Beginnings
A bunch of typos and grammar problems. (example Adriana telling MC she "definatly doesn't work for his father", should be definitely)
Sometimes thoughts being as chatting instead of thoughts (example after asking Adriana her pay and why it has to work out. MC says "she is definitely hiding something)
Wrong person talking at a time. (example explaining the college MC says one like that should be Adriana)
MC not pushing on some aspects like why she hates turtles... Who the fuck hates turtles?
Being nice has her say "and there will be time were we won't agree" it is "where" but she also says it again 4 or so text boxes later.
("My degree on the wall" but she said she didn't have one)
"Protaganist wake up" I feel like the dev didn't play through their own game to test things.
With the sex scene choice. It might just be easier to have a line of the Pov and then a single line that chooses speed, That way you can change pov and speed with only like 10 buttons instead of 30.
Images sometimes are out of order, like the UNI having the girl in black walk by, then it shows her far away and the next image she is close again.
Having the phone on the same background as the text box makes it hard to read the info that goes behind the text box
Using a transitioning sex camera is nice, other than it may transition a bit quickly between
Why does the MC think the principal is a male? Adriana tells him in the car that they are a she.
I would suggest trying to make the UI look professional looking.
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The game seems to have good potential, but really needs to be cleaned up.
Like go into the phone, click the camera, clicking pictures of the faces, some of them are of the house and MC entering.
Adriana animation not there.
Dice rolls seem way too generous, being it seems it is a 0 - 100 roll, having a 20 result in a success seems odd, why not 50+?
Also like failing to pull out, then MC telling her to take that load. That seems backwards.
Firsth I would like to ask which version you are playing? because I know that the word deegre should not be in the newest version unless I have included a wrong file somewhere. the degree on the wall should be "my diploma on the wall..."
As for not pushing why she hates turtles, I do not wish to mean or sassy but if I were to push information that is given to the player al the time I would have to do 10x as much work.
"Protaganist wake up" That is also a bug that should have been fixed, unless I did something wrong which is why I'm asking which version you are playing.
"With the sex scene choice. It might just be easier to have a line of the Pov and then a single line that chooses speed, That way you can change pov and speed with only like 10 buttons instead of 30."
That is not how the code works, all the buttons are assigned an animation. As far as I know, right now there is no way to change animation speed within renpy without resorting to a lot of python. So for example right now the code is as follows
imagebutton: # POV
idle "Screens/Pov1.png"
imagebutton: # Very slow
idle "Screens/VS.png"
action Show ("AC1") #has to be a screen all has same tag sex so it can only show 1 sex screen at the time
screen AC1():
zorder 12
add "AdrianaCowgirl1"
tag sex
screen AC2():
zorder 12
add "AdrianaCowgirl2"
tag sex
image AdrianaCowgirl1 = Movie(play="Animations/A1CVS.webm", loop=True, fps=60, size=(1920,1080)) #channel="movie_dp"
image AdrianaCowgirl2 = Movie(play="Animations/A1CS.webm", loop=True, fps=60, size=(1920,1080)) #channel="movie_dp"
"Having the phone on the same background as the text box makes it hard to read the info that goes behind the text box"
Will look into that, haven't thought about it but definitely going to take an extra look at it.
"Using a transitioning sex camera is nice, other than it may transition a bit quickly between"
I agree, it's very hard to Jude how fast the camera will be or if there will be any faults with it without rendering a draft of the animation. which means longer render times. So it was a judgement call on my end, hopefully I will get better the longer I work with animations.
"Why does the MC think the principal is a male? Adriana tells him in the car that they are a she."
This is also a bug that should have been fixed in the new version?
"I would suggest trying to make the UI look professional-looking."
I am only soo god with 2d graphics and graphic elements, doing that would either take a lot of time on my part or cost money. so, for now, it will be like it is. But it's something I am looking into.
I believe that was all if I missed something let me know
With Regards ZYZ
