VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Become a Rock Star [v1.01] [Mr Jet]

Game:

- The Rendering is very good
- Animations are just average

Characters:

Most characters are Interesting.....

Story:

Story has a lot of weaknesses but is really interesting it offers different possibilities, but what really annoys me are these very Loooong miserable annoying dialogues that are really exhausting.

the MC is a man who has just moved to a Big City or.....?
...the should go out discover the City and not lead useless long dialogues in constant repetition.

Conclusion:

the game has undoubtedly good starting points but it is not one of the best games.
The development of the game is weak overall. The last update [v0.55] was disappointing. Nothing I haven't seen in the game before, it doesn't seem like progress but like a repeat!

...less pointless Dialogues more Animations would do this game good!

3/5

I have been trying to make it a habit to review that games/visual novels on here that I really enjoy, so spoilers, I really enjoyed this visual novel. Every aspect is at a high level.

The renders are excellent. Very clear and clean. Love the dept of field and portrait type shots. Some games do this for style points and fail. This game does it well.

The animations are very well done, and as time goes on they get better and better. Some of the best on you can find on here. There are multiple angles and more than one position, with dialog and such.

The story is also great and no I don't just like it because I love all types of rock music, it's written well but at the same time doesn't take itself so serious that it becomes boring, this is an adult game after all. But there are times were the writing shine and you can tell it is building up to something bigger. Good balance.

My favorite is the two red heads, I am sucker for red heads and in this game they are both sexy and know what they want, that's my type of women. That't nothing to take away from all the other heroines, they are all great looking and everyone has their preferences.

Become a Rock Star is highly recommend to anyone who loves a great adult visual novel.

Great work dev!

Excellent renders and animations, interesting characters, plenty of potential love interests resulting in a bunch of well-executed different paths making playing the game multiple times worthwhile. Strong soundtrack as well. Developer is also really active and helpful in this forum. One of the best games on here .

Just watched the latest update (0.55) release that took the creator about 3 months and actually I wasn't disappointed from a technical POV. Animations, sounds, everything's big in place, really! It just didn't touch me, you know. My darkblue eyes missed something believable, anything or anyone to worry about, maybe. But there's just another boyish manwhore (MC) playing bass guitar in a nameless backstreet rockband for a change. And every girl in town is ready to have unsafe sex with him - how romantic! I wish he was POV, too. Yeah, some guys might argue with me about having choices (just like go add her to your harem y/n) but the truth is: if you want to see new VN content every now and then, there's no other way than to go all in - given that you're not just here to loot images folders! I totally like to get involved in a well-wrought story that leads to adult scenes, eventually. It's just too "poly"shed to rock me.

Overall, above average and thus recommended to follow.

I absolutely love the work you have done. The game and characters all fit smoothly together. I really can't wait until the next update. Lisa is my favorite character and she is absolutely my goals for a wife. Keep up the amazing work!!!

Had checked out the CG for this game for awhile and always thought it was impressive. Finally decided to play and it is a really great game. The girls are all super hot. The renders are great quality as is the animation and the story itself is actually very good and moves along nicely. The only negative so far if I had to pick one is that the MC looks a little to rat like for the women to be falling all over him instantly but hey, maybe that the draw of the RockStar!
Definitely recommend it!

Fabulous game, the story is pretty good, the characters have realistic proportions for the most part, they have pretty realistic personalities, there is a ton of content. I love games that take a more realistic approach to relationships amongst other things. This is certainly one of those games.

This game has it all. It just needs more time to grow. Absolutely beyond excited to see more coming from this game, If you haven't tried it yet, do so.

A nice piece of life game

Not a masterpiece, but with enough qualities to make it worth trying

==== Chara Design :
The models are cute, and we have a good variety of looks. Their body shape are well done and sexy. Personality wise, we do see some differences of behaviour and approach, even if sometimes they have sudden sex drive/personality change that is a bit unrealistic and do not always fit.

==== Story/Background :
There is an effort to put a real life background and story. It is not always very interesting, but the context is there and you can get more or less invested into the game. The writing style is OK, but a bit scholar. I think it lacks a little fun and spontaneity to be great. The MC is maybe the character that I think could be improved in many ways, he is not very likeable. Music is quite good.

==== Sex/Animations :
The renders are good and numerous. The animations are quite simple and short but they are believable and they are getting better with the updates.
A lot of possible positions, and also some sex scenes are quite intense, especially the ones that are supposed to be filled with love (with lisa for example) that last part being well expressed during the scene. Great Job on that point.

==== Gameplay/Contents :
The contents are quite large, considering it is a VN. There is very few time wasted on grind or useless stuff, so the 5-6 hours of play that I had until v0.5 are new contents.
There is a hidden system of points, love points for each character, but also good/bad points on MC behaviour. The answers are a bit obvious to select, most of the time. Still it doesn't matter, because the main choices you will have is to select the girls you want to go further with, and the kind of relationship you want to have with them, which will impact the kind of guy you are. For the moment, I do not see the consequences of bad actions so much, but maybe that will happen later. Overall a good VN with choices and routes.
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We can feel this game was made with lot of thoughts and passion but the writing quality/pace, and the lack of fun prevents the game to be a masterpiece. It is not a very original game but it is still a good time to spend

One of the few games I had enjoyed, quite fast and objective, although the game underwent small changes due to Patreon regulations, as Jane was the MC's sister and this ended up being changed. Overall it's a great game with great scenes and characters, although I didn't really enjoy the story.

This is one the stronger games that has come out lately. The game has plenty of content and plenty of great girls, the renders are beautiful and there are some worthwhile decisions to make.
At the same time it is one of those RenPy games, so if you like the overall style of those games, you will enjoy this one. However if you don't, then you won't like this game either, because it doesn't really stand apart by much.
The game however is still worth 5 stars in my opinion, as it does what it should do - it offers you a great time leading to some very nice sex scenes, plus points for the rather nice animations.

Great game and excellent rendering. It's really worth playing. Each and every character is different and possess unique quality. As per the title, The protagonist tries to become a rock star and story is very well build towards it.
It's worth a shot and Mr Jet should keep doing this impressive work.

Excellent game, full of beautiful women. It's very difficult to choose one. :-D But it's also well written and with a story that is developing each updates. I can't wait to play more episodes!!! Very recommended! In this moment one of the best games

Become A Rock Star ( Overall Score: 10 / 8.8 )
( Best Feature: All female characters beautiful. You can't choose one )

Humor: 10 / 5
Character Development: 10 / 10
Story: 10 / 8.5
Update time: 10 / 9
Content for each update: 10 / 9
Render: 10 /10

This game is 3rd place at my best 5 games list.

excellent story, romance, characters and art top notch quality, love absolutely everything about this game keep up the great work and keep the updates coming thanks very much to the author and the uploader

First of all, Mr Jet is obviously solid guy. We have updates almost every month, very beautiful renders and a lot of content already.
But except all of that, this game is nothing more than average. It's basically 'girlfriend simulator'.
Story is boring - you are rich 'rebellious' boy, who wants to be a band leader. It seems to me like 'American Pie/High School Musical' crossover.
Don't get me wrong. Author's writing skills are good, but this game's plot make me sleepy.

I still recommend you to give 'Become A Rock Star' a chance, but only
if you have nothing better to do at the moment.

One of the best adult VN ever.

Pros:

• Amazing renders, probably the best of any game out there
• Awesome animation, some of the best I’ve seen
• The female characters are absolutely stunning
• Plenty of romantic option to choose from
• Lots of H action
• There is depth to all the character, you can’t help but fall for them all
• Very well written

Cons:

• None whatsoever

Truly an adult VN masterpiece. A must try for everyone. Mr Jet deserves all the support he gets and more. Keep up the great work

Review for 0.50.

The story is very good, mc is striving to achieve his goals, while father blindly tries to stop him is a good base. It has a lot of potential.

The girls are gorgeous, with different forms and personalities.
Music, renders, animation and gallery are very good.

Selina and the combo Lisa + Jade are my personal choice.

Note: Because a girl is on the game that doesn't mean that the mc must have sex with her (Julia, yes she looks fantastic), get over it.
94,1 out of 100
On my profile ->about->on the website there is a link with reviews of other games.

First of all this is very good game. Dev are make very good job. perfect render, easy story, and all of the model are so perfect.
This is my first review and just for this game.
Maybe more audio can make everything are perfect.

(Note: This review contains spoilers.)

This is a well-above average game with some serious flaws. But the flaws can mostly be fixed with some editing, if the game creator wants.

The good:

1) The women in this game are really gorgeous.

2) The renders of the characters are great. I sometimes stopped just to look at how nice the skin textures looked in close-up.

3) The animations are exceptionally well done. The hand-jobs were especially nice - the skin is shown sliding a tiny bit up and down with the woman's hand, something I don't recall ever seeing in any other game's hand job animation, and it makes it look much more real.

4) This is a matter of taste. But if you find ridiculously huge boobs and monstrously huge cocks a turn-off, like I do, then you'll be really happy with the human-proportioned character designs in this game.

5) Two of the characters - Lisa, the lead singer of your band, and Selina, a red-headed neighbor - are especially nicely written, and likable as people. That's particularly surprising with Selina, who at first seems like a typical "I have no character beyond being someone for the MC to fuck" character, but turns out to be more.

I honestly began to feel a little guilty about the way I was guiding the MC to constantly cheat on Lisa. And that I was cheating on Selina with Selina's mother. (But it's a porn game, after all.)

The bad:

1) There's a disturbing scene with Marie, a girl you party with after a concert, in which she clearly doesn't want to have sex with the MC but the MC tries to bully her into it. It's not actually a rape scene - he eventually relents, and Marie offers him a hand job instead - but it's way too close, and it left me feeling shitty.

And the worst thing is, there's no way to avoid it. There's no hint that a near-rape scene is coming until you're actually in the scene. And there's no way to avoid it, once you're in the scene, other than quitting the game. Game developer, if you're reading this: Please add a "It looks like you're not into this, Marie. That's totally fine - we don't have to do anything. Let's just go back downstairs to the party and have a nice time" option to this scene!

(If you want to avoid the scene, then you can skip partying with Marie and Eva by going onto the bus with Lisa instead. Or, if you go to the party, stick to Eva like glue and avoid ever being alone with Marie. The good news is, Eva WANTS to have sex with you.)

2) The MILF looks 25 years old. 30 at the oldest. And she has an adult daughter.

3) There's an ongoing plot about the MC trying to build his career as a rock star despite his evil father's machinations, and it's very boring, and it goes on and on and on and on. It feels like a story a 12 year old makes up - "I'm going to form a rock band, and we're an instant hit, and everyone loves us," etc etc.

Sit down and edit all of these sequences! At least half of the dialog having to do with the evil dad and the rock career could be taken out without losing anything. And the game will be much better for it.

On the whole, a much-better-than-average game.

This was a very entertaining and cool game to play.

I loved the little Rock Star-esque minigames, I truly enjoyed the characters and writing. Sure, some of it was very predictable, but who cares?

It is a cool little game with memorable moments and characters (a tribute to the overall writing) and I look forward to more.