VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [Dr PinkCake]

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Holy Bacchus

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shazba said:
So what you're saying is that you're not poking holes in how the mc pokes holes, you're only poking holes in the times when the mc isn't poking holes.?! o_O
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When it comes to "porn game logic", it's easier to justify certain things against that benchmark, but when it comes to real world logic, there are some things that perhaps could be a bit better. Mostly I think it comes down to certain scenes/moments playing out the same way regardless of the actions of the player/MC and that perhaps a couple of different variations might have helped. Most notably, I'd say, these moments would be:
  • The MC's reaction at the start of Ep 4
  • The library scene in Ep 4
  • The Cathy scene in Ep 5
  • The sauna scene with Bella in Ep 5
  • The Quinn scene in Ep 6.
These are scenes/moments that, in my view, don't conform particularly well to how the player/MC could have been throughout the game and the interactions they've had, and so at least having a couple of alternate versions in some of these instances could have helped them to play out better.
 
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Holy Bacchus said:
When it comes to "porn game logic", it's easier to justify certain things against that benchmark, but when it comes to real world logic, there are some things that perhaps could be a bit better. Mostly I think it comes down to certain scenes/moments playing out the same way regardless of the actions of the player/MC and that perhaps a couple of different variations might have helped. Most notably, I'd say, these moments would be:
  • The MC's reaction at the start of Ep 4
  • The library scene in Ep 4
  • The Cathy scene in Ep 5
  • The sauna scene with Bella in Ep 5
  • The Quinn scene in Ep 6.
These are scenes/moments that, in my view, don't conform particularly well to how the player/MC could have been throughout the game and the interactions they've had, and so at least having a couple of alternate versions in some of these instances could have helped them to play out better.
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actually, in my opinion, the biggest obstacle to believing everything we see (which also leads to imagining holes where they don't necessarily exist) is that there are entire events that leave no traces.

I often tell it jokingly but that Mc exaggerates when Josy arrives is acceptable, but that he goes crazy after having just returned from the threesome with Riona and Quinn is simply ridiculous. if I have to accept it I have to conclude that Mc is mentally ill, and I don't want to play a mentally ill person (even in a game).

and there are several of these scenes that to appreciate the plot you have to completely forget they happened.
 
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felicemastronzo said:
actually, in my opinion, the biggest obstacle to believing everything we see (which also leads to imagining holes where they don't necessarily exist) is that there are entire events that leave no traces.

I often tell it jokingly but that Mc exaggerates when Josy arrives is acceptable, but that he goes crazy after having just returned from the threesome with Riona and Quinn is simply ridiculous. if I have to accept it I have to conclude that Mc is mentally ill, and I don't want to play a mentally ill person (even in a game).

and there are several of these scenes that to appreciate the plot you have to completely forget they happened.
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That too. So far there hasn't been any resolution/acknowledgement to the MC standing up Jade in Ep 4 if you go with M&J, so yeah, a few things do just kinda get swept under the rug when you think there could/should be some resolution to them.
 
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felicemastronzo said:
actually, in my opinion, the biggest obstacle to believing everything we see (which also leads to imagining holes where they don't necessarily exist) is that there are entire events that leave no traces.

I often tell it jokingly but that Mc exaggerates when Josy arrives is acceptable, but that he goes crazy after having just returned from the threesome with Riona and Quinn is simply ridiculous. if I have to accept it I have to conclude that Mc is mentally ill, and I don't want to play a mentally ill person (even in a game).

and there are several of these scenes that to appreciate the plot you have to completely forget they happened.
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Yeah, in hind site (and maybe DPC will do a few more conditional dialogues around this whole situation) if the player has the mc fuck everything that moves, he probably shouldn't go all snowflake when Josy turns up, my total DIK summary I posted earlier really highlights what a total fucking hypocrit the MC is in these scenes:

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Here's a little recap of MC's life over the couple of weeks of starting college through to the end of Hell Week. I've gone all geekazoid over this, color coding the Maya interactions (green), the Josy interactions (red) and sex-with-everyone-else (purple) to visually show the weighting of what MC's been up to. I've included most M&J interactions while just including all the other sexual interactions. Its a bit of a read but it's enlightening:

  • He's working at a store and has a crush on Josy
  • He finally gets the courage to talk to her and things take off
  • Goes on a date with Josy, he kisses her, she reciprocates and she feels guilty and tells him she's in another relationship
  • When he leaves she indicates she still likes him, he still likes her too
  • First day at college he meets Maya, she's friendly and offers him a hand after he falls
  • She finds out he's missed orientation and she offers to show him around
  • She opens up a bit and says she wants to join the HOTs to get free tuition and he jokes about it with her
  • He meets Maya in class again and after class he asks if she wants to come along with him to the Tri-Betas, she tells him she has a boyfriend
  • Later that evening he goes to call Josy but she calls first, it's clear they both have crushes on each other but when they start talking about relationships she realizes she's being silly but before she hangs up the MC organizes to meet her on the weekend. She's not sure what she's doing but is looking forward to seeing him.
  • Next day in class Maya tries to get mc to join up to gender studies and the two of them go out to lunch. When the conversation comes round to her parents the mc see that it gets her a little serious. Then they talk about honesty and stuff and MC covers the tab.
  • Then all the dorm room drama unfolds. During this time he gets a double handjob from Quinn and Camila and a blow job from Camila
  • Later he meets up with Derek and Maya and Maya is convinced by Derek to let mc stay with her for the night.
  • They chat a bit and then MC finds out she's got some issues with people giving up on her.
  • Then they get changed for bed, she's a bit bashful and then the mc strips right in front of her, shocking her.
  • He wakes up with a boner, she teases him and then she expects he won't be returning to the room for another night as per the original deal (one night).
  • Later that day Maya finds out MC hasn't left yet, she's surprised when he suggests staying longer but she agrees. When he suggests he stay permanently, she declines the idea but she gives her number to him (in case he gets locked out).
  • That night she invites him to watch a movie with her and she is literally all over him - this is definitely her leading him on (intentionally or not). He reciprocates a bit, nothing too aggressive, and she tells him the boyfriend deal was just to stop guys from being attracted to her and says it's probably best if the MC isn't attracted to her too. He says he is. Then they chat about the movie and go to (separate) beds.
  • They meet up next in gender class and nothing happens.
  • She tells him she'll be back late so don't wait up
  • MC gets a blow job from Riona and has anal sex with Camila
  • MC waits up for Maya, even tries to call her, then eventually goes to sleep
  • Then we get the grinding scene which confuses mc, he thinks it's means something but we now know it’s a HOTs prank
  • Then we have the CUMpetition where mc fucks Quinn, she thinks she's shocking him but he teases her and she likes it, then Derek loses...
  • During the evening mc flirts with Mel and Sarah and lets them know he fucked Quinn
  • Later Maya comes to the MC sheepishly, feeling bad for the grinding, mc offers to help her out, he likes her and he wants to talk about whether what took place earlier meant anything to her
  • Later back at the dorm the MC talks to Maya about the grinding, she's hesitant to talk about it and feels bad about what she did and angry that she was the only one that was asked to do it that way.
  • The MC vaguely warns her about Quinn’s prostitution ring (i.e. he tells her fuck all, he should have told her outright but that's another discussion)
  • She asks that the mc forgive her, and the mc agrees that she was being used so he doesn't think it was her fault (plus seriously who would be complaining about a cute roommate grinding you during sorority pledging...)
  • When pressed she tells the mc she still has some things she doesn't want to tell him about (we know now it was about being a lesbian etc. and it was kinda silly that she couldn't tell him)
  • Then she blows up about her family being disappointed in her
  • After some consoling she initiates a makeout session. She feels conflicted afterwards but definitely drawn to the mc. She tells the mc that she shouldn't be using him like this, he says he wants it. They go to separate beds.
  • He meets Maya in class again and he and Derek laugh about raiding the the preps mansion and toothbrushes
  • That night he chats with Maya before going off to the DIKs party
  • He does some pledge stuff which involves a shot off Sarah’s cooch and then kisses her and then gets a foot job from Sarah, Mel and Riona, then he fucks the shit out of Sarah
  • The next morning he tells Maya he's headed home for a date, then teases her about her being jealous. She obviously feels something as she tries to convince him and herself she isn't jealous.
  • He then goes on his date with Josy, they have a nice night and then she gets upset about long distant relationships and all that. She tells him he's not just with her because she's lonely, she obviously likes him. He goes to leave, she says stay, they sleep in the same bed and he makes a move on her resulting in a blowjob and sex and then he does a runner.
  • When he returns, Maya hugs him, and immediately asks about his date and then asks about the girl, saying she feels a bit awkward. Maya and MC only kissed once before this, but she obviously has feelings for him. Then they talk about how love hurts and shit like that. MC feels they are slowly opening up to each other
  • MC then gets some Chad-cheating evidence for Sage and makes out with her and plans to teach her guitar.
  • MC then flirts with Jill and Bella doing Yoga
  • MC then goes out on a "date" with Bella and ends up making out with her at her home.
  • MC chats some more with Maya in class
  • MC goes to Sage and starts teaching her guitar, starts flirting, they make out and then she gives him a boob job
  • Later MC flirts with Jade after class
  • Next time Maya sees the MC he has been hit by Chad, she's concerned for him. Maya also confides that she has to do a lot of sexual things to get into the HOTs
  • MC offers to help her
  • Maya confides that she's a lesbian and also says it's strange that she has feeling for mc
  • Later Maya and mc kiss on the picnic rug
  • Later MC flirts with Jade at the lunch table
  • In class Maya discusses Derek's attempts towards women
  • Later mc gets a hand job and blow job from Sage
  • Then MC goes to a strip joint where he feels up strippers including fingering Rose and Lily and gets a blow job from Envy and ass fucks her.
  • Next day he talks to Josy who says she's coming to college and wants to stay with him, he tells her he's staying in a dorm with a girl, he also says that while he cares for Josy, it bugs him that she has a boyfriend. She intends to tell him everything once she sees him
  • MC then meets up with Jill in the library and they flirt a bit and she kisses him after the DnG game
  • MC then fucks Mona and Camila in toilet stall
  • MC then flirts more with Jade and gets a foot job and a hand job during class
  • MC then breaks into prep mansion, romances Jill and asks her on a date
  • MC then goes straight to the library and makes out with Bella
  • MC then visits Quinn and has all kinds of sex with Quinn and Riona
  • Then Josey rocks up and MC bales to Sage's like a little bitch and the Internet goes insane because these girls are just monsters - how dare they do this to the MC!!!
  • Then at the HOTs’ mc has all kinds of shower sex with Mel with Sarah enjoying the show
  • Then MC grinds Quinn and has her wank him off into her cunt.
  • Then he makes out with Sage in the pool and gets a hand job followed by a boob job.
  • Then he hangs out naked in the sauna with Sara, Mel, Ashley and Lily where Lily grinds naked on him and he eats Ashley out
  • Then he spies on Heather masturbating
  • Then he starts sexting to Cathy, Nicole and a bunch of other girls
  • Then he hangs out with Sage at the movie night holding hands(!) fingering her and then total mind blowing sex
  • Then Maya comes to talk to MC in genre studies and he gets all weird.
  • Then he goes on a date with Jill and makes out with her at the end
  • Then he fucks Quinn on the roof.
  • Then he confronts Maya and Josey and they say they just want to be friends with him (probably because they are fucking scared of all the venereal diseases he’s carrying). The Internet again goes berserk and wants these girls (particularly Maya, you know because of dishonesty), to be lynched!
  • Then he goes off and Fucks Jade and records it
  • The he meets up with Riona at the prep's mansion and fucks her left, right and center
  • Then he joins Mel, Sarah and Heather in the sauna, gets a blow job from Sarah and Mel and cums on Heather's tits (haha! Sorry...)
  • Then he meets up with Maya and Josey, drinks some champagne and chats. Then when Josy asks for some help, he says, “sorry I’m busy” (spiteful cunt!)
  • Then he makes out with Camila, gets a blow job and then ass fucks her
  • Then he flirts with Jade at the party, grabbing her ass
  • Then he makes out with Lily, gets a blow job and wanks himself off into her cunt
  • Then he fucks Sage
  • Later that night he gets a blow job from Cathy
  • Back at Bella's hose he makes out with Jill
Now after reading all that, is anyone still of the opinion that if they were the mc, they would get all angry at Maya and Josy because they didn't want to continue a romantic relationship with him and preferred to be just friends? The motherfucker has bitches lined up from one side of campus to the other, is he really gonna be bummed out because 2, out of 15 babes he was banging didn't want to continue getting jiggy with him?
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shazba said:
Yeah, in hind site (and maybe DPC will do a few more conditional dialogues around this whole situation) if the player has the mc fuck everything that moves, he probably shouldn't go all snowflake when Josy turns up, my total DIK summary I posted earlier really highlights what a total fucking hypocrit the MC is in these scenes:
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but from that moment on, nothing makes sense in the relationship and dialogues with Maya and Josy

so, as a player, I have to forget what I did, cancel it

but I repeat it is not the only case, it is the most blatant and ridiculous one, it all happens a couple of hours before, Mc goes away with an excuse from Maya, fucks and comes back.
it is not an inconsistency with the third dialogue of the first chapter read backwards on a full moon evening. they are three scenes one after the other: threesome - bisexualization of Maya - breakout and escape
 
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felicemastronzo said:
but from that moment on, nothing makes sense in the relationship and dialogues with Maya and Josy

so, as a player, I have to forget what I did, cancel it

but I repeat it is not the only case, it is the most blatant and ridiculous one, it all happens a couple of hours before, Mc goes away with an excuse from Maya, fucks and comes back.
it is not an inconsistency with the third dialogue of the first chapter read backwards on a full moon evening. they are three scenes one after the other: threesome - bisexualization of Maya - breakout and escape
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I play it as a schizophreniac, he has a different mindset depending on which girl(s) he's with. Like totally respectful and romantic with Jill, and straight up and sphincter with Quinn.
 
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So little old me was thinking that after the fire in Acting Lessons DrPinkCake was done with cruelty BUT THEN THIS HAPPEND

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:cry: what a sic mind
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Fucking Tybalt, just when it was getting good (even if it was the mc's imagination)! But we all know Tybalt had to intervene at this point otherwise the MC would have been full blown fantasizing about having sex with his aunt! :eek:
 
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shazba said:
I play it as a schizophreniac, he has a different mindset depending on which girl(s) he's with. Like totally respectful and romantic with Jill, and straight up and sphincter with Quinn.
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If Jill didn't like how Rusty started acting once DIKs showed up on their date, I hope she never sees me around Quinn. No amount of me acting stupid around Jill can prepare her for THAT
 
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Guys I can't understand those walkthroughs...so plz help me....
During in game which choices I have to make to get all the sex scenes or most of them??the choices with +dik or the choices with -dik.. which one??sometimes I can't choose some choices with girls....why?
 
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You know, I think the best route in this game is to have individual routes and not be with all 5 girls at the same time.

When the MC is lying on the couch in chapter 6 he does not make sense of the problem he has with them for example when he tells Jill that he thinks he is falling in love with her while he is with M & J and especially with Isabella.

Here in this route he only thinks about Derek's problem and how he could help him but beyond some love problem he doesn't mention anything.

I will continue with each route separately as it seems perfect in the sense of love drama with each one

Of course that does not take away the pleasure of being with the side girls
 
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