Those sideplots are woven and scattered into the story at large, and gradually build-up within it. Considering DCP never bothered setting up Zoey in any way prior to it (probably because she was never meant to come back, let's be real), the interlude is at best exposion dump. Just how egregious of a case it is depends entirely on how big of a role Zoey will play.
If the name ends up being Carolyn, it will be proof that DPC lurks around hereCarolyn or Caroline fits her, it definitely beats Megan, what were you thinking
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Exactly this, thank you. I was thinking about that as well. I think the combination of Sage's family twist and the Mc's universal reaction regardless of path and past choices, is what leaves such a bad impression. The twist on its own, though it could have been executed better, would flow more fluidly without the reaction. I guess it's the limitations of the medium. Having multiple diverging branches that have to be tied in to the main story, leaves a lot of space for incosistencies and details that don't make much sense to slip in.
I think DPC has slightly revised the mc's reaction. His first reaction is, "Fuck! Fuck! etc." and then it seems he runs off and hides in the bathroom to consider what shit he's in.Exactly this, thank you. I was thinking about that as well. I think the combination of Sage's family twist and the Mc's universal reaction regardless of path and past choices, is what leaves such a bad impression. The twist on its own, though it could have been executed better, would flow more fluidly without the reaction. I guess it's the limitations of the medium. Having multiple diverging branches that have to be tied in to the main story, leaves a lot of space for incosistencies and details that don't make much sense to slip in.
Of course it's the creator's job and responsibility to prevent that, and I think DPC does it quite well, better than most, far from perfect without a doubt.
Sage didn't mention the sprinkler incident, because she thought it was not a big deal, just a party prank, as can be seen by her reaction at the time. She wasn't present in the confrontation with Tybalt and didn't know Fuckface would be blamed for it. She gives me the impession that she's distanced herself from her family and she's not involved in the day to day matters and conversations at home. I agree the whole thing could have been handled better, a lot better, I'm just offering some explanation to the way things played out.
Anyway, I think we've all established that DPC is more than willing to sacrifice plot elements and logical progression in favor of plot twists and drama. That's his writing style, what can you do.... Oh! I know!
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I agree that the closing of the interlude fixes the closing scene of the eighth chapterI think DPC has slightly revised the mc's reaction. His first reaction is, "Fuck! Fuck! etc." and then it seems he runs off and hides in the bathroom to consider what shit he's in.
And as numerous people have pointed out now, once in the bathroom, his reaction, or at least his demeanour, is based on the potential devastation he's about to face:
1. Worse case, Sage is his girlfriend and he's just found out he has fucked her mom. There are not many ways this can end happily no matter how many people want to have a Jade/Sage threesome.The mc knows he's fucked.
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2. Then there's the potential that while both women aren't going to want to each castrate one of his balls, it's still gonna be uncomfortable.He's either fucked his friend's mom (but this situation means he either never started things with Sage, or he's already ended them).Or his girlfriend's mom has been coming on to him heavily (although he declined her, i.e. the foot job started but it never finished, and by finishing I mean the mc didn't spray cum on the base of some poor slobs desk!).Either way, it's gonna be awkward.
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3. The best case scenario for going into this meeting still isn't good.While Sage isn't his girlfriend, and he never fucked Jade, it does mean that the people they are going to see to ask for help for Maya are a married couple of whom the wife (Jade obviously) has been flashing her pussy at him and coming on to him heavily, and he declined her.Is this the woman you want to see to ask for help? Ya'll know the saying: "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" and scorn Jade the mc did.Fuckface is endangering the mission, he shouldn't have come (well at least he didn't "cum").It's gonna complicate things.
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So while the "Fuck! Fuck! blah blah" carry one at the end of episode 8 was a little dramatic, he's just realised who he's going to see, and the best case is the wife of the couple has been flashing him, making serious innuendo, groping his cock during lunch, and tried to give him a foot job during class.
Fuckface naturally panicked a bit.
Worse case, he's going to die.
I don't think it's much of a danger at all (in any scenario other than Sage's finding out the mc fucked her mom), but we've already had ~4 months to process it. The mc got caught off guard. He had two seconds to process it. He over reacted, it's his modus operandi.
but it's not the first time he's seen Jade again, he's taken a whole semester of classes with her, and he's never seemed shocked. why would Mc think he's jeopardizing the meeting?I don't think it's much of a danger at all (in any scenario other than Sage's finding out the mc fucked her mom), but we've already had ~4 months to process it. The mc got caught off guard. He had two seconds to process it. He over reacted, it's his modus operandi.
But to be fair, if people froze time and then spent 4 months analysing every spur of the moment reaction you made, they might criticize your reactions too.
I think the closing of the interlude is played broadly. These Are the ways the MC can come to the scene;
On the whole, I agree with you. But I don't agree with "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned". If Jade were a single woman, the saying would fit.I think DPC has slightly revised the mc's reaction. His first reaction is, "Fuck! Fuck! etc." and then it seems he runs off and hides in the bathroom to consider what shit he's in.
And as numerous people have pointed out now, once in the bathroom, his reaction, or at least his demeanour, is based on the potential devastation he's about to face:
1. Worse case, Sage is his girlfriend and he's just found out he has fucked her mom. There are not many ways this can end happily no matter how many people want to have a Jade/Sage threesome.The mc knows he's fucked.
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2. Then there's the potential that while both women aren't going to want to each castrate one of his balls, it's still gonna be uncomfortable.He's either fucked his friend's mom (but this situation means he either never started things with Sage, or he's already ended them).Or his girlfriend's mom has been coming on to him heavily (although he declined her, i.e. the foot job started but it never finished, and by finishing I mean the mc didn't spray cum on the base of some poor slobs desk!).Either way, it's gonna be awkward.
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3. The best case scenario for going into this meeting still isn't good.While Sage isn't his girlfriend, and he never fucked Jade, it does mean that the people they are going to see to ask for help for Maya are a married couple of whom the wife (Jade obviously) has been flashing her pussy at him and coming on to him heavily, and he declined her.Is this the woman you want to see to ask for help? Ya'll know the saying: "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" and scorn Jade the mc did.Fuckface is endangering the mission, he shouldn't have come (well at least he didn't "cum").It's gonna complicate things.
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So while the "Fuck! Fuck! blah blah" carry one at the end of episode 8 was a little dramatic, he's just realised who he's going to see, and the best case is the wife of the couple has been flashing him, making serious innuendo, groping his cock during lunch, and tried to give him a foot job during class.
Fuckface naturally panicked a bit.
Worse case, he's going to die.
He's probably not even actually worried about the meeting, he's just realised that the mom of his friend/girlfriend has flirted, flashed, groped, and potentially fucked him. It's a bit to take in, and our little snowflake has a propensity for meltdowns.
Alternatively, the dumbass should just do what Sage suggested. Let Sage and Maya go talk to her parents and then he can go fuck Josy while they wait.
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I think DPC has slightly revised the mc's reaction. His first reaction is, "Fuck! Fuck! etc." and then it seems he runs off and hides in the bathroom to consider what shit he's in.
And as numerous people have pointed out now, once in the bathroom, his reaction, or at least his demeanour, is based on the potential devastation he's about to face:
1. Worse case, Sage is his girlfriend and he's just found out he has fucked her mom. There are not many ways this can end happily no matter how many people want to have a Jade/Sage threesome.The mc knows he's fucked.
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2. Then there's the potential that while both women aren't going to want to each castrate one of his balls, it's still gonna be uncomfortable.He's either fucked his friend's mom (but this situation means he either never started things with Sage, or he's already ended them).Or his girlfriend's mom has been coming on to him heavily (although he declined her, i.e. the foot job started but it never finished, and by finishing I mean the mc didn't spray cum on the base of some poor slobs desk!).Either way, it's gonna be awkward.
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3. The best case scenario for going into this meeting still isn't good.While Sage isn't his girlfriend, and he never fucked Jade, it does mean that the people they are going to see to ask for help for Maya are a married couple of whom the wife (Jade obviously) has been flashing her pussy at him and coming on to him heavily, and he declined her.Is this the woman you want to see to ask for help? Ya'll know the saying: "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" and scorn Jade the mc did.Fuckface is endangering the mission, he shouldn't have come (well at least he didn't "cum").It's gonna complicate things.
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So while the "Fuck! Fuck! blah blah" carry one at the end of episode 8 was a little dramatic, he's just realised who he's going to see, and the best case is the wife of the couple has been flashing him, making serious innuendo, groping his cock during lunch, and tried to give him a foot job during class.
Fuckface naturally panicked a bit.
Worse case, he's going to die.
He's probably not even actually worried about the meeting, he's just realised that the mom of his friend/girlfriend has flirted, flashed, groped, and potentially fucked him. It's a bit to take in, and our little snowflake has a propensity for meltdowns.
Alternatively, the dumbass should just do what Sage suggested. Let Sage and Maya go talk to her parents and then he can go fuck Josy while they wait.
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I don't share this idea that Jade is bitter because MC rejected her at the time of the flirtation (completely different if he had dumped her in chapter 8), there is nothing in the game that indicates this, and especially that MC is aware of this situation and somehow uncomfortable in Jade's presence
I don't care about wording. I know I go for it. Also the 3 some only to fuck Elena. She is really on my radar.
Kind of, but in the upcoming episode, it has be reveled, that the female protagonist has to go into a house fire to rescue and the choice is either MC or Chad that they can save. Not both.
The woman sees MC as a little bitch, either a useful one if MC accepted her avances, or a useless one if MC rejected her.
