VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Become a Rock Star [v1.01] [Mr Jet]

The game has an interesting story & characters on the whole, so why the 3 Star rating? Well I would give this game a higher rating as all the other characters look great, all except for 1, the protagonist, I'm sorry but the guy looks like a cr*ckhead & it knocks at least 2 stars off right there. We are honestly supposed to buy that all these women are fawning over a guy who looks like he's waiting outside a methadone clinic in his free time? Just no! That is a shame because other than this extremely malnourished looking guy all the other animations & characters look great.

Although i never rated any VNs this gonna be the first one im gonna rate it.
(Please Excuse me for my broken English, as English is not my native language)

First of all one of the best Vn I've played, a friend of mine recommend it to me in the year 2018 Dec. If it wasn't for him, hell i wouldn't know about this game.
MrJet really nailed it . The storyline, the renders, the models,the animation,and the music of course how can i forget, they are excellent and the Girls/LI/MG are freakin gorgeously and smokin hot, especially my favourite girl Selina -a kind and soft hearted person who cared for the Mc from the beginning. Best Vn ever because this was one of the first Vn I've played.
I don't know what else to say, im speechless as hell. Looking forward to to the final update of the game. Cheers and kudos to the Dev and his team.Thank you for this excellent Game.
This is a review on the current version of the game v 0.90

Ill start with saying that this game is really freaking good in terms of quality and polish: animations, ost, writing, english, story, renders.

BUT I just teel like I have to tell you that this game is ABSOLUTELY NOT a harem or a power fantasy, your decisions will have negative consequences in the future + it gets pretty real towards the end of the current update, this game is not afraid to make you feel guilt and regret for your past decisions and hit you with the so called reality that if you try to walk a thin rope youll eventually fall. so take that into consideration when you decide to immerse yourself in this masterpiece

Wow!Wow!Wow! What a game! From the CGs and animations to the story to the dialogue to the SEX. It's all there. Love the fact that after some time your choice of LI pretty much locks you with her although some other scenes still available depending on your choices. Although I'd love to be able to continuously bang every female in the game it would become meaningless. Choices do matter. And the replayability is just spot on. GREAT!.

Beautiful story with depth and a reason for getting emotionally invested one way or another in literally every character. This is normally not that much my style of game, as I prefer sandbox games that have a lot of "missions" to accomplish, but this is beautifully told thus far and I am intrigued and looking forward to the continuation.

This is probably the only VN I took a long break from just because of the quality of the writing.

It's competent, but not meaningful. All the characters feel paper thin, but somehow stretched out.

What works in this game is the girls being attractive. Can't deny that. The render work and the animations are great. I didn't encounter any bugs, and despite my grumpiness about the characters, the plot pacing is decent enough to keep you going.

However, I will harp about the quality of the character writing. There's a lot of it here that doesn't like it brings anything to the table. There's no pop to it. None of the characters feel uniquely like a person. They're more of an archetype and that's it.

While the pacing is there, the plot points themselves aren't really... theres's notihng the MC can't handle, because the MC is just that good. This is a weird complaint, I know, but I mean like the conflicts barely *feel* like an issue.

Also, the MC comes off as skeevy more than anything. It's one thing to check someone out and make a move, it's another for the MC to constantly say stuff like "We'll see about next time, hehehe" without any sense of self awareness.

A good example is The Headmaster, from The Headmaster, who definitely is a skeevy creepo, but the entire game is self-aware so it's funny as hell as opposed to feeling gross.

That's sort of the last emotion I'd expect to feel from a porn heavy adult game.

Anyways, if you get past the beginning and enjoy it, the rest of the game is similar.

Great game definitely love the design of all the characters (male and female) none of them look off or disproportionate, plot is quite exciting, sex scene are great, background music was not bad, hopefully updates will keep coming. One more thing, idk hope y'all do it but y'all made me fall for Selina <3. Really looking forward for this game

Im gonna be quick about this one:
The story and the characters, for some reason i didnt like them very much, at some point the game was a skipfest for me i skipped a lot. I just got bored of the characters, i dont know why, maybe because the MC is so full of himself and some characters were to easy.

The music is there but doesnt help at all. That thing at the end after the Hospital scene didnt make sense, 2 grls left after learned they been cheated and next day like nothing happened.

For the good:
The girls are really hot, most of them, not Jane for me. Still some dev went a little farther to make girls look better that this specially the groin area, but overall this might be one of the best, some girls even look good for a real human female standard.
Sex scenes i think they are pretty good, maybe to pasionate even with people who you just got aquainted with, but they are good nonetheless. No many lesbian stuff, but even those sceens are pretty decent in the directionand the camera shots and stuff. Kisses are a little too much but better that than pother stuf that some devs do. Animations are quite good also so the visual department is a 8.5 out of 10.

Thats my opinion.

I debated playing this game for a while, but I ran out of other things to try so here we are. I wish I had other things to do.

CONS
I have seen comparison to other games in the reviews and I have to ask, are we all playing the same games? This game... the characters are so shallow and so bad... I initially liked the concept of moving out and leaving the family but the MC soon started acting just like all the other entitled a-holes out there. A cocky douche who is just not worth scraping off the bottom of your boots. There is nothing to like about him. I mean, being a bartender is NOT an easy job and you just don't pick it up in a couple hours training. But of course, super douche picks it up in no time.

The dialogue is mediocre and there are silly problems throughout the game. One of the first choices you have to make is if your are going to continue to look at your neighbor across the way. If you stop looking and don't get caught, the next time you look the girl acts as if you did get caught. When I looked at the code, there was no check in there at all! So what was the point of the option. The game is filled with this kind of stuff.

The story is fine, but the dialogue and the women that faun all over the MC just make it hard to view.

PROs
Well... Despite some of the coding issues/choices, the dev is talented. I mean, artistically, the game is really good. The renders are great and there are a lot of them. They have clearly taken the time to put together a good looking production. I saw very few render errors. The framing was good and the lighting was well staged. It really is a good looking production.

Also the 'content' was well done and there seems to be a really good mix of it and the story.

The setting were all really good too. There were a number of locations I had never seen before; that could just be because of they way they were staged, but regardless, it was nicely done.

Conclussion:
I did play it again a second time and changed the MC's name to "Super Douche" and that at least made it humorous, but this game is a walking contradiction. On one hand you have bad characters and horrible dialogue and on the other, you have beautiful images and great scenery. Just don't expect to get involved in the characters.

one of the best games I have ever played, the characters look great, the story is really gripping, choices seem to really matter, and man does sticking you dick in everything have consequences, brilliant all around, and I can not wait for the game to update.

Excellent character models throughout. Very similar to Acting Lessons and the Elsaverse games building a nice slow romance up while telling a good story. Still in the middle of playing this one but nothing has let me down yet.

Great renders and visuel, great sex scenes but ...

Poor dialogue, poor scenario ... and for a music related story, fucking repetitive poor music ! Come on, when they rehearse or play their gig, there could have been some really original music playing (e.g. Melody game, which is fucking boring but at least as some nice music) ...

Still Good, but sometime a pain. At least some stuff happens after 0.7.

For me, it is a really excelent game, with a lot of options of relationship with a lot of girls and a cool story... Good graphics, good scenes os sex... excelent job guys!!! I am waiting for the final release with great expectation!!!

I usually do not leave reviews, but this game just gave too much pleasure and impression to be silent. This is a real masterpiece, one of the best that I was lucky to play. This game can compete for the first place in my heart with "Being a Dik" and "Milfy city". Thanks for the ability to change the transparency of the background for the text, for the gallery and a lot of space to save. Many creators in vain do not pay their attention to the settings panel. And here I put 5 out of 5. There are a lot of really beautiful, realistic, sexy characters. For characters 5 out of 5. For 3D graphics in sex scenes 5 out of 5. For the interesting plot 5 out of 5. Thank you very much for this cool game. I am sure it was created by the most talented, the most creative, the best masters of their craft. I'm just burning with desire to see the sequel. If I had the opportunity, I would not spare the money, for such a sweet pleasure.

A refreshing and enjoyable first playthrough! The theme, the characters and the universe were all beautifully realised. It has it's faults, a lot of romance paths lead to dead-ends. Hopefully, as the game matures those paths will be fleshed out...but I totally enjoyed playing it!

I Really enjoyed this even though it could have been so much more better if they had focused on improving the story cuz the premise had a lot of potential. Thus instead of polishing the story they prioritised more on introducing a new girl for the MC to plough. Still no complaints there since all the girls that we meet are insanely hot it was so difficult to choose a girl sometimes as just when I decide that I'll make a girl mine they introduce another hottie thus more dilemma for me. Sex animations are really gorgeous & is definitely 1 of the best I've ever seen. I was a lil disappointed with the story but overall it was a fun ride indeed
Finally the game is completed & am glad to see my fav girls Jane & Selina got the happy endings they deserve

Solid game. Overall I liked the experience.

Renders
Good choices for the love interest appearances in general. Only major complaints are not too much variety in body types and the main character looks kinda skeezy to me, but at least he's not bland. They are capable of looking like people and have emotions so that makes it very solid in my book.

Characters
Strong difference in personalities which I appreciate. Gives you something to latch onto. Only complaint is you keep taunting me with lovely characters of color and they either A) are one night stands or B) destined only for my friend. You have like 10 love interests. Can one of them be non European?

Story
Story overall is fine. There's nothing wrong with a rich kid background, just seems a bit too easy for the MC to get the help they need, but hey, it works as a vehicle to tell this specific story.

Overall very solid. Only complaints center around personal opinion and nothing objectively wrong. Highly reccomend.

Mediocre game
I dont like VN at all, but that doesnt put weight on my opinion here for sure. I bother rating the game , because I really do appreciate the effort of the author.
Cons:
1. Dialogues! Dialogues! Dialogues!
"Hey , is that the same Barry we crashed his party last week"... Seriously? You assume we dont know who Barry is and moreover the characters dont know who Barry is neither, even though they had a blast at his house?
Man, your dialogues are for retards and are such a TURN OFF.
Be smart! Think what we might think! You are very very far from that.

2. Characters and shallow relationships. So many girls, so many names. Nothing intersting and unique happening with them. Everything is super predictable. Its like you wanted to fill this game with pussies and fuck all the meat. Ewww...so clickable. No soul.

3. The polot is very...nothing is happening.No drama. No loss. No tears. No jelousy...except some lousy ex-gf showing up in the middle of the story.Nothing. Again - no soul.

4.No choises, no different paths. Literally visual novel. VNs are simple set of renders telling a story. In your case MC doesnt participate. Whats worse with lame dialogues.

5. Stop using the "Hand behind the neck" pose !!!! Guys, come on!!!! Or the pose with hand on the top of the head.
NOBODY DOES THAT!
As soon as i see such a pose in the game , its all clear to me how much effort the author puts in his work. Almost nothing. What , you are all after the easy money in Patreon? Really?

Pros:
1. Renders - I dont know if thats a Pro actually. Its just mediocre job. The lighting is ok though.
2. A lot of content. I admit that. Alot of work in 10000 lines of lame dialogue , ready-to-find poses and pre-set lighting for renders. But still the effort in all this content is alot , worths appreciation. No sarcasm here.
3. There is something in this game that makes you keep clicking, even though its super boring and ..mediocre. I really dont know what is it...may the plot... I caught myself in spending time to read the dialogues between the band members and the father.

Overall:
Again , alot of effort worths appreciation went into the wrong direction of building up content amount. Alot of polishing needed. Still the game is clickable.

Become a Rock Star v0.90 review

I liked:
- great graphics and animations
- hot women and I mean HOT, all of them made me wish for a harem path especially Rosa, Emma, Nicole and Catherine, and even an incest patch because of Julia and Rachel, but since non of those seemed possible, Jane is enough for me.
- hot sex scenes coupled with dirty talk
- the story is good
- the player can choose whether to have a sexual or romantic relationship with the other female characters
- well written dialogues
- I like how the story between the MC and Jane and how their relationship evolved
- I like the story and relationship between the MC and Emma as well and how they matured through time

I did not like:
- there are times that the MC is so cocky and thinks and acts like a douche

Hoping for more updates to come. 5 stars for me.

Yeah man I don't know whether to give this game 1 or 5 stars, frankly but right now I'm going with the latter because anything that can inflict this amount of emotional pain on me and get me to want to replay it in an attempt to avoid said pain deserves praise-as much as I want to pout and hate/want to change how the plot itself goes.
I guess I'm an idiot because you're told repeatedly by the MC/others that you'll face consequences for dating multiple girls at once but I hoped there'd be at least some chance to work shit out with them once it was out in the open but you're not given the opportunity-they just break up with you-no remotely 'harem' ending insofar as I've found.
That'd be my only real complaint. While I applaud the realism of it all-and the realness of the plot in general-it really, really sucks to go through said scenes so when/if you play be ready for them if you try to go for all the girls in one playthrough. You will lose almost everyone if not everyone at a certain point. The attached walkthrough mod will encourage you to go after everyone so be aware of said fact beforehand. Heavily recommend reading the guide beforehand instead and reading through the end of it to avoid said drama as I should've done because it really hits you in the feels when the girls find out you've been cheating on them-as you/I possibly deserve in such cases. In any case the plot is good/tracks both logically and emotionally moreso than most other VNs and that can't be ignored.
All that being said the animations are all goddamn amazing-every girl is hot as hell hence the temptation to go for everyone and as i mentioned the plot is pretty damn good for a VN, so I can't rate it lower than 4 stars in good conscience but if you're looking for a happy harem game you will not find it here. Choose wisely or lose it all.
Should also add you're essentially, initially, forced to be with a girl who, if you don't avoid literally all others, you will have to break up with at some point. This is tested/proven after several playthroughs
Edit: Fuck it-can't in good conscience give this less than 5 stars. While it's not directly indicated you lose almost all of the girls by pursuing all of them it is at least hinted at and every path is at least justified if not enjoyable to pursue if you want one girl over the others. But you will have to choose. That is the virtue and/or the vice of this game. Be it cruel or comforting this machine arrives, unerringly, at the truth. That's what it does