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It's been a long time since I posted any artwork. I'll try to fix that. The first piece of summer art.
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didn't recognize lisa with long hair.
there are plenty of incest games, not every game has to have same kinks.
Aristos
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I agree with Machete and the others who commented on how superficial the story has ended up being.
I urge you to replay the game from the beginning, as I did before the latest update, and try to pay attention to the plot. Now try to think whether or not you were expecting something different when you first played the game 2 or 3 years ago, e.g. a more carefully developed story about the group's rise to fame and the dad's foul play.
You can summarize the actual plot on a notebook page, and the rest is just scenes that could be replaced with anything else (for example, going to Barry's party is just an excuse to have sex with Lisa&Jade or with Emma, which could have occurred in any other setting; none of what happens there has any relevance in the story at all; maybe Jacob meeting his new girlfriend there, but again, that's only an excuse for more eye candy).
Most of the time it feels like the only thing that matters in this game is which girls or girls you choose to be with. Once you've made that decision early on, the rest is linear and quite "kinetic-novelish" (you either succeed or are dumped), only being able to decide (again) which of the so-called "side girls" you want to bang in the process. Also, the total lack of consequences of your involvement with the "side girls" should be noted.
I urge you to replay the game from the beginning, as I did before the latest update, and try to pay attention to the plot. Now try to think whether or not you were expecting something different when you first played the game 2 or 3 years ago, e.g. a more carefully developed story about the group's rise to fame and the dad's foul play.
You can summarize the actual plot on a notebook page, and the rest is just scenes that could be replaced with anything else (for example, going to Barry's party is just an excuse to have sex with Lisa&Jade or with Emma, which could have occurred in any other setting; none of what happens there has any relevance in the story at all; maybe Jacob meeting his new girlfriend there, but again, that's only an excuse for more eye candy).
Most of the time it feels like the only thing that matters in this game is which girls or girls you choose to be with. Once you've made that decision early on, the rest is linear and quite "kinetic-novelish" (you either succeed or are dumped), only being able to decide (again) which of the so-called "side girls" you want to bang in the process. Also, the total lack of consequences of your involvement with the "side girls" should be noted.
Playing X games has distorted our reality to such a point that the best way to fuck a MILF seems to be to start dating her daughter
Sage is way more beautiful than Rosa. Rosa has overall a sexier body with those hips and ass. Maybe Sage would develop a fuller figure as she grows older
Honestly I never expected anything more, this game is pretty consistent. No deep story or anything, doesn't push any boundaries but its overall a typical adult game with good execution. The pacing is far better here than in many other games here, the dev really didn't try to milk any of the romances which made them more satisfying imho. The girls were also hot and some were memorable. I'm looking forward to the dev's next gameI agree with Machete and the others who commented on how superficial the story has ended up being.
I urge you to replay the game from the beginning, as I did before the latest update, and try to pay attention to the plot. Now try to think whether or not you were expecting something different when you first played the game 2 or 3 years ago, e.g. a more carefully developed story about the group's rise to fame and the dad's foul play.
You can summarize the actual plot on a notebook page, and the rest is just scenes that could be replaced with anything else (for example, going to Barry's party is just an excuse to have sex with Lisa&Jade or with Emma, which could have occurred in any other setting; none of what happens there has any relevance in the story at all; maybe Jacob meeting his new girlfriend there, but again, that's only an excuse for more eye candy).
Most of the time it feels like the only thing that matters in this game is which girls or girls you choose to be with. Once you've made that decision early on, the rest is linear and quite "kinetic-novelish" (you either succeed or are dumped), only being able to decide (again) which of the so-called "side girls" you want to bang in the process. Also, the total lack of consequences of your involvement with the "side girls" should be noted.
Playing X games has distorted our reality to such a point that the best way to fuck a MILF seems to be to start dating her daughter
Sage is way more beautiful than Rosa. Rosa has overall a sexier body with those hips and ass. Maybe Sage would develop a fuller figure as she grows older
The lack of a happy ending with Emma is definitely disappointing. She already got plenty of focus, its not like she was just some throwaway side girl. It wouldn't really be difficult to give us a real ending with her. She was more interesting than some of the main girls for me tbh (only Selina is better) and her relationship with the MC felt more meaningful because of their historyI'm so sad we won't see Emma again, she's so beautiful
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Machete
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I would't go as far as to say it's a superficial story. It wasn't a whole universe a stake story from the beginning, it's a young adult VN about starting your own life. I just think that the conflict-payoff timing of the narration have been poorly concieved, which is, indeed a big flaw, but it's also a kind of flaw that requires some serious expertise in narrative to avoid. Very precious few VNs on this site do a really good job on this aspect. Overall it's a very enjoyable VN and the characters are well made. Unfortunately, for the aforementioned general problem and the lenght of the story, it feels like nothing much is going on anymore. But, also, since girls started to dump MC, i think the final version is closeby, so, in the end, i think the final result will be ok.
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Is there any jade only route or not?
Every time i try If i don't want to be with lisa i lose jade too to her!!
Every time i try If i don't want to be with lisa i lose jade too to her!!
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Hard agree, at this point I only play the game to unlock new lewd scenes. It's a shame coz at one point I genuinely thought this game had a lot of potential with its story and could've been something special.
A struggling rock band's rise to fame story could've gone in so many directions but things just go so smoothly, there's no character growth, no obstacle to overcome, everything gets resolved super convenient, and all the scenes/dialogues end up as filler for us to just go from one sex scene to the next.
This is why I liked Emma so much, her being offered money by MC's dad to seduce him and bring him back could've been done so much better, instead it got resolved too quick. Dad makes up with MC quite easily too, and Julia getting shot was so forced and random, done for no reason really but again, it got dealt with pretty quick.
Anna barely has anything to even do with the larger story, why even is she a main girl, Nicole and Emma both have more involvement in the MC's story arc than her.
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Thank you! This is exactly what I meant with my post.
I support especially the sentences I have highlighted.
iam a little bit disappointed... the update has not much content when i think about that the last update was half a year ago. So this is really slow development in my book for nearly 6 month work.
And the story gets more and more pointless. There are zero struggles, all is going just fine in the end without real difficulties. Its just to "smooth" when i look back how this game started.
After all its just al light-hearted storybackup for the lewd scenes with the girls, and most of the girls arent even involved in the story. There was much more potential in this game i think.
Its a good game though, but a lot of potential (especially storywise) is gone overboard.
And the story gets more and more pointless. There are zero struggles, all is going just fine in the end without real difficulties. Its just to "smooth" when i look back how this game started.
After all its just al light-hearted storybackup for the lewd scenes with the girls, and most of the girls arent even involved in the story. There was much more potential in this game i think.
Its a good game though, but a lot of potential (especially storywise) is gone overboard.
I just started the game recently and I'm on the part where the MC, Lisa and Jade have a threesome.
I see between the scenes that one of the first of Seline I can't access it, the one where the miniature of her comes out with her legs spread apart, I think it's before the move.
Regarding the story, something normal is to see the mc go after all the women in the game, but here he gets into a romantic relationship with almost all of them, being the boyfriend of Seline, Lisa, Anna and Jane, who knows what will happen when find out.
ah, I see that good and bad points are received and I do not know if it is useful, I choose to be good and for now no problem.
What makes me sad is to see that Julia is adorning, I don't know, they could have made a joint scene of Mc with Jane and Jacob (for example) with Julia celebrating anything, with alcohol in between.
Or even, it would be worth saying that someone is adopted and thus avoids the problem that one has with incest.
It would have been nice too, Jane and Julia.
I see between the scenes that one of the first of Seline I can't access it, the one where the miniature of her comes out with her legs spread apart, I think it's before the move.
Regarding the story, something normal is to see the mc go after all the women in the game, but here he gets into a romantic relationship with almost all of them, being the boyfriend of Seline, Lisa, Anna and Jane, who knows what will happen when find out.
ah, I see that good and bad points are received and I do not know if it is useful, I choose to be good and for now no problem.
What makes me sad is to see that Julia is adorning, I don't know, they could have made a joint scene of Mc with Jane and Jacob (for example) with Julia celebrating anything, with alcohol in between.
Or even, it would be worth saying that someone is adopted and thus avoids the problem that one has with incest.
It would have been nice too, Jane and Julia.