VN Ren'Py Completed Become a Rock Star [v1.01] [Mr Jet]

[Mormont]

From a story telling perspective, I think it's too early to reveal Emma's true intentions
Cause now I DEFINITELY want nothing to do with her. And then you're having to write scenarios forcing her and MC together- and the illusion of choice is thrown out the window.
There's a lot of throw away lines written here. "Julia drank some wine and put the glass back" as we're watching her do the action being described. Great for prose, but a visual novel/game makes it redundant. I'd suggest thinking this more as a comic book. We only need to see the dialogue, what the character is thinking, and the occasional narration (by a character in a story).

I don't think she has any true intentions tbh the part that you're talking about She refused to do anymore for the Dad at the end in the text message plus Julia will be keeping tabs on her she won't let her mess with her brother

 

[Cesco]

I don't think she has any true intentions tbh the part that you're talking about She refused to do anymore for the Dad at the end in the text message plus Julia will be keeping tabs on her she won't let her mess with her brother

Yeah, she refused. But that’s not the last you’ll see of her. The dad is gonna force her to make more of an effort to get in MC’s pants.

 

[Mt PewPew]

MrJet said no incest ....

No incest sucks (or not as the case may be). That still bums me out because technically, that would also prevent us from having a threesome with Selina and Rosa.

 

[Mormont]

Yeah, she refused. But that’s not the last you’ll see of her. The dad is gonna force her to make more of an effort to get in MC’s pants.

Force her? that's hardly going to look good for him and if he did force her what's to stop her from telling the MC about it or Julia even, that text message she sent shows she is not easily manipulated into doing anything.

 

[Pitrik]

No incest sucks (or not as the case may be). That still bums me out because technically, that would also prevent us from having a threesome with Selina and Rosa.

I know, no incest with S and R it's hard to resist ( Selina is my second fav after Lisa) but I think that Selina loves a lot the MC now like a boyfriend and not only as a friend with benefits

 

[Mytez]

No incest sucks (or not as the case may be). That still bums me out because technically, that would also prevent us from having a threesome with Selina and Rosa.

I don't think Selina would like to share with her mom, or anyone, after the last update. She seems to like MC probably more than she expected.

 

[Mt PewPew]

I don't know, Selina is fairly adventurous when it comes to trying new things.

 

[Eerie Entity]

I don't know, Selina is fairly adventurous when it comes to trying new things.

Exhibitionism and stuff like that, yeah, but sharing would be quite weird even for her, and especially with her own mom, haha, and like Mytez said, things seem to be getting more serious between Selina and MC, stronger feelings coming into play
But IF there will be a threesome, with whoever, I hope it's optional, I don't particularly care for MFF when one or both girls are LIs, nope

 

[Galanegosatros]

Hi, does anyone have a list of the soundtracks used?

 

[lambdadw]

Hi, does anyone have a list of the soundtracks used?

Inside the game archive there are such files:

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p.s. I liked the old background of the main menu more. It was light and more suited to this beautiful melody (and what is happening on the plot).

 

[Galanegosatros]

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p.s. I liked the old background of the main menu more. It was light and more suited to this beautiful melody (and what is happening on the plot).

Thank you very much!

 

[Pitrik]

I found these cleaning my gallery..I had forgotten that I had saved these

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Mytez Do you like your Jane?

 

[Mytez]

@Mytez: Do you like your Jane?

This world needs more Janes. How could you say no to this?

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[Pitrik]

This world needs more Janes. How could you say no to this?

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I can't

 

[ahfbe]

Guys can u tell me how much long this game is? Cause i really love long games

 

[speedturtle]

Hm but maybe there could be a turn in the game: it could be discovered that either the MC or his sister are adopted .. that would solve the technical problem of incest ...

Maybe we find out that MC´s real father was the Postman and not this brainfucked asshole

Dude, I'd legit laugh if that happened. The dad was cheating, so Ig it'd be alright if the mom slept if the postman.

 

[Ennoch]

Seriously. Jane for main love interest!

 

[Mytez]

Seriously. Jane for main love interest!

The cheat points should be with Jane, not with Lisa. Fuck that, if you choose Jane you should get locked out of the other girls, because why the hell would you want anyone else.

 

[Ennoch]

because why the hell would you want anyone else.

What are you talking about.. there are others?

 

[Mytez]

What are you talking about.. there are others?

There's a couple of ladies you get to meet during the "Before Jane" time frame, but as you said, they are irrelevant as we are living now in the "After Jane" one.