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"Supreme example" is fucking right! That one photo, of all the Jill shots, should have been immaculate! Because that one photo stops this from happening:the supreme example : the picnic photo of Jill in chapter six, which marks a very important moment, the first time MC begins to get into trouble about dating other girls, in an organic and believable way, a photo that later comes up at other times. the most important render of Jill's entire story is done poorly.
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I could find hundreds of examples about Jill, but that is too important a scene to be done so mediocrely.
when below MC decides not to go with Tommy just by looking at that picture the only possible reaction is hilarity....
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Like seriously...
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Let me run that again...
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Yeah. The only reason I can think of that explains why the mc looked at that photo and turned down that threesome was because the photo made him sick to his stomach and he went home to hurl for half an hour!