Gwinb777
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Anyway I don't know you guys, but the Bar boss and Nicole REALLY need some love.
My ears are burning did someone mention, Lara Croft I think if I saw Lara wearing something like that I'd die on the spotThey both have this "Lara Croft vibe", if you let me. It perfectly fits them.
Yes! she has been severely neglected but the times we have seen her I liked what I sawAnyway I don't know you guys, but the Bar boss and Nicole REALLY need some love.
1) yeah me tooMy ears are burning did someone mention, Lara Croft I think if I saw Lara wearing something like that I'd die on the spot
Yes! she has been severely neglected but the times we have seen her I liked what I saw
The boss we have had hardly any time with her at least with Nicole there was the coffee date.1) yeah me toohowever what I mean is since Caroline in that fishnet is a killer, this also goes for Jane, with those bidies...
2) Which one, the boss or Nicole?
Wait wait wait, did I really miss a date with Nicole???!! I wanna cry now.The boss we have had hardly any time with her at least with Nicole there was the coffee date.
I'm getting my names mixed up here my bad the coffee date was with AnnaWait wait wait, did I really miss a date with Nicole???!! I wanna cry now.![]()
Damn you almost gave me an heart attack, you know that?!I'm getting my names mixed up here my bad the coffee date was with AnnaWe haven't had any date with Nicole yet
No incest in this gameAmazing Renders. Is something gonna happen with the MC's sister in the future?
No incest in this game
Hm but maybe there could be a turn in the game: it could be discovered that either the MC or his sister are adopted .. that would solve the technical problem of incest ...No incest in this game
Yep that would surely be the icing of the cake!Maybe we find out that MC´s real father was the Postman and not this brainfucked asshole
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Maybe in this next updateWhen are we gonna be able to bang Selina's mom? She's smoking hot and practically begging to get piped.
MrJet said no incest ....Hm but maybe there could be a turn in the game: it could be discovered that either the MC or his sister are adopted .. that would solve the technical problem of incest ...![]()
Yes... See the last preview image and my post about newsReally? Nice!
I don't think she has any true intentions tbh the part that you're talking about She refused to do anymore for the Dad at the end in the text message plus Julia will be keeping tabs on her she won't let her mess with her brotherFrom a story telling perspective, I think it's too early to reveal Emma's true intentions
Cause now I DEFINITELY want nothing to do with her. And then you're having to write scenarios forcing her and MC together- and the illusion of choice is thrown out the window.
There's a lot of throw away lines written here. "Julia drank some wine and put the glass back" as we're watching her do the action being described. Great for prose, but a visual novel/game makes it redundant. I'd suggest thinking this more as a comic book. We only need to see the dialogue, what the character is thinking, and the occasional narration (by a character in a story).