping gymguys, showerscenes and dreams that never happened is pointless...so if you like NTR get this game immediately, it has nice graphics and tons of fun for you, but if you dislike NTR like me, spare your poor HDD from wasting its space, you never get over the first Act without being disgusted or extremely confused.

 

[Gallion]

Didn't get used by the type of game with NTR, but I don't really mind.
Awesome game by far, very intriguing and we can already see a lot of possibility, ongoing fantasy that's great, excellent graphics as well.
I will definitely enjoy this when all the chapters are done and make the game completed otherwise I will too frustrating to wait every time I play a new update lol.

 

[Fargoon]

I liked the game but here are some of my thoughts ....

-> At the Introduction when the developer says that the characters moved to this city and wife made friends with the girl and then the best friend of husband comes home to stay ........ Basically the entire Intro will be better if it was playable so I or anyone playing the game can see the relationship first so the change to NTR/Cuckold/Cheating fetish actually works as its supposed to ..... Because Now if the NTR stuff happens as the game starts, I am just fapping to some good Renders, not enjoying the actual fetish to the fullest.

-> NTR or Cuckold or Cheating works more when you have seen the normal relationship for sometime than see is all crumble and Fapp along with it.:FeelsGoodMan:

-> I get that the NTR is quickly shown in the game was more of a business decision to get more patrons and eyeballs. It definitely worked for me. But the fetish is not fully utilized it won't work for all and will be forgettable. Most of the NTR I really enjoyed be a game or Doujin or comic are memorable because they made me say ..... :Big Inhale: That was some shit.

->And all of the Daz3D games in this website that say are NTR are just mild cheating or Cuckolding, doesn't mean I do not enjoy them.

I will keep up with this game to see what it becomes.:evilsmile:
Best of Luck for Typist. :eazyHype:

 

[dacris69]

Avoidable ntr but the dialogues and scenes after are fucked up, great work.

 

[Hotocochoro]

Keeping an eye on this one, hoping for some real ntr and cheating to be done since so far it's mostly been kinky stuff and fantasising.

 

[Angmir]

I understand the game is heavy leaning towards cuckolding.

But I would love if the game had a full NTR path. Where MC doesnt want his girlfriend taken, but she is reluctantly abused by men and slowly yelding to tempteations, even as she loves her fionce. So she does all this things in secret - rather than telling about everything etc ...

I would like to know what Author thinks about it.

 

[MorganFreemansToe]

Isn't the NTR unavoidable in this game? Even if you try to do the love path it still pretends like the shower stuff still happened. :FeelsBadMan:

 

[Ricardo100]

I think the Love path (which leads to the scene in the club where the MC fucks Claire in the stairs) is better than the other one so far. I hope that in due time we can have a dominant Claire/Sub MC path. For instance, in a very advanced situation (not one that happens anytime soon) perhaps she sleeps with the lover in the bedroom and makes MC sleep on the couch? And then we can have a well as a more balanced cuck path in which MC is still in the driving seat and tells her what to do or what not to do. The choice between those paths could be through choices in which MC forgives/accepts bahavior that he said he didnt allowed, such as "You cant fuck my friends" and such. On both paths Claire can do things wthout telling MC. There is no problem with that.

 

[TheTypist]

Hey everyone, I'm not dead or anything lol. Like I said before, I've been taking a break from forums, not from making the game. I have some stuff coming out soon. Won't say what, because then i'm immediately pressured like 'HEY YOU SAIDDDDDD", but no worries, all is well. Both in my dev life and personal life. In fact, i'm 30 days away from getting my real estate license here in California,so i'm super stoked about that as well.

Anyways, what are some cuckold/NTR scenarios you guys can imagine? I wan't to read what everyone has to say! Just whatever you can think of. It's cool to bring the community together through our common shared interests lol.

Reply with your scenarios (Try to be civil)

 

[Segnbora]

Personally, I'm not a fan of straight cuckolding, so I'll let those that are supply their own dream scenarios. My own preference is for consensual/open sex, which is only one flavor of the NTR genre and may not be the direction you intend to take the story.

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[Alleykatt]

It would be nice to have a game, for once, with "proper" NTR in it. I am not sure this is still possible though since we have already given the wife a chance to cheat.

What I mean by proper NTR, is set up a circumstance where the loving wife/girlfriend is "forced" to cheat on the MC. It is not her choice and not something she would do willingly. The MC is aware of it, and though he disapproves and is jealous and upset, he watches her do it. Despite herself, she becomes turned on and enjoys it, but doesn't initially admit it. This happens multiple times, and every time she enjoys it a little more until eventually she is an unrepentant slut doing it willingly, and even seeking it out, while humiliating the MC.

I prefer a non-violent and even non-coercive "forcing" personally, where some extenal factor makes them do it. (For example, maybe the MC is in a life threatening situation and to get something she needs to help him, she has to fuck someone.) But simple blackmail, or paying off a debt, are probably easiest. I remember one, admitedly far fetched, story I read where the wife developed a medical condition that could only be cured by drinking cum directly from the source, and of course the hudband's source turns out to be incompatible...