VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[The Glorious LIME]

Been a while since I posted in here. I feel like the next episode (10) should be releasing fairly soon. I hope this episode fixes my major issues with the last one, namely revolving around the Zoey character. I remember the last episode (9) tried to shoehorn her into the main story but it didn't end up working for a variety of reasons. For one, she hardly reacts to any events that happen in 9. She obviously still has feelings for the MC but doesn't react at all to anything the MC does.

I also didn't like how Zoey emasculates the MC. Before she arrives the MC is a chad banging Hots and Sluts and everyone else, but once Zoey shows up he turns into a cuck. Wah Wah my ex-gf left me for some ugly tattoo artists, fuck my life!! Get over it bro, you're fucking girls that put Zoey to shame now. Why does the game automatically make the MC into a cuck bitch? No, fuck no.

As the MC I want the option to tell Zoey to fuck off, lmfao. Get out of my life! I don't want to cockblocking me here!

She was in flashbacks, MC even tells Bella about her.

One way or the other, Zoey had and still has an effect over MC. Hell, she took his virginity.

Overall her interaction was alright in ep9. Things to note about Zoey in ep9:
1. The "chad" MC invites her, she doesn't force herself into his life.
2. She is fine with everyone, she calls out Derek a bit for being an idiot, but she's right. She makes a bit fun of Josy, which is also on point due to her infatuation with MC is transparent at this point, route or no route.
3. I enjoyed the Interlude and the fact that it shapes her differently going forward.

So Zoey is alright. In your place I'd be more worried about the MC? He's more retard in every episode.

I mean, he has a DEAD mom. He finally has a chance to know her more with the diary, yet he reads it one page per week. He's more retarded than Derek by now.

The "chad" MC is just a plot armored pussy at this point. Troy and Chad are more chads than him. I mean, ffs, MC chases pussy like a clown. Those 2 take dicks like real men.

 

[Orgitas]

Imagine being so afraid of a girl that even from her presence in the frame you can call up cuckold analogies.

Zoey: Just breathing.
This guy: NO! STOP CUCKING ME, WHAT ARE YOU DOING, GET OUT OF HERE! YOU'RE MAKING ME A CUCK! [panic attack mode]

Sorry, I'm too tired to seriously parse this stream of nonsense.

Sounds like this guy has been watching one too many Andrew Tate videos to be that fearful of a woman.

 

[felicemastronzo]

I mean, he has a DEAD mom. He finally has a chance to know her more with the diary, yet he reads it one page per week. He's more retarded than Derek by now.

Yet that diary is such an interesting read.... Maybe the next chapter will be a freeroam all set in the diary story. at the end of which each player will be reduced to Derek's mental state.

For all we know he might as well have read it all, in the end it was just one diary, the other volumes we don't know who has them

 

[Darkwen]

Since the sixth chapter Jill has had a parody of a story. Perhaps it is better not to have any, like Josy, this seems acceptable to me.

It is the sixth step on the path to grief acceptance: inventing something about another character

You could call Jill's story line more troll then anything. With Josy she brings the fun to balance out Maya's my liffe sucks ass. And has plot points join the gym, wanting to learn to cook and kind of being cheap(yes I called Josy cheap but in the best way). Josy rather spent money to make her body look even better for MC then buy a costume with Maya, loves mc more then Maya. That's lot better then a bipolar doormat banana that's acceptable to me

 

[The Glorious LIME]

Yet that diary is such an interesting read.... Maybe the next chapter will be a freeroam all set in the diary story. at the end of which each player will be reduced to Derek's mental state.

For all we know he might as well have read it all, in the end it was just one diary, the other volumes we don't know who has them

Oh yeah, such a free roam I can see happening and reading how much DPC cried while writing it

 

[Orgitas]

I sure do hope that Fuckface Assman NEVER gets a job in the Forensic field. With his inability to observe, and connect the dots, many bad people will live happily ever after!

 

[ChipLecsap]

Yet that diary is such an interesting read.... Maybe the next chapter will be a freeroam all set in the diary story. at the end of which each player will be reduced to Derek's mental state.

 

[Noonwraith]

Bella, mia bella!

 

[Darkwen]

New mini game book reading with Bella you use her tits as book ends

 

[Lightaces]

did we already get a jade preview for ep 10?

I mean, we've only had like 2 Jade previews for the whole game. A few other things - special renders and desktop wallpapers - but Nora has more previews (at least, the ones I've got in my folder, which is most of them) than Jade.

 

[Geralt From Rivia]

She was in flashbacks, MC even tells Bella about her.

One way or the other, Zoey had and still has an effect over MC. Hell, she took his virginity.

Overall her interaction was alright in ep9. Things to note about Zoey in ep9:
1. The "chad" MC invites her, she doesn't force herself into his life.
2. She is fine with everyone, she calls out Derek a bit for being an idiot, but she's right. She makes a bit fun of Josy, which is also on point due to her infatuation with MC is transparent at this point, route or no route.
3. I enjoyed the Interlude and the fact that it shapes her differently going forward.

So Zoey is alright. In your place I'd be more worried about the MC? He's more retard in every episode.

I mean, he has a DEAD mom. He finally has a chance to know her more with the diary, yet he reads it one page per week. He's more retarded than Derek by now.

The "chad" MC is just a plot armored pussy at this point. Troy and Chad are more chads than him. I mean, ffs, MC chases pussy like a clown. Those 2 take dicks like real men.

I sure do hope that Fuckface Assman NEVER gets a job in the Forensic field. With his inability to observe, and connect the dots, many bad people will live happily ever after!

There's some truth to this about MC, but he's not exactly a pussy, he's just not smart enough. Seriously, dude dates girls and doesn't care about their last names? While everyone in college knows who Sage and Jill are, our Fuckface stands with huge eyes doing the "FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK" moment.
There is even a remark about this in the story, Quinn in Ep. 6 notices that MC doesn't know how to draw logical conclusions and connect two points together.

 

[Noonwraith]

There's some truth to this about MC, but he's not exactly a pussy, he's just not smart enough. Seriously, dude dates girls and doesn't care about their last names? While everyone in college knows who Sage and Jill are, our Fuckface stands with huge eyes doing the "FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK" moment.
There is even a remark about this in the story, Quinn in Ep. 6 notices that MC doesn't know how to draw logical conclusions and connect two points together.

His parents did him dirty with a name like Fuckface Assman. Like, the fuck? How is he supposed be anything but a big-dicked retard himbo with an admittedly uncanny leadership ability?

One thing he does have the ability to observe are the hidden nudie magazines unlocking special renders.

 

[The Glorious LIME]

There is even a remark about this in the story, Quinn in Ep. 6 notices that MC doesn't know how to draw logical conclusions and connect two points together.

Well duh, he's speshul, probably on the spectrum.

His mom probably off'd herself realising what she gave birth to by letting a plumber lay down the pipe.

 

[Darkwen]

There's some truth to this about MC, but he's not exactly a pussy, he's just not smart enough. Seriously, dude dates girls and doesn't care about their last names? While everyone in college knows who Sage and Jill are, our Fuckface stands with huge eyes doing the "FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK" moment.
There is even a remark about this in the story, Quinn in Ep. 6 notices that MC doesn't know how to draw logical conclusions and connect two points together.

Yet he can lead the rebuilding of the dik mansion plan parties but if Jade told MC Sage is her daughter and the next day Sage told MC Jade is her Mother he would be like WTF that one area where DPC writing is pretty weak

 

[Ray_D]

She was in flashbacks, MC even tells Bella about her.

One way or the other, Zoey had and still has an effect over MC. Hell, she took his virginity.

Overall her interaction was alright in ep9. Things to note about Zoey in ep9:
1. The "chad" MC invites her, she doesn't force herself into his life.
2. She is fine with everyone, she calls out Derek a bit for being an idiot, but she's right. She makes a bit fun of Josy, which is also on point due to her infatuation with MC is transparent at this point, route or no route.
3. I enjoyed the Interlude and the fact that it shapes her differently going forward.

So Zoey is alright. In your place I'd be more worried about the MC? He's more retard in every episode.

I mean, he has a DEAD mom. He finally has a chance to know her more with the diary, yet he reads it one page per week. He's more retarded than Derek by now.

The "chad" MC is just a plot armored pussy at this point. Troy and Chad are more chads than him. I mean, ffs, MC chases pussy like a clown. Those 2 take dicks like real men.

that's called a script convention and it's a sign of bad writing. If tremolo was a smart character, the game would probably have been over by season 2.

 

[Ray_D]

There's some truth to this about MC, but he's not exactly a pussy, he's just not smart enough. Seriously, dude dates girls and doesn't care about their last names? While everyone in college knows who Sage and Jill are, our Fuckface stands with huge eyes doing the "FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK" moment.
There is even a remark about this in the story, Quinn in Ep. 6 notices that MC doesn't know how to draw logical conclusions and connect two points together.

yes, that has a name. It's called bad writing and character inconsistencies. it is convenient for the plot to be extended, those four seasons would not be possible if tremolo was a consistent and intelligent character.

 

[Noonwraith]

Tremolo's character is fairly consistent in my eyes: he is shown to be unobservant and not very bright with bit of social retardation and blindness (depending on your choices less so), at the same time he is charismatic and able to 'get his head down and get things done'; neither of those are mutually exclusive. I would say these would be fitting traits for someone raised by a single father who is a construction worker (both are desirable traits for those, especially the hardhats) with a hint of the 'dumbass with a heart of gold' trope.

I am not saying any of this was intentional by DPC.

 

[Alphaeboy]

1. Smoke weed with her in ep.4, then choose to lick her.
2. Stay away from Maya and Josy
3. Make sure you have DIK affinity by the start of ep.6, then choose to help her during rain scene.
4. Hang out with her in ep.7
5. Stay away from Jill not that it's hard with DIK affinity, but still

Should be a no-brainer from here on. Congrats, broccoli girl is yours and you're awesome!

I was curious I beat the game over 10 times, and I was just curious about doing Quinn's route solo for the first time. I might do the restaurant stuff as well.

 

[Houle4338]

All the links are dead for season 1&2 could anyone upload them again plz ?

 

[robrize2169]

with regards to Zoey, i hope that on the others route that she gets back together with the mc and comes to B&R to study Art.
on the other LI routes, i will keep her as just a friend. although i can see her and mc having a 3some with Sage and maybe a 4some with Josy/Maya
of course Bella and Jill routes are going to be exclusive..although, maybe Jill opens up to sharing at some point. especially with Bella since it seems that something naughty happened between them in the past..